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[Da Problem Child]

ryhmes designed to spit fiction none of it's reality
cats is real sweet and i eat mc's with a cavity
come out the mindstate with a perfect strategy
got dynamite preasents for all these ryhme peasents
smif and wessuns have them fake cats undressin
hip hop cops feminine mad cause i'm hurtin the truth
reciting lines out my head got me murken the booth
make niggas top flip back like a convertible roof
stacking spanish payso's diamonds size of leggos
the rythm leave ya blind.....
have ya waving ya hand across ya face like tony yayo
come straight off the top unlike rappers in the basement
dreams are what i'm chasen ya position a replacement
time freezes when lyrics are part of my statement
unpause the time and my goons resume like cobras
looney boasters that run up on ya with rude odors
and stack more paper than a math school folder
only 14,but do gangsta shit with shanks and grips
wankstas trip see ya boy in tangerine whips
hotter than 4 cettels hotter than mo devils
lyrical content leave thugs softer than rose petals

I'm OUt

[the funky drunk]

yeah , feelin this for real

flow was consistant and on point till the end , vocab was nice

solid drop man , was feelin this , i can really hear this one over a beat

[Da Problem Child]

yeah , feelin this for real

flow was consistant and on point till the end , vocab was nice

solid drop man , was feelin this , i can really hear this one over a beat

Thanks homie.Appreciate the positive feed

[Da Problem Child]

Bump for folks who aint see it,and if ya already read it leave some feed.Don't sleep

[Dirty Knowledge]

It was nice, I liked the style it had a rhythm to it except a few lines but overall the verse was sweet.

[Da Problem Child]

It was nice, I liked the style it had a rhythm to it except a few lines but overall the verse was sweet.

Thanks for the feedback dawg.I appreciate it

[Ghost In The 'Lac]

yes you got nice RHYMES, but, can you flip the structure of your verse so it aint so basic like one line, then the next ryhming the last word, the the next etc. It just gets repetitve. You gotta shake the shit up a little, you HAVE got the words in your vocab.

Hope you find that constuctive, props on the verse, solid.

[Da Problem Child]

yes you got nice RHYMES, but, can you flip the structure of your verse so it aint so basic like one line, then the next ryhming the last word, the the next etc. It just gets repetitve. You gotta shake the shit up a little, you HAVE got the words in your vocab.

Hope you find that constuctive, props on the verse, solid.

I feel what you saying homie.thanks for the advice

[Sirkulayshun]

nice verse like the flo, structure and the vocab.....nuthin really 2 criticize
keep it up
peace

[Da Problem Child]

^^^^Thanks for the feedback dawg

[White_Mouse]

Yes sir i was feelin this. nice vocab, rhyme structure (however i'd like to see more multis) and flow.
I'm glad that your down south and not just a crunk
LOL, your avtually a Good emcee.
if u have time peep my lyric thread @
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=18338

aight hope to see more of this stuff SOON!!!!!!

[Da Problem Child]

Yes sir i was feelin this. nice vocab, rhyme structure (however i'd like to see more multis) and flow.
I'm glad that your down south and not just a crunk
LOL, your avtually a Good emcee.
if u have time peep my lyric thread @
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=18338

aight hope to see more of this stuff SOON!!!!!!

I'm just trying to let peeps know on the net and in real life that the hold south aint on that Crunk,and laffy taffy shit.Some of us can spit fareal come off the top of the head fareal.

[White_Mouse]

Yes sirrrr and u just proved that lol

[Da Problem Child]

Yes sirrrr and u just proved that lol

hahaha thanks homie,but i think Chamillionaire let niggas know first.lol

[Da Problem Child]

Aight Bump for more feedback