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    Sounds like Gza.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Default JChavez "Underground Lyricist" Thread

    My entrance is dramatic like Willis Reed in Game 7
    at MSG after missing Game 6 due to injury
    This 1 man Squad is more Def than Erick Sermon
    ‘Brown Eye Bandit’ “Hitting Switches,” “Dungeon
    Master” determined
    Verbal flames Holocaust burnin’ like Germans
    Heat exothermic, bolt-action automatic firing slugs
    with more hiss than asthmatics
    Physical wounds, mental injuries traumatic
    I get on skyscraper towers to view panoramics
    Leap in battlefields like quantum electrodynamics
    Fists stick, conform to grills like Tempur-Pedics
    C’mon G, my Unit is “Magic Stick,” 10 honeydips on
    it cause it’s ankle twist thick, cannon spits more sea
    men than warships, testicles highpower tactics
    Tool RAMs like memory chips, stabs like ice picks,
    rips coochie lips like blade tips
    Not anorexic when I flow vomit like “Exorcist”
    Underground lyricist, Hell on Earth serving short bit
    Hitting guards hard, turning 3 ft. into “Longest Yard”
    ‘Wrecking’ violent like inmates and Paul Crewe
    “Mean Machine” QB with more street credibility than
    “Lackawanna Blues”
    Bombs 8.4 on richter when striking at dawn
    Piranha spawn “Ready for War” like Drag-on
    Ruff Ryder, volt provider like voltage dividers
    11,000 lbs. more propellant force than solid fueled
    rocket boosters
    Material Stress Optic Coefficient like Brewster
    Bred, trained to fight till death like roosters
    Pit-bull like Livingston Bramble, daggers cutting up
    more than Frankie Randall
    Boxing “Surgeon” defacing grills like vandals
    Squared-circle chaos can’t be handled like college
    football recruiting scandals
    Heater spits hate, trigger on bake, shots “Ricochet”
    like Earl Talbot Blake
    Nittany Lion like Paul Posluszny at Penn State
    Tiger like Hanshin without playing pro baseball in
    Tokyo
    Making ballers call a T.O. like Drew Bledsoe
    Nerves shook, on medication, fighting depression
    Corner white towel throwin’, life foregoin,’ attempting
    suicide like Terrell Owens
    Oral oil tanker infernos, spoken sparks in kilos
    Vocal heat melts snow like spring break in Acapulco
    I “Bash Brothers” like McGwire & Canseco, families
    Mourning with Alonzo
    Fists swarm emcees like fleas mounting killer bees
    After renal biopsy diagnosis is Hepatitis C, liver swell
    along with kidney disease
    Nuggets getting busted like Deneitra Ham did Darvin’s
    with wine bottles
    Ass kicking imparted to mental not ethics and politics
    like Aristotle
    Damaged jaw ligaments, torn cartilage to mandibles
    It’s “Boom Boom” Mancini when I Jack like ‘Cap’ Rooney
    Grim Reaper dialed, death became Swift like Stromile

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    Default JChavez "Iron Man" Thread

