Dusk Vs. Verseatyle (Battle Comp, Round 2)

[Robert]

Verseatyle drops first, same rules as first round, good luck to both writers
peace

[VillainousV]

lol aight yo. I haven't battle in a while, so this should be easy 4 u.

Lemme see...
After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
Tha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
And im ghost....

......I say WORD?........lol kill me now, so my writer's block can end.
Good luck yo.

GIMME FEEDBACK!!!!!

[VernakuLa]

you said you were READY DUUED?? WHAT HAPPENED???

[VillainousV]

huh? what u mean Nak?

[Thai Gear]

dusk can't post now b/c his computer ain't working

[oDoUoSoKo]

im good, i fixed it

[oDoUoSoKo]

this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R.
u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity

w/e i lost my flow, been gone for a while

[oDoUoSoKo]

just incase u havent noticed....i dropped my verse...so...vote

[Bigot Hitman]

My vote goes to versatyle, better lyrics. I guess my vote don't count though cuz i ain't no judge.

[Robert]

Verseatyle-
After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
(average opener)

ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
(average not really hitting)

Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
(the wordplay is good but once again the punch aint there, this is a battle, you need punches and personals)

originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
(alright)

I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
(like this second line, pretty nice)

Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
(alright lines but not hitting)

Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
(im pretty sure i've heard "beat your ass like a drum" a lot of times, average)

leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
(alright)

Tha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
(alright closer)
Without having read Dusk's verse i'd say you've prolly already lost, i mean there are no hard hitting personals or punches, this verse would be better in the temple of darts coz theres some good wordplay in there but not so much in the battlefield.

Dusk-
this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
(alright opener and punch)

first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
(average)

and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
(alright punch on the second line)

irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
(nice wordplay but thats it)

and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
(nice wordplay and punches here, lol at calling him ernie)

nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R
(personal, like the wordplay)

u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
(alright)

and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
(lols)

full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
(nice personal)

equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity
(nice finish)

And yes Dusk got this, his verse was pretty decent but the main thing was the lack of punches and personals from Verseatyle
Vote=Dusk

Judges please vote
peace

[VillainousV]

Yo, Thanx anyways Banga. I was kinda hopin peeps would recognize real wordplay. lol. To me, there's more than 1 way to win battles, and they don't have 2 involve personal attacks (especially since u really don't know that person at all) or textbook punches. If thas all y'all look for, then im in the wrong forum yo. lol. Good battle anyways Dusk. word is bond.

Judges, lets get this over with yo. VOTE.

[Da Dishonourable Don]

yeah, I feel what ya saying 'bout not knowing the person at all, so how the fuck is it personal? oh well!.............

[oDoUoSoKo]

who do u think won mr dony boy!! lol

and not knowing the person is no excuse, either way personals arent a required thing to talk about he jus thought i used what i had well, and u can have wordplay but u gotta strengthen that shit

[Robert]

Yo, Thanx anyways Banga. I was kinda hopin peeps would recognize real wordplay. lol. To me, there's more than 1 way to win battles, and they don't have 2 involve personal attacks (especially since u really don't know that person at all) or textbook punches. If thas all y'all look for, then im in the wrong forum yo. lol. Good battle anyways Dusk. word is bond.

Judges, lets get this over with yo. VOTE.

Nah man, battles are not only about punches and personals, wordplay strengthens that, but thats what you gotta judge on predominately. how the fuck can you judge a battle, Where two emcees go at each other to see whose better on wordplay? No battles are decided like that......
peace

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote yall