a true hip hop verse

[Jimmy Focus]

Spoken word that comes straight from tha young osiris/
Crashin ya hard drive worse than a computer virus/
Every MC out there now just has to face it/
That its time to go back, thats right, Back 2 Basics/
Devine multiple line rhyme I design all the time/
Me and my words combine alot like lemon-lime/
Prime time hip hop now ya all in for trouble/
Times that by 5 then the price appears double/
History story tellin its a blast from the past/
Evry though comes to me quik just like tha flash/
And if you dont like the fate i've given you, tough, just accept it
Evrything around is becoming way too heptic/
Now just one more thing before I have to go/
Before I drop the mic and decide to end this flow/
Its just that this aint the end its only tha beginning/
So dont even think its to early for me to be winning/

[Jimmy Focus]

this is dope verse aint it

[crastuf]

yes it's dope. we rhyme alike. we should collab online, it'll be the first of it's kind. it'll be like kweli & mos def. I'll post something

[GuardianOne]

Nice flow, you can improve on the content though, keep improving-like to check more of your posts.