    Bilingual Flow Ruler, Iron Man like Robert Downey Jr.
    Bomb Detonator, Jack like Tatum when I Raider
    Lyrical Terry Nichols, nuclear explosive flows dropping
    like shockwave trickles
    Exploding FBI buildings, bombarding Oklahoma City
    bombings
    Rocking fatigues ready for war, pockets full of ammo
    River of venomous flows, spark infernos
    Shooting rampage rhymes, massacre lines, murdering
    large number of people at a time like Columbine
    Homicidal intent, crack atmosphere, breaking speed of
    sound when getting violent
    Militant brutal like North Korea’s government
    Attacking like ‘instant message’ worms
    Blasting more than Iraqi militia gunman in law firms
    “Unleashed” da “Fearless,” metaphorical Jet Li
    Verbal Bruce Lee, vocal martial art is legendary
    Among hardest-hitting heavyweights in history
    Gerry Gooney devastating left hooks to bodies
    Marine regiment M-198 howitzer delivery
    Fires shells like 155 mm artillery kill instantly
    More lives claimed than 1965 war in Vietnam
    Advanced war-fighter like Ghost Recon
    Long range sniper aims, swiss cheese brains
    Toppling tentacles, overthrowing temples
    To me nothing's identical, I turn one’s voice to an
    instrumental
    I’m Tyrosine caps unbreakable when I attack like
    wolf packs
    Serial killer with .44 caliber like David Berkowitz
    Lyrically acidic, microphones melt soon as I spit it
    Put “Panic in the Streets” like Richard Widmark
    Plague barbs straight thru hearts like bubonic darts
    Rob Zombie “Devil Reject” clapping y’all pussies like
    group sex
    Not gay when I put hammer to grills, pulling trigger,
    leaving pubics in mouths like Ehren McGhehey
    Able to take more punishment than “Jackass” stunts
    After conditioning mind/body in solitude like monks
    Vocal spray like Mace, acid reflux all over one’s face
    Rip uvula, tongue and tonsils out thru nostrils
    Tidal wave H20 leaves Titanic ship decks wet
    Lyrical flow “Sea Wolves” like Gregory Peck
    Brick fists out of control like anabolic steroids in
    Dominican Republic
    When Cali Headbanger steps to mic more flames
    get thrown than Vegas firefighters in Los Angeles
    bar room fights
    Chins get rocked like Len Bias’ death did NBA
    Rotting remains decay after I strike solid targets
    like x-rays
    Lion pride fighter causing crouching tigers
    Pit-bull dead bolt lock, tearing pectoral muscles
    like Andre Lott
    Blast at foes’ wakes, loosen heads from torsos
    like promotional stickers on porno tapes
    Lively snubbing’em like Team USA did Allen Ivy
    I’m that Bolivian assassin with dark shades that
    put a shotgun blast to Al Pacino’s back
    Battlecat troop in ground attack causing punks
    to Canadian overpass collapse

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    Default JChavez "Platoon Commander" Thread

    Moral Mangler, Platoon Commander
    Battalion's backbone, unit’s team leader
    Wu Tang Corp. Junior Member
    Cali Headbanger, Santa Ana Hillside Strangler
    Committing merciless manslaughters
    Brothers and fathers get waste like sewer water
    Wives, sisters, cousins get deflowered
    Crews, clicks, clans get Jensen Ackles devoured
    Behemoth on offensive line like Bubba Paris
    Blazing speed of S.F. 49er’s TE Vernon Davis
    Dwayne Wade “Flash” of emcee, 4.0 in 40
    Arthur Lee prophetic psychedelic visionary
    Leaving punks in garbage dumps after smoking’em
    with James’ Blunt
    Hijacking United 93 planes with box cutters
    Stretching, breaking pilots’ necks like faulty rubbers
    Boiling brain addicted to madness makes me an ogre
    like Lochness
    Wicked intentions causing nefarious actions
    Pillaged Satan’s home, fed furnace with demons’ foam
    Vicious memories is fate of my destiny
    Objectives bloodthirsty, revealed in my prophecy
    War of Titanomachy like Greek mythology
    Flames of Hades burning fervently
    Wicked warrior, death stands behind doors
    Monstrous metaphors roar like beasts in wars
    Winged monster troll tearing apart souls
    Collapse, retire Twin Towers like Ralph Sampson
    and Hakeem Olajuwon
    After my heavens drop onomatopoetic bombs
    Warhead supplements in descent to torment da
    discontent until they repent
    Young Buck, I’ll Mobb Deep, Mash Out’ya Possee,
    heist Lloyd’s Bank, leave’ya with only 50 Cent
    I go after emcees not 16 yr. old boys like Florida’s
    Rep. Mark Foley
    This ain’t “Stop The Violence Movement” but y’all
    headed for “Self-Destruction”
    Deduction implies blade cutting asses in fractions
    Tormenting spiritual like ionizing radiation
    Diseased lungs spitting infections
    Rock “Shield” like Forest Whitaker, slugs spark then
    blister
    Blast’ya and’ya gay twin brother, put y’all under dirt
    like Redman’s “Dare Is A Darkside” album cover
    Leaving’ya critically conditioned in some New Jersey
    hospital like Cassidy
    Truck driver in Amish school armed heavily
    Trial convicted hostile, killing execution style
    Exterminating rhymes massacring minds
    Anarchic blaze, visible disorder lost in maze
    Black winged creature in chaotic noise
    Real McCoy deploys bombardment toys to search and
    destroy
    Mortal terror spread, crest riding winds of war
    Come to da fore kamikaze hardcore like Japanese in
    Pearl Harbor shores
    Bring gonorrhea hysteria to grimy areas like Bulgaria
    Sharp darts cutting plates like Mariano Rivera
    Hung jury before they rendered verdict
    Heart skipped, blood drips after’ya vocal chords got
    ripped from’ya throat by my ice pick

