Ok, coolOriginally Posted by Thai Gear
Thai Gear, and i aint gonna bother breaking it down coz J-Man didnt really have any punches whereas Thai was consistent, basically a much better verse from Thai
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iight straight up here i was honestly just hoping dat he wudnt reply in time so i would just go through, not cos he wud b afraid or ne shit just forget or somin u know just get luckly but oh well
if that's your outlook^then please quit rhyming now, you woulda just got smashed in the next round
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glad ur a reserve m8 thumbs up
I just hope you understand what I'm sayin, maybe you ain't that tight with the lyrics but fuck sellin yaself short. If you don't have any confidence you won't ever be any good at this shit. peace
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J-Man -
Ight Listen Here, Listen Close, Listen Clear,
J-Man About To Destroy This Boi, Thai Gear,
(WTF? There's no real punch here. Bad opener.)
Your Gonna Learn That I Have No Fear,
While Masturbating He Sticks His Finger Up His Rear.
(Good shit, you stepped it up!)
I'm A Fighting Emcee, i Don't Need A Bye,
Once This is Over Y'all Gonna See Why.
(...No punch here. Just braggin'.)
I've Been Here Before But Ain't Never Won,
But Compotition in This Battle? There Ain't None.
(Again, no real punch here.)
Yeh i Know Ive Been Away For Some Time,
But This Just Comes Nature, Never Missing A Rhyme,
(Ditto.)
As For You You Ain't Worth a A Dime,
Check Me Out Later On N Use A Line Of Mine.
(A punch, but not hard hitting at all. Half-decent at best.)
Three Days I Got To Spit My Shit,
To Pick You Apart Bit By Bit,
(Same as above.)
Yeh These Lines Aint All Dat,
But To Beat Your Lines I Do With General Chat.
(Same.)
So Hit Me Back With In A Day Or Two,
Check Out My Bars n Read Em Through,
(No punch.)
But Don't Argue With Tha Shit I've Said,
Cos You Know It's The Truth, Nigga Nod Yo Head.
(No punch.)
Thai Gear -
yo, why continue wasting ur time as of now u shouldn't rap
you're sloppier then joe for ur rhymes you should use reynolds wrap
(Good wordplay here. Nice opener.)
as venom zaps the pile of crap that u call a verse
while my words hurt like bullets after the triggers burst
(1st line was a punch, but the 2nd wasn't a real one. Decent.)
your life's inverse death is what ur staring at
the back of ur head is what my gat's getting snapped
(Kind of confusing here. Not sure what to make of this.)
blood splatter on walls after your mind is blown
in this competition lines matter and mines r gold
(Okay, 2nd line braggish. Good shit nonetheless.)
its like basketball one on 1 me versus J-man
but its not really game cuz J keeps getting J-ade man
(Nice wordplay here. Good punch.)
its more like practice cuz you aint a real challenge
i rather go against a plastic bottle i'm sure it has more talents
(Good shit. Keep it up.)
u say ur the of master rap yet i haven't seen 1 decent bar
u may call me a newbie but yet shine like the most recent star
(2nd line braggin'. Brings it down. Step it up. Mediocre bar.)
bright when u see make a wish cuz i'm shooting
lead based metal flying faster then the army's recruiting
(Bad. There's no punch here.)
while ur behind ur screen catching a man caused erections
for your illness the doc prescribes a few 9mm injections
(Not a good bar here.)
after reading ur diseased bars most get eye infections
n don't forget i'm from new york where even 5 O need protection
(2nd line = bragging again. Decent closer.)
Vote - Thai Gear.
J-man, just a weak verse for a battle. When you battle, DISS YOUR OPPONENT. Don't talk about yourself. Step it up man.
Thai-Gear, consistent punches, and bragging needs to be cut back.
It feels like Thai just spit enough to win this battle.
But if he wants the champioship, gonna have to come harder then this.
Good shit overall, stay up.
Classic - "Disciple of Ares"
its pretty amusing that in this comp. half the judges are in the same "netcee crew" as half the contestants.
really, but do u think jman won? its not a d-ridin netcee crew, cuz im expectin to lose my battle so..w/e
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thx for the feedback on the battle to the judges
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Originally Posted by Dusk
no. im just saying....
what that the BOM is tighter than virgin pussy? lol nah man, I don't think anybody in the crew is frontin for anyone. I'm personally gonna shoot straight witcha whether we boys or not. Everyone here knows I got an honest oppinion. I'ma place a vote for whoever wins, period, 4reel
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battles over, j-man out, Thai Gear advances to the 2nd round
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