sum more shit, izit betta thn b4? opinions y'all!

[S-Man]

yo, im sick of yo bullshit lies/
keep em cummin n get hospitalised/
y'all make me irate, filled wit hate/
run fo' tha hills, or end up in a crate/
y'all be frontin', givin me a shove/
ya think ya hard? leave it out bruv!/
ya show off ya microscopic gats, u aint for real/
coz ya see, my guns are 2 big 2 conceal/
packin gats under each arm, i bring da harm/
ma shotties deafening, like yo bitches rape alarm/

[crastuf]

could be better

[GuardianOne]

It was simple, i suppose you were busting? You need to be more creative though

Peace

[Stringer Bell]

Yo man, that shit's wack, sorry. You rappin bout the same damn BS.. guns, I'll kill you. Shit's been played out.

Personally, I'm astonished that a Wu fan could even come up with some shit like that. Get with it, Wu-Tang is that real shit.