VOTES NEEDED------->woz t Vs. TUCO (Battle Championship)

[Thai Gear]

tuco is out as well isn't he i mean his day to reply has pasted

[Visionz]

^I wish he'd dropped a verse, its really crazy how many verses I've written for tournament comps for some no-shows

[Robert]

ah he aint out, ive given him extra time coz he wasnt even supposed to drop coz woz t was a no show

[Visionz]

good, I'd rather lose in a dope battle then win by default. peace

[Robert]

well it mite be a default victory coz he was on before i pm'd him and he still didnt drop a verse so unless shit doesnt happen soon its your win

[Robert]

TUCO dq'd as of now, sorry man, but you had plenty of time to get a verse in, Eric advances by default
peace

[hollywoodrealty]

wow that is truely wack, taco would of lost anyways

[Visionz]

Judges could I get some feedback on my verse on a 1 to 10 scale? I'd still like to see what yall think of the verse even if theres nothings to compare it to. thanks, peace

[Robert]

Tuco here is the fat albert of rap/
with every step he takes his buttcheeks clap/
(Alright opener)

But I'm the Unseen One/
I make necks snap back like collapsed rat traps/
(i like the wordplay here)

You can trash the Delorean, there ain't no turning back/
I pack trunks with bodies to dump/
I'm sending this Florida Gator back to his swamp/
(average personal)

He can't romp on the same streets I stomp/
You better stick with them pretty boys with the rainbows to flaunt/
(the flow,wordplay i like, but this section aint hitting IMO)

You'd be an Ace to stay in ya place/
Go catch the Real World to see how them Austin boys will rearrange ya face/
(ok personal, streched 2nd line)

You an amateur focused on the Bass, could never grasp my Treble/
You could could never touch me like a finger to its own elbow/
(like the 2nd line, good punch but the "rhyme" is a little lazy)

You're gettin beat red like Elmo, this Big Bird is about to get Snuffed/
I'm a Dragon mothafucka, this kid is just Puff/
(lol, get "beat red like elmo" nice punch but compare the line length of the first and second lines, you didnt need that big bird part for this to hit, nice tho)

I'm takin you back in time cause your ass is a Kiddie/
You still bitch whether it's T or T-diddy/
(average punches)

My rhymes stick like chewed Good & Plenties/
Your style is like your soul, hollow and empty/
(alright)
Theivin crook with the eyes that're shifty/

I'm placin a citzen's arrest for spittin wack shit that my ears detest/
(lol, like this line)
Lyrical conquest to see whose best, these're headshots, no help from the vest/
(wordplay throughout this section is good, nice work)

You pumped up from the Fakeness like Jenna James' Breast/
With One sideways shot I leave Two holes in ya chest/
(dope finish, good punch

overall i'd give this 7/10, the lines for me were a little streched at times but there were some dope punches in there plus some solid wordplay to make up for it
peace Eric

[Visionz]

thanks for the feedback homie, respect

anything else from the other judges?

[VernakuLa]

i aint a judge, but ill break ur shit down homie


Tuco here is the fat albert of rap, with every step he takes his buttcheeks clap
But I'm the Unseen One, I make necks snap back like collapsed rat traps

aight...nice opener, feelin the multies, however kinda streched

You can trash the Delorean, there ain't no turning back
I pack trunks with bodies to dump, I'm sending this Florida Gator back to his swamp

NOT FEELINN THE SECOND LINE lol (i love the gators) naw its good, hard to catch the flow, real choppy, but decent personal

He can't romp on the same streets I stomp,
You better stick with them pretty boys with the rainbows to flaunt

lol, decent, just expand your disses with the faggot shit yo, played line

You'd be an Ace to stay in ya place,
Go catch the Real World to see how them Austin boys will rearrange ya face

I get it, ur from austin, real world, nice punch

You an amateur foucused on the Bass, could never grasp my Treble
You could could never touch me like a finger to its own elbow

Nice multies dood, semi played line, but sounds nice when read

You're gettin beat red like Elmo, this Big Bird is about to get Snuffed
I'm a Dragon mothafucka, this kid is just Puff

Nice wordplay dood, feelin this bar

I'm takin you back in time cause your ass is a Kiddie
You still bitch whether it's T or T-diddy

trynna play his name like diddy, not effective, wasnt feelin this one

My rhymes stick like chewed Good & Plenties
Your style is like your soul, hollow and empty

Ouch, nice personal

Theivin crook with the eyes that're shifty,
I'm placin a citzen's arrest for spittin wack shit that my ears detest
Lyrical conquest to see whose best, these're headshots, no help from the vest

Decent wordplay, braggish kinda, wasnt feelin this one

You pumped up from the Fakeness like Jenna James' Breast, With One sideways shot I leave Two holes in ya chest

Silicon? Decent closer

overall

7 out of 10

dont take this the wrong way, this is just my honest opinion

peace

[Visionz]

its all good homie the feedback's appreciated. peace

[maestro wooz]

who the fuck is this woz character