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    Default JChavez "Latin King" Thread

    With great force I conquer viciously
    Unleashing wrath and fury, reclaiming my territory
    Mexican maximum security brutality is epitome of
    my cruelty
    West Coast Latin King in criminal activity
    Thug gentleman, rocking steel-toe Timberlands
    Four legged beast, razor fangs of fire
    Carrier of wicked current like conducting wire
    Devils’ eve, witches exchanging energies
    Black warlocks concentrate predicting prophecies
    Rebellin’ demons committing serious crimes like
    felons
    Lyrical Nikolay Valuev, fists size of melons
    Terrorist tactics suppress all like an impartial Ku
    Klux Klan
    LT Giant, big man with hyperactive pituitary gland
    Middle-linebacker attacker like Brian Urlacher
    Causing pain in Arizona after stripping ball from
    E. James and winning game
    We can battle for car titles or pay checks
    Via Internet or over phone, call me collect
    1-800-Big-Dog-Bites, after barking on mics
    Hot dull gray lead burst through iron pipes
    Pablo Escobar on gun tower, busting cartridge
    power after drug deal turned sour
    Gaston Glock pops 4 in Cell Block like Chris Rock
    Twisting back flat caps or Fedora hats
    Bullet heat dissolves blocks of government cheese
    At 10,000 Celsius degrees it melts coldest emcees
    Silent death delivery, hydrogen cyanide germs infect
    and destroy enemies
    Bomb tactics, rip shit with ballistic characteristics
    Projects’ prophet underground like black markets
    Tyrannical Rex with overbite of abominables
    Rhyme animal with a mechanical mandible
    Stampeding like million broncos clashing in Congo
    My system is loco, more disordered than Waco
    Malicious voodoo verse is malevolent like Kennedy
    family curse
    Gatling gun inspects necks before it wrecks
    Slugs buzzing by nuggets like swarms of insects
    Infrared lasers, beams sharper than cut-throat razors
    Firearms get squeezed, slugs lung-diseased wheeze
    Emcees get blown like trees in front of authorities
    Dawn of Dead like Ruby Ridge clash with Feds
    Tissue plundered, throbbing flesh in rhythm of thunder
    Great Revolt blasphemy in light of ravaging bolts
    Still alive corpses lie in street, spitting blood not heat

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    dopeness Kid!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Default JChavez "Lyrical Criminal" Thread

    Assassin military rank of a Japanese shogun
    Charles Bronson bare-knuckled in octagon
    Belladonna plants poisonous when I spit venom
    Toxins contaminate like saliva of serpents
    Voice verification expands in enhancement
    Inflamed vocal box slinging verbal cocaine
    Military trained in strategy of war games
    Insane, biological gasses eating my brain
    Leaving common sense diseased like a venereal
    Madman murderous serial material
    Lyrical criminal leaving cerebrals critical
    Al-Qaeda suicide bomber on Kurt Cobain mission
    Devoid solicitation of Bin Laden’s admiration
    Sharp violent vocal attack with a spiked bat
    Vicious flow like RZA’s verse in Wu Gambino
    Kodiak Killer, Grizzly on Mike like Miller
    Hit and decapitate da light and heavy-weight
    Wolverine, one swing makes cut clean
    Severed head at crime scene from guillotine
    Spit solar system sun heat, y’all be riding a beam
    Verbal cancer chemotherapy radiation machine
    Skin scheme and spleen soften like C.R.E.A.M.
    And cash don’t rule everything around me
    Mexican Menace here II finish off Society
    Catastrophe iron age axe strokes deadly
    Tragedy is when I murder emcees savagely
    Calamity forces me to bury’em under my apartment
    basement like John Wayne Gacy
    I intercept soundwaves, hijack frequencies with raps
    that validate my street credibility
    This Jon Voight “Champ” has no contenders
    Last challenger surrendered like my first competitor
    Feral gun barrel busting searing imperils
    I Hammer MCs like Stanley Kirk Burrell
    Leaving title holder in one’s camp with teeth loose-
    fitting like parachute pants
    I slam rhymes like John Cena did Kevin Federline
    Julia Stiles “Wicked” tongue verbally assaults
    Bodies chalk outlined under ground in burial vaults
    Demolition ammunition has no contrition
    I broke mold for holds that cause asphyxiation
    Choke with potency of scorpion stings to throats
    Burner trigger finger eager like aroused beavers
    Sprinter slug cleavers sprint ten meters faster than
    Gail Devers
    My ‘Hacksaw’ is thuggin’ like Jim Dugan
    Neck snapping, head hacking, dome piece hanging
    Worse came to worse and my gat burst first
    MCs dispersed in hearse, curse they couldn’t reverse

