REDSKULL vs. grim

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote please c'mon

[num2son]

I vote for Redskull.

[oDoUoSoKo]

i wish u could jus say that, but u cant, u gotta explain, or use the votin guideline stencil

[Vernakular]

damn my verse for this sucked, ur actually pretty decent redskull

i shuda just flowed but fuck it

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote

[Classic]

Do the math, homie, i'll come at you ,infinity like pi
question my rath, phony, your raps are lookin cracked n dry
(Decent opener here.)
Why the fuck you dickride so much on battles you never won
I'll address you the way i want bitch, like God did to his own son
(Decent punch ere.)
Your style's like a baby, simple at sight but impossible to understand
in lamence terms, your bad, there,...easier to comprehend?
(Half-rhyme here. Decent punch.)
Reppin rap like you got skill, your just a raw cut of meat
Your styles 'old', your trynna get with cows sayin WHERES THE 'BEEF'?
(i been havin a beef with redskull and im sayin old like that bitch who did the wendeys commercial)
(Okay, don't explain your wordplay. Kind of ruins it when people have to stop and read it. Also messes up the flow of your verse. If anything put a "*" beside it and explain it at the end of your verse. But explaining wordplay just isn't recommended. Good punch.)
Lemme tell you something, your rhymes are like roach repellent
Says its good but, it dont work at all, as soon as you test-it
(Another half-rhyme. Half-decent punch.)
"Redskull", what you reppin-now
That your indian name cuz u dont own a 'NATIVE'to Brooklyn style
(No rhyme here. Weak bar. Not a real punchline.)
Actin a child, but says your 20 years old,
your rappin is vile, first sign of danger you ready to fold
(The beginning line continued off style, but that messed the flow up. Finished it with rest of bar. Good punch.)

Last time i checked you were Dawn, and then doc death
Now this MARVEL bitch is bot to recieve a whole in the chest
(Good attempt at a personal here. Played concept though. Decent punch.)
What are you doing kid actin like you the shit
With hot lines like "how many rhymes gonna come outta ya fat lips"
(Good personal here. Probably best bar I've read so far. Good punchline.)

Spittin 'babylonic' raps, like a bum you dont make 'cents'
your verses are monotone crap, and you rockin false pretense
(Decent closer.)



u must be scratchin ya neck the way u feenin tyrone
to battle paul bunyon, ur a 2 foot high gnome
(Good opener.)
ill fukin knock ya shit out, genius wild wit his tits out
if its to hot in hell vercrackula then nigga get out
(Half-decent punch here. Maybe you're a transvestite? Or I missed out on a peronsal?)
ill spit a quick bout, to prove im brooklyn bound all day
u tease the steez of the gator, dont say shit when u get mauled, k?
(Decent punch here.)
ur balls gay chiropracts aint fuckin wit ya broke back
tony montana? damn ma, now i KNOW u smoke crack
(Good punch.)
choke cats wit coat racks
u may say, nigga nigga nigga like u one, but ur no black
(Good punch here.)
the doc is back, and vernaks the first, euthenasia him
suckin off the fukin judges what a way to win
(Good punch here.)
dont worry bout ghost writers
cuz ima give u a real reason to quit spittin, u cloned white bitch
"im white i cant rap im quittin" x6
ima stick u full of penasilin if ya rhymes' sick
(1st line missed. You feeding messed it up. And you semi-forced a rhyme "x6". Half-decent punch here.)
all u do is complain and give excuses whats wrong?
i was nitemare, than doc, galac, but i was never dawn
(Good comeback, killed his previous personal. Decent punch.)
higlite ur punchlines, but i come wit haymakers
i rep the cannibals now, and we slay these gaybakers
(Good punch.)
wit they muffin stuffin (lol) u fukin wit infamy
ur tonys product bitch ill chop u up and sell u 10 a key
(Decent closer.)

Vote - RedSkull.
Harder punches, more consistent, better aimed.
Elevate some Vernakular.
I'm out.
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[T-ribe]

Yo Redskull's shit hit harder, but Vanak shit flowed a bit better
Based on punch material I'll give it to Skull
Some of Vanak's shit seem'd overthought

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote

[J-Man]

every thing was equal but on the punchs im gonna say that redskull had the upper hand in this one but both gr8 rhymes

[oDoUoSoKo]

if ben counts that...then its a ko, whats up ben? otherwise keep votin just incase..thx j

[oDoUoSoKo]

omg, im gone a week and ya still havent fukin voted!!

[Vernakular]

fuckin give it a ko i dont give a shit this bitch is weak catch me ony my game kid and lets talk FO REAL

[oDoUoSoKo]

listen lay off, cuz u kno he isnt weak, and i havent said nothin cuz im not pissed wit u anymore, but he did kill u twice, so take it easy, and every one vote

[Vernakular]

truth to that statement dusk....he did kill me but at transition points. For example the first battle we had i chose a different style to battle him with and i didn't give a fuck. So to shed a little insight on were my opinion lies, it wasn't my A game homie trust me, all of that was forced. Anyways good battle doc your actually a good emcee, keep ur head up

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