Da Dishonourable Don [put the hit out thread]

[bloodyhookz]

It's been a long time coming, I've been here for a minute/
diminish the image, of all the smokey mirrors and gimics/
the industry in fear of a menace/
I came up out these cold streets, so if I say "fuck the police", sincerely I meant it/
I'm on the way to the top, sunny days without a cloud in sight/
try and stop my shine, I'll cock the nine and blow you out ya lights/
I'm all about the people, pussy, paper and powerful music/
my rhyme is crack, for the fiend who is prowd to abuse it/
fall back, it's my time, divine intervention, when I bless the session/
I'm the first and foremost, no second guessin'/
rep the trench to the death, destined for this cheddar homie/
peep the skill, and yet alone, I keep it real and never phony/
Bambino iller than most, supposively they rate this/
haters keep grillin' up close, but only see the greatness/
my poetry is graded A plus, I'm nice with these rhymes/
it's 'bout time I take what's rightfully mine!

HOOK

[IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME COMING], on the rise to the top/
[IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME COMING], keep my eyes on the gwop/
I do this for the team, kinda like Jordan in the dying seconds/
I feel the pain of the ghetto, man, that's why I'm reppin'/ x2

track titled LONG TIME COMING, feat. Bambino, prod. by Sludem for TTT Productions, to git a sneak peek at this currently unfinished banger, click, www.myspace.com/sludembeats , enjoy mothafuckas, 1!

[Shoalin Buddah Monk]

All of these are preety much FIRE.

[bloodyhookz]

respect yo, it's been a while since somebody checked my thread out, these heads out here are sleeping!

[Bigot Hitman]

It's been a long time coming, I've been here for a minute/
diminish the image, of all the smokey mirrors and gimics/
the industry in fear of a menace/
I came up out these cold streets, so if I say "fuck the police", sincerely I meant it/
I'm on the way to the top, sunny days without a cloud in sight/
try and stop my shine, I'll cock the nine and blow you out ya lights/
I'm all about the people, pussy, paper and powerful music/
my rhyme is crack, for the fiend who is prowd to abuse it/
fall back, it's my time, divine intervention, when I bless the session/
I'm the first and foremost, no second guessin'/
rep the trench to the death, destined for this cheddar homie/
peep the skill, and yet alone, I keep it real and never phony/
Bambino iller than most, supposively they rate this/
haters keep grillin' up close, but only see the greatness/
my poetry is graded A plus, I'm nice with these rhymes/
it's 'bout time I take what's rightfully mine!

HOOK

[IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME COMING], on the rise to the top/
[IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME COMING], keep my eyes on the gwop/
I do this for the team, kinda like Jordan in the dying seconds/
I feel the pain of the ghetto, man, that's why I'm reppin'/ x2

track titled LONG TIME COMING, feat. Bambino, prod. by Sludem for TTT Productions, to git a sneak peek at this currently unfinished banger, click, www.myspace.com/sludembeats , enjoy mothafuckas, 1!

Those two white lines is my fav. on this shit, THis shit was written well for the most part flow wise, I've seen u do better multies, an come wit fresher concepts though. I'd give this a 7.7/10 for u, Keep on postin the shit though u remind me of a light weight scarface. Do u care if i drop a verse on this thread?

[bloodyhookz]

respect on the comment once again, the only reason why it seems that there's less multies is 'cause the track is slow tempo, I don't know if you heard the track yet but I posted the link underneath the verse, and as for droppin' a verse in my thread, I would appreciate it if it's only feed, this thread is strictly for tracks I've laced already, but if you wanna drop a verse in one of my threads, I got a grimey one that peeps slept on, it's somewhere in the first 3 pages, it's called RIVERS OF BLOOD, I need peeps to drop some grimey shit in there, thx!