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    Default JChavez "Hitman for Hire" Thread

    Axe master berserker without remorse
    Frigid demon existence, extreme with my cold force
    Hitman for hire, cocked back and ready to fire
    Captive rhymes enslaved frame of mind
    Pulled out burner and became my Masta’s Killa like
    Elgin Turner
    Big Willie like Nelson, strength of Samson
    Blowing up spots like Michael Jordan at Madison
    Square Garden
    Rippin’ Cal like Ripken, where’s Christopher Darden?
    I’m terrorizing foes like O.J. in white Broncos
    Spray lyrical H20 like ancient glacial flows
    Drop verses like Oprah Winfrey does dress sizes
    S.W.A.T. glock grip Mike like Alstott
    Fire-breathing snot box like NHL mascots
    Hip-hop rocked is “Wild” like Bill Hickok
    Libretto New York Yankees payroll outta control
    Lyrical dart leader lightning bolt striking
    Cut devil’s horns, put’em on my dome like Vikings
    Wicked rhymes in my possession not marijuana
    like Nick Nolte’s son
    Snatcher of bun crumbs bigger than Pun
    Hard metal is Ozzy Osbourne heavy
    I light up my targets like shooting galleries
    Slug sparks illuminates joints like star clusters in
    giant galaxies
    Codified practices of martial arts
    Infrared vision darts snap skulls in pitch dark
    Sharp psyche tearing minds apart
    Flames like sulfur rain falling down on one’s reign
    “Black Cloud” violent tendencies like Eddie Spears
    When I ride through qlipothic spheres
    Ionic matter explodes in atmosphere
    Been to West Virginia and climbed Mountaineer
    Lyrical radical on montane pinnacle
    Verbal analytical dropped like wilted testicles
    Vocab weaponry more rugged than Injin Chi
    Butchery is way I Webster Slaughter emcees
    Dislocate jaws not tendons like Curt Schilling
    Plasma fluid spilling from cult mercy killings
    Rip through chests with hollow-point talent tips
    Kill ice grills, fronts get cracked and chilled
    Shields thawed out in my fiery battlefield
    Foes hand over flows like Israel did Jericho
    Warfare boar never battles fatigue like cold wars
    Russian tank “Beast” feasts on deceased
    Emcees squashed like T.I./Lil’ Flip feeble beef

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    Default JChavez "Poetic Pegasus" Thread

    Poetic Pegasus dropping thunderbolts on Mt. Olympus
    Lyrical lunacy, madman bars of poetry
    Empting my anger like bullets in a chamber
    Blastin’ like Colin Ferguson as an assassin
    Characters hammered with impact of wire matrix printers
    Heat microwaves heads like Adolf Hitler
    First name is Jesus, “Got Game” like Shuttlesworth
    Infrared image of Earth reveals my girth
    Beast in womb, tore my mother apart at birth
    Incisors roamed, gnawed at my father's bones
    Peep (yards after catch) YAC
    This WR killed stats with an armless quarterback
    Artificial reality, sentient machine futuristic
    Neo gravity-defying in Shawn Marion’s “Matrix”
    Transmit lyrics with unorthodox military tactics
    Pterodactyl wingspan, flying reptile scouring lands
    Demonic pit-bull with acidic saliva
    Solid phase body liquid in Fluid Phase Equilibria
    Caveman feral, plutonium-239 radioactive material
    Foes better rock bio-weapons protective clothes
    Or their composition to saw dust I’ll recompose
    Sword carves bone after sharpening on stone
    My impatient weapon spits every second
    Doomsday extremist, killing legions for no reason
    Read minds after blowing brains on my L.A. Times
    Instilled visions tear mental pictures to pieces
    Skulls like divorces get split in half by my armed forces
    Headless men corpses like Sleepy Hollow horses
    For right purses nurses will be closing MCs hearses
    Emcees run like strokes do in minority families
    I’ve made their game passion wane like Tiki Barber
    They’ve Dash like Dame without Shawn Carter
    Future’s hopeless, more Bleak than Memphis
    High volts ignite eyeballs until you see electric current
    residue in front of you
    This Arsonist’s fire won’t expire even after I retire
    I smoke a sentence in form of pestilence
    Inconsistency of text makes me complex
    Animal instincts, Mexican Aztec cannibalistic
    DNA code sensors reject my MC eating genetics
    Above average frenetic verbal semantics
    Murdering fanatic unable to kick habit
    Oral kinetic sick like diabetics in paramedics
    My fatal vocals is reason why there’s no light at end
    of tunnels
    Twisted minds with distorted rhymes
    Exfoliated one’s face with an abrasive phrase

