1 round
no limit to the lines
first to 5 votes
3-0 is a ko
ill spit it first
drew dei$el vs. Vernakular---WINS
1 round
no limit to the lines
first to 5 votes
3-0 is a ko
ill spit it first
im workin on my verse now. so whoever get's done first get's done first.
YOUR STYLES CHEAP, YOUR WORTHLESS, STEP UP FRONTIN LIKE A HERO/ THIS VERSE IS FOR ALL YA'LL WACK CATS TRYNNA BE MARTYRS FOR ZEROS/ YOUR CRYSTAL CLEAR FLOW, IS AS FRAGILE AS CHINA GLASS/ GO LAST, YOU WON'T WIN, YOUR PLATE IS BROKEN/ YOUR PLAIN AS FUCKIN DAY, WORSHIP BLING WHEN YOU RHYME/ FRONTIN AS AN MC, BUT YOUR REALLY ACT LIKE A MIME/ YOUR GETTIN FUCKED FOR FREE, YOUR CAREER AINT GOIN FAR/ AND ITS PLAIN TO SEE, THAT YOU STRIVE TO BE A PORN STAR/ YOU RHYME WEAK, YOUR BLEEK WITH WORDS THAT ARE USELESS/ IN FACT YOU COULD RECORD A WHOLE ALBUM FULL OF EXCUSES/ TRUE THIS, I'LL MAKE SURE BY THE END OF THIS YOU SEE BLACK/ NIGHT IS SCARY SON, JUST SO AS NEBRASKA IS WACK/ YOU COULN'T COME OFF LOGICALLY, IF YOU HAD GZA DOIN THE MATH/ IT'S SIMPLE AS THAT, SON YOU SUCK, GO HUG YOUR '50' CD'S, THEY'LL DO YOU BETTER THAN BATTLIN ME/ YOUR STRAIGHT 'SADDLIN' G'S TO SHOW THAT YOUR HOOD RATTLIN'S WEAK/ WHEN U SPIT YOU SPEAK, FIRST LESSON THAT SEEPS/ I'LL SET YOU AS AN EXAMPLE OF EMCEE THATS CLICHE/ MORE SO THAN THE ONES IMMORTAL CALLED GAY/ YOU CANT PHASE SHIT, I'D SHOW YOU RHYMES THAT'LL SHAKE YOU LOSE/ LOST THIS BATTLE KID, PUT YOUR LOGIC TO USE/
YOUR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUCKY I HAD TO RE-DO THIS SHIT DUDE
Last edited by Vernakular; 04-26-2006 at 10:30 PM.
The first rule of battle, is know thy enemy,
You volunteered yourself to my hands, like you played for Tennessee
You call yourself vernakular, but people don’t talk like you,
I asked around if they liked your rhymes, and all they said was “who?
You spelled my name wrong, that shit might make me angry,
Ill throw ya like I was the hulk, cuz to him you’re nothing weighty
Im comin for ya son, like an out of control diesel,
You better go hide in your hole, like you was a weasel,
Ill redesign your spine, like my art was architecture,
Leaving ya speechless, like a mute in a lecture
There’s no mercy when you’re play with me,
Its like I got an Uzi, and u a b.b.
Lyrically, you’re in my vortex,
Ill bust you up, like bandicoot did to cortex,
Split ya in half, like moses did the red sea,
Ill send ya on a trip, to see G-O-D
Hittin ya so fast, you won’t have time to parry,
Leave ya talking out ya ass, like ya name was Jim Carrey
Decent Shit, I Wudda Posted A Lot Better Of A Verse But My Comp Fucked Up And I Couldnt Copy It
Let's get some votes people!
DIE$EL carved up!!
wordplay-DIE$EL
vocab-DIE$EL
puches-DIE$EL
flow-DIE$EL
DIE$EL came in fearless, was hard hitting with his punches, was direct to the target, eyes on the prize...
good battle by both, Vern: i think you need to work on your punches, make them more direct and hard hitting, also your written structure in a battle makes a big difference.
peace
KIA KAHA
Dude, this is structured like a kicked-up scrabble game.Originally Posted by Vernakular
It's a giant paragraph.
Re-structure it like a real verse, bar-by-bar so I can toss a vote in here.
ok, so right now it's 1-0 in favor of me
come on we need more votes!!
honestly, i cant even read this especially with the font
votes please
Vernakular
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vocab-1
puches-2
flow-1
Diesel
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vocab-1
puches-1
flow-2
Vernakular's verse hit harder, Diesel represented Disneyland with that verse.
Vote vernakular
alrighty it's tied at 1-1
Vote Now
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