[bloodyhookz]

HOOK

it's the Calabrian Connect, Tony Gaz and Beanz/
duct tape you in a bed full of gasoline/
so fuck you fake rappers, your styles is puss/
if y'all pussy, then dont' beat around the bush/ x2

my verse

I....splatter these maggots, a ravenous savage/
erratically grabbin' the mack and brappppp, you faggots leak battery acid/
that can be bad for you habits, casualties happen, it's tragic/
and half of these rappers is actin', faculty strapped wit da wratchets/
Africans, Latins, Italians, wildin' and trapped in the violence/
found in a shackled environment, pound on you cats that be smilin'/
ounces of crack by the thousands, housings be packed full of scoundrels/
sumoan slap and throw the gat to the back of your tonsils/
Italiano smacks, git smacked wit da back of la mano/
wannabee soprano actin' rappers git jacked in Toronto/
killas wit villainous styles surround you for millions of miles/
Sicilian style, take you out, spare your children and spouse/
kill a mason, amazingly pistols blazin'/
and placing a laserbeam to the face of a pig and lace him/
defacing a klan member for racial discrimination/
razors leave his hands severed wit facial disfigurations!

track titled, DON'T BEAT AROUND THE BUSH, feat. Bambino and D-V-OUS Kavorkian aka Tony Gazzo, prod. by Crucial the Guillotine

to peep this banger, click on, www.myspace.com/dvouskavorkiantttegwest

[bloodyhookz]

verse 1

life is too short to waste over liquor, weed, hoes and cash/
I know the math, when I was younger goin' halves, blowin' sacks/
didn't know the facts, until my soldiers passed, then my older gramps/
nearly made the toaster clap, holdin' emotions back/
couldn't fold in half, and let depression/
control the wrath of my agression, devil lookin' for a soul to grab/
I need a spliff every half hour/
the hate's bitter in my heart, it tastes mad sour/
write rhymes releasin' tension, guide mines from each direction east to west end/
to see my bredrens eatin' even ain't the least to mention/
I seek perfection in the knowledge of God recieving blessins/
when He ain't respondin' my calls, I leave a message/
my dogs locked in the yard, East Detention/
West Detention, Donn, Panatang, wherever y'all recieved your sentence/
I know it's oftenly hard when you in need of friendship/
feelin' alone in that zone in deep depression, but yo.....

Hook

Life is too short to have sorrow/
you may be here today and gone tomorrow/ [voice sample]

verse 2

The Lord be my shepherd and restoreth my soul/
bless you with a verse that's purer than gold, record the scrolls/
in the booth, speak the truth until I'm forced in that hole/
and even then you'll feel the source of my soul through the course of my flows/
cold corpses git towed, laid in a shallow grave/
consequences paid for those raised in these violent days/
I found a way to calculate dough with no discussion/
through calibrating heavyweight flows on dope productions/
yo I gotta make it, contemplatin' power moves, conquer nations/
concentration be the main key, constant elevation/
long awaited, peeps know this shit's hot kid/
TTT where true underground hiphop lives/
I won't give into the propagandas, my block's bananas/
where they chizzle rock and sizzle shots from poppin' hammers, cops with scanners/
....wanna lock us in slammers for our ockward manners/
but we stay choppin' grams up to make our pockets fatter...feel me?!?

Hook

Life is too short to have sorrow/
you may be here today and gone tomorrow/X4

Track titled Life Is Too Short feat. Bambino, prod. by Sludem, soon to be released on the Bambino album, watch out for that, 1

[Sleep Sinatra]

damn homie i heard ur audio an shit b4 i even seen dis yo keep doin ya thang an hit me on the pm gotta ask u bout a collabo possibly

[Bigot Hitman]

verse 1

life is too short to waste over liquor, weed, hoes and cash/
I know the math, when I was younger goin' halves, blowin' sacks/
didn't know the facts, until my soldiers passed, then my older gramps/
nearly made the toaster clap, holdin' emotions back/
couldn't fold in half, and let depression/
control the wrath of my agression, devil lookin' for a soul to grab/
I need a spliff every half hour/
the hate's bitter in my heart, it tastes mad sour/
write rhymes releasin' tension, guide mines from each direction east to west end/
to see my bredrens eatin' even ain't the least to mention/
I seek perfection in the knowledge of God recieving blessins/
when He ain't respondin' my calls, I leave a message/
my dogs locked in the yard, East Detention/
West Detention, Donn, Panatang, wherever y'all recieved your sentence/
I know it's oftenly hard when you in need of friendship/
feelin' alone in that zone in deep depression, but yo.....