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    Default Mind Fury

    Lyrical Phenom, droppin’ NATO-type bombs
    Mafiaso Teflon Dons running like marathons
    Forest Whitaker ‘Ghost Dog’ contract killer
    Gloria Gaynor wouldn’t “survive” this retainer
    Vampire in disguise, before’ya focus I dematerialize
    Cellar dwellers after I murder like Michael Myers
    Sweating flames, irrepressible like Cali wildfires
    Mind fury burner smolders like hell in summer
    Air gunner mugger discharging from H2 Hummer
    Demented demons ejaculating demonic semen
    Master of black magic, living with maggots
    Filthy stray roaches decay in ash trays
    Hair like spider legs and milk white eyes
    Burn bodies in caskets where they lie so they won’t
    attract flies
    Schindler’s List lost before names were crossed
    Talking to ouija board for predictions of holocaust
    Nostradamus etymology ministries
    Prognosticator, foretelling future of prophecies
    Radiation sickness recorded on photography
    Anxiously I battle with criminal insanity
    Angry entity possessed me with kinetic energies
    Cursed as a child, circulated in evil societies
    Cataclysmic anomaly will mutate upright families
    Visions verbally explicitly since I don’t use profanity
    Sonic assault, noisy rap like Public Enemy
    Military army ants field artillery
    Hex ninja sword making c-section incisions
    Age of extermination, gruesome display of victims
    Eyewitnesses testimonies of skeletonized bodies
    I communicate with dead thru 10 LCD screens
    After killing’em on Thursday before Jason does on
    Friday the Thirteen
    Kyle Turley madman inclined to snap
    Front-line soldier with 10 Macs ready for combat
    Send squad to attack and get their wigs blown back
    Sharp martial arts, darts bark before mauling hearts
    Locking joints after striking vulnerable points
    Vesta asteriod smash-landing to change terrain
    Iron sulfur rain, fire burns in hall of fame for slain
    Flickering serpents swallowed by flames
    Leviathan haunts in burning hell veins
    “Mean Joe” Greene, XFL on amphetamines
    Football squall, Miami-FIU Orange Bowl brawls
    ECW powerbombin’ foes like Bam Bam Bigelow
    Meadow Soprano’s boyfriend said y’all were homos
    Cocksuckers, Vito Spatafore faggot rappers
    Commercial rap is toilet paper, glorified by assholes
    Deceased souls with Egyptian Book of Dead scrolls
    Domes get vise-gripped, slit with scissor kicks
    Hat trick after decapitating three with hockey stick
    Lorena Bobbit ice picks leave fatal wounds to nuggets
    like Trevor Berbick
    Just painted a grizzly picture with blood’ya dripped
    Wack emcees’ raps I feed’em to rats with peanut butter
    and cheese Whiz on their backs

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    Default Distressed Terrorist

