sorry i cant count white and dangerous vote, he is too white to vote on battles, sorry
sorry i cant count white and dangerous vote, he is too white to vote on battles, sorry
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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hahaha just fucken around, white and dangerous is my boy, thanks for the feedback, and yes, the score is 3-2 in favor of vern, keep voting out there
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
both of you just wasted valuable time arguing 'bout shit all, who cares who votes, as long as they give a good reason why homie won, then there shouldn't be a problem, it's not like Vern told me to come vote on his battle and choose him, I came into here on my own account, and I honestly think that Vern took this battle!
My vote= Vern
no dickriding what so ever, just my opinion, so if you want to take my vote away, by any means go ahead, but I think that shit's whack, 'cause I just battled Dusk, we're on the same little team, but that doesn't mean I know dude, I'll battle anyone anytime, win or lose, I just don't give a shit!
Vernakular- Style was too monotext. ALL it was was just the same rhyme scheme throughout the whole verse. Overall though, the lines were good. Your style is more geared towards 4-8 bar battles. Not full 16+ ones. 1 yo.
Hollywood- Yo you explain your punchlines too much. A good rhyme should have 2 meanings beneath it. One for the "general people" (your everyday person whose JUST reading it), and One for the "hardcore" hip-hop people who dig deeper to find the hidden meanings in shit. Don't STAY deep though, because people generally don't like reading (at first glance) a ton of abstract shit that it looks like only YOU know what it means. 1 yo.
My Vote: Vernakular. word is bond.
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it would be 5-2, but, i dont really know how holly feels about dons vote, however it would be 4-2 without
peace bofe of you
just close it already, u earned the win, just stop the hate, peace
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
lol, no hating left cousin, good battle thoOriginally Posted by hollywoodrealty
stay up
YODDLE!!!
glad to see all this drama is over.
I like how they was all fighting like "Yo your verse sucked, you aren't an emcee, blah blah blah.." and then in the end it's like "good battle, you deserved it"
hollywood been spittin the truth since back then.........................i got ya back homie and i no u got the front
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wow, man both of you need to stop the arguin and stuff. if your gonna be attackin and arguin like that do it in PMs or something, or start a thread called noone read this wack crap cuz it took me like 8 times longer then it should have to get through this thread. i had to read like 15 posts from the two of you bickerin. jeeze, anyways i guess its over and i dont need to vote so ill just shut up and hopefully you two will too.
through songs i write, my wrongs i right
if you wanna fight the power, get the power to fight
i think i need one more
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