Hook

Life is too short to have sorrow/
you may be here today and gone tomorrow/ [voice sample]

verse 2

The Lord be my shepherd and restoreth my soul/
bless you with a verse that's purer than gold, record the scrolls/
in the booth, speak the truth until I'm forced in that hole/
and even then you'll feel the source of my soul through the course of my flows/
cold corpses git towed, laid in a shallow grave/
consequences paid for those raised in these violent days/
I found a way to calculate dough with no discussion/
through calibrating heavyweight flows on dope productions/
yo I gotta make it, contemplatin' power moves, conquer nations/
concentration be the main key, constant elevation/
long awaited, peeps know this shit's hot kid/
TTT where true underground hiphop lives/
I won't give into the propagandas, my block's bananas/
where they chizzle rock and sizzle shots from poppin' hammers, cops with scanners/
....wanna lock us in slammers for our ockward manners/
but we stay choppin' grams up to make our pockets fatter...feel me?!?

Hook

Life is too short to have sorrow/
you may be here today and gone tomorrow/X4

Track titled Life Is Too Short feat. Bambino, prod. by Sludem, soon to be released on the Bambino album, watch out for that, 1

You call up too short in oakland an askem' to hop this track wit you

[bloodyhookz]

word, sounds good, I always was a fan growing up to Too Short, made my mackin' game more tight, lol, real talk!!!

[Bigot Hitman]

Since i'm 16 i didn't grow up listen'in to'em but my brother gave that "get in where u fit in" "players" and sum other one wit a song wit ice cube called a bitch is bitch. Entertainment wise, he's one of the best mc's imo wit all his albums goin atleast gold.

[Mantra]

Wow Hookz i didn't know u had a thread killer verses in here, i'll critique some soon!

[bloodyhookz]

good lookin' out, and yeah, this thread is basically where I store my writtens for tracks that are already made, and note to the biters, my shit's COPYWRITTEN!!!

I've done heard already about some lil faggot who comes out here and takes peoples pieces and claims it's his, word to all artists, git your shit copywritten, PEACE!!!

[bloodyhookz]

Since i'm 16 i didn't grow up listen'in to'em but my brother gave that "get in where u fit in" "players" and sum other one wit a song wit ice cube called a bitch is bitch. Entertainment wise, he's one of the best mc's imo wit all his albums goin atleast gold.

well, I have like 12 years on top of you and I can tell you this much, you have a good taste in music, 'cause alot of people won't give Too Short his proper due, but what I really love about Short is, he was the first dude to say he was going to retire [just so he can triple his sales] and came back into the game like WTF!?!, you can see where rappers like JayZ took that concept from, Too Short is the original pimp/gangsta rapper from the Bay area who molded a whole generation of rappers, once again, bigups to Too Short!!

[Bigot Hitman]

I listen to all generes of rap for real, South shit like UGK, devin the dude, scarface, 8ball & mjg, older outkast, ludacris, the clipse, west coast shit like too short, ice cube, a couple of game songs, little bita pac, sum eazy e, then my east shit, like the Wu, Grand puba, monsta island czars, nas, d-block, a couple of 50 songs like fully loaded clip an ski mask way, older mobb deep, older kool g rap, big l, early Common albums, prince po, canibal ox, redman ect.

Matter fact the only type of rap i don't like is shit like pharcyde, kanye, an tribe called quest, where its alittle too soft, an' the rappers kinda preach too much or just sound bad. Plus i don't listen to mainstream rappers that just throw punchlines or talk about pussy diamonds an weed unless they do it in different ways like too short an redman do.

Just thought i'd brag alittle about my music to whoever cares.