    It’s an air raid, tell Beyonce to “Ring the Alarm”
    Walking time-bomb with grenade glued to my palm
    Physical phenomenon like chemical bonds
    Daredevil with pitch forked shovel, can’ya dig it?
    Distressed terrorist with an extensive hit list
    Attacking like rioting airborne pilots in cockpits
    Hordes will feel the wrath of my sword
    My tongue cuts minds with the depth of razors
    Pain is source of pleasure like Pinhead in Hellraiser
    Creeds will bleed as their doctrines plead
    Venomous spits, poisonous like mandibles of 1,000
    centipedes
    Lucifer evildoer, Abyss wrecker, Hell defector
    Hungarian black metal Tormentor
    Conan Barbarian, Arnold Schwarzenneger Destroyer
    Heist souls only to splice then slice
    Considered by many to be equal of anti-Christ
    One-man military allied despised by battle cries
    I leave’ya rubble trapped after blowing up’ya high rise
    Burning bodies so they won’t attract flies
    Still smelling people in downtown New York
    Sunni Islamist berserk, Al-Qaeda terror network
    Cali representin’ flame throwin’ like Bartolo Colon
    Mexican-American brawler like Bobby Chacon
    Multiple equation abrasions to one’s dictation
    Chokehold heads with this Temple of Darts thread
    Blazing down cities with a ton of molten lead
    Dig graves to re-submerge the dead
    I’ll choke heroin to show it who’s dope
    “Black tar” aim when I “smack” neck veins
    Bunk Federal Government secret-service men
    My burner sprayin’ is disintegratin’ them
    Fragmentin’ melons with mass destruction weapons
    Premeditated target killin’, Verbal Assassin
    Murderin’ euphemism, “Lyrics of Fury” like Rakim
    Ya camp’s champ title I stripped like weigh-ins
    I’m dunkin’ like LeBron James on Tim Duncan
    P.E. bum rushin’ stages like Kanye West
    Chest plates with no vests get opened like pap tests
    Y’all don’t want to stir war inside me
    I’m black hearted, adversary demon of sodomy
    Eternal vile Trinity, purified fire in purgatory
    I’ll smoke an emcee on the set like Brandon Lee
    They be gasping for air, waking up in mortuary
    Breath of death blows out their candles
    Scandal souls ramble in shambles with vandals
    Torn apart by unheard bladed words
    Enough skeletons to fill thousand closets
    In caskets wearing bruises like blankets

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    vocab was nice.... overall not too bad.... maybe spend a bit more time organizing your lines... concepts were good, but could have been worded better in a few spots... definatelly has mad potential tho... not a bad read.. a bit more time and focus could put your drops on another level fo sho... keep droppin homie...pce

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    Thanks for the advice Headbanger. It's sincerely appreciated! Time is my problem - working full time, then getting to the sex spot where wifey is waiting butt naked, wanting you to blow that back up like Bob Backlund. In regards to organizing lines and better wording - can you give me an example and/or recommendation?

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    Default Verbal Fiend

    Verbal fiend, cutting regimes with my vocal guillotine
    Destroying asses like androids with hemorrhoids
    It’s the extreme Wolverine without the X-Men team
    Animal phlegm surging from mucous membranes
    Underworld dweller, arise and tyrannize
    Memorex couldn’t memorize my impious enterprise
    Heathens in battlefields with pagan shields
    Armed conflicts like Sino-Soviet Splits
    Belligerent asymmetric warfare
    Method of execution is electrocution thru electrodes like
    the electric chair
    Boiling sulphur waves lick mundane surface
    Emcees are “Ready to Die” like Christopher Wallace
    I Spit Fire like WWII single-seat fighters
    Scythe Hack Writer, Target Man Striker
    Kamikaze like Nagasaki Japs on crack in combat
    Scud missiles illuminate heads like Mars’ ice crystals
    I pose a bigger danger than aging shuttle parts
    Dangerous barks, darts heavy-bodied like bull sharks
    Faceless men bear masks of fear
    Tears appear as gerbils ram rectums like Richard Gere
    Gynecology spears thru genitals like pap smears
    My flows imply death is near like Grim Reaper shadows
    They’re deadlier than Tennessee rodeos inside tornadoes
    My chemical punches appear in Bebe Kids’ bunches
    After one blow my foe’s memory becomes John Leguizamo
    in “King of the Jungle” slow
    It’s no shocker when I say I’m off my John Rocker
    Nervous system is autonomic like beta-blockers
    Mental psychosis conveyed by ingestion like tuberculosis
    Contaminated taboo, distorted voodoo views
    Volatility turmoil caused the cerebral debauchery
    I lost my mind during a bungy jump on LSD
    I’m sick like David Berkowitz reading ancient bible scripts
    “Son of Sam” terrorizing from Cali to New York City
    Heavy onerous thoughts drift to me
    Cyber analog through virtual reality
    I hear howls from sable dimensions
    Have visions of Armageddon final destruction collisions
    Isometric trainin’, limbs hyper-flexion
    Blade precision, break-through technology like that
    Gillette Fusion
    Saber tooth, enormous hunting-knife-sized teeth
    One’s beef I’ll cut like village Arab chiefs do thieves
    Roast it, hand it to emcee like a sandwich from Arby’s
    We can take it to the streets like immigration rallies
    I’ll put bullets to navels, slash’em like elevator cables
    Cut abdomen, place liver and pancreas under my bed
    Open mug with slugs, implant clip to one’s forehead
    Turtle-shell shield is adorned with emcees’ dissection
    Contamination of a thousand nations
    Colonization like formation of Thrombosis infections
    Millions killed like North Dakota pelican chicks
    Bones preserved in mass grave tar pits

