quik question

[Vernakular]

i would go with what spoken said

R1 xxxxxxxxxxxxR2
R1xxxxxxxxxxxxR2
R3xR3xxxxxxxR4

[denaturat]

that third line you get there kinda leaves it haning, with some beat left over in the next bar, it's assymetrical, although I've heard rappers using a single line to bridge to the next set of rhymes. not sure how that works

[GuardianOne]

A tap is measured as

"JoHN GILpin
reHEARsed for anothers respONSE"
- Dimeter - Two Tap

Points where it is stressed...

[denaturat]

can you examplain that please, I'm not following.

[VillainousV]

After you get the basics down, the most imprtant thing is to make ya shit bomb hard. It's a known fact that not every line has to ATTACK somethin or somebody at the end of it. As long as it takes a reader more than .5 seconds to comprehend that tha fuck you just said, you know youre doin good. Another thing: dont try to make your rhyme too deep, cuz if you're not deep-minded, then it just comes out as shit. SERIOUSLY. No offense to anyone, but those who know nothing talk about nothing.

Some good advice: read book. read the news. watch some shit on the discovery channel that you've never seen before. etc. That kind of knowledge is the shit that impresses mutherfuckers the most, especially when it's linked to something their familiar with. THATS when your mind gets deeper.

School House Rock keeps that saying true: KNOWLEDGE IS POWER!!!