1 round
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5 votes
3 vote knockout
vern vs concept
1 round
20 or more lines
5 votes
3 vote knockout
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
Aight Duke, you issued...put your game up son
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this is vern 4reel!!
its verns turn to learn how it feels to get burned
put this faggot down once and for all in a coffin or urn
this kids got a WEIGHT problem....he cant WAIT till lunch time
i dont even gotta spit one rhyme this kids pics the whole punch line
Vern you must have a tuff time even pickin up bum dimes
with that nasty freckled face you cant stare directly into like sun shine
this kid must be a virgin yo im takin all bets
unless you count the virtual sex he has with himself on the net
type of pervert stickin his fingers all up in his pets
this pests head is as empty as all his weak threats
cmon you fat fuck get some exercise you lazy cat
actin all hard on the net rockin 80 extra pounds of baby fat!!
ya whole styles softer than the toddlers down at baby gap
you say you rap....but ya statements fulla holes
lyrically kickin ya ass right now and strangglin ya with ya bellyrolls
your a nasty lookin troll...you fuckin make me sick punk
how you gonna say your iller than me lookin like Theodore of the Chipmunks
Last edited by tha god concept; 08-01-2006 at 06:28 AM.
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
ok bud...
That verse was wack as fuck..Use ma rhyme n punchline like a divine tool
My signs proove..I got as many "sick lines" as "lunchtime in highschool"
Concept is wack...Weak fillers, just punch another replay song
Dudes got the nerve to say hes iller, when he *bit c-rayz walz*
Recievin' a beatin'....Naw son, this cat begins to bleed when I see 'em
His raps speak for the weakend...Leavin' em breathin' is treason
Are flows are different...I'm just better and textin' it shorter
And he displays "no resistance"...Like "minute men at mexican borders"
Lessen the houlster...Round one shoulda' get set to get smashed
Dudes got less a chance of "beatin' me"..Than a "dick-head in a cast"
Spit led in ya ass...makin fat jokes...I'll rip out ya intestines with steel
Split ya neck in a half..wit his basic rap flow...couldn't impress me w/ skill
Testing the steel?...Session get killed, Cat forced his bars loopy
But Naks never been "out-done"...like "pornstars in movies"
is 14 enuff
good battle vern
votes..
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
bit c-rayz walz verse for the smackdown
http://wutang-corp.com/forum/showthr...highlight=Rize
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Last edited by tha god concept; 08-01-2006 at 07:52 AM.
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
fuckin bitch edited the shit out, wow, ur lame as fuck yo
wooooow, fo some1 claiming to be sick you like to cover up ya tracks on the net huh? I have no respect for you, change it back or basically admit to being a schemin bitch
Last edited by VernakuLa; 08-01-2006 at 07:56 AM.
naw i was jus takin out some of the wack shit i was sayin back then
thats all....i was so heated that nite and i was poppin off sayin some dumb shit
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
So why edit out the line i was calling you on, I dunno wuss good ya just seems mad suspectOriginally Posted by tha god concept
i admitted to bitin tose lines that