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    Default Damage like John Holmes with a Trojan Pack

    Lyrical Bio-chemist, chemical property of metal
    Pure substance like particles in molecules
    Exerted pressure like blood on walls of red liquid vessels
    Dome produces cerebrospinal fluid like cerebral ventricles
    Hydrogen gas lifting objects like dirigibles
    American built, all-weather tactical fighter like F-15 Eagles
    Mark V cannon armament in the bomb rack compartment
    Sound barriers getting “defected condoms” broken
    Written or spoken, I turn-styles without tokens
    I combat with raps, oral attack causes damage like John
    Holmes with a Trojan pack
    “2045: Radical Man” like Prince
    That year I’ll still be Younger than Vince
    I’m a Helios Titan, this bloodsport’s top draft pick
    Flying over the Gaza Strip with explosive traveling kits
    Bringin’ Payne like Allen, after droppin’ more verbal ammo
    than Tuskegee Airmen
    I spit zootoxin venom, more coarse than denim
    Substance cancer-causin’ like human carcinogen
    High levels of toxic gas when I manufacture chemical vapor
    like inhalers
    FEMA should test me not Mississippi trailers
    Rotation motion of my liquid swords collide like rotational
    spectroscopy
    Weather analyticity, flow energy, heat thrusts electricity
    Voltage metric knots at 50,000 megawatts
    I feed one’s intelligence with Gamma-radiation rays
    Electromagnetic waves will raze one’s DNA
    I do harm without warning signals like burglary alarms
    Bulova watch time-bomb blowing off arms
    Explosive rhymes damaging all cells in minds
    Extracting ass cheek bones out of spines
    I cross-section blades thru human heads like MRI’s
    This Ghost Dog, Way of the Mexican Samurai
    1-man attack like Forest Whitaker at Vargo’s mansion
    I’m forceful blastin’ causin’ childbirth contractions
    My dark sentence inspires atmosphere to dense
    This verbal quake causes the world to rotate
    Galactic arraignment, dark matter violent
    Blowing up germs with ionized gas fury to burn
    Infected darts leave hearts diseased like Gerald Levert
    Heart attack lurked soon as the Grim Reaper smirked
    Knee “jerks” beneath dirt after getting murked
    Heckle me and I’ll go on a rampage like “Seinfeld’s” Michael
    Richards at the Laugh Factory
    It will not be racial, only physical and brutal when I rub your
    facial muscles
    I’m a Gene Hackman/Dan Aykroyd “Loose Cannon”
    I’ll walk into a Santa Ana courthouse rocking Woody Wood
    Pecker pajamas like Michael Jackson
    I TOO PACK like Shakur when I come back for revenge like
    Charleston Heston in “Ben-Hur”
    Grab your shield cause I don’t miss from the field
    21 for 22 from the floor like Bill Walton in that 1973 NCAA
    Tournament vs Memphis
    It’s the Giant Gonzales Big Man on campus
    Volleying tennis, heads not balls like Pete Sampras
    If we battle for property deeds there will be a lot of homeless
    More than in the downtown of the city of Atlanta
    The kid is ruthless like Tony Montana when he left Havana
    I’m fast to react, leaving coochies infected like Vagistat
    My flows are like dwarf hookers with yeast infections
    No one can ejaculate on’em cause they can’t get an erection
    On the mic emcees fail like that Women’s right-to-vote bill
    in Kuwait
    I wet their capes like Robert Blake does soul mates
    Splashing their brains on passports at John Wayne Airport
    I’ll use their girlfriend’s pubic hair follicles for their stitches
    Limbs will be abridged like a midget’s digits
    Body parts fragmented like hard drive partition defects
    Necks with “Exit Wounds” like Steven Seagal and DMX
    Slug shampoo, brain biopsy when I remove enormous pieces
    of the brain tissue
    Your children will be fatherless after I smoke you
    Call Madonna, she’s helping orphans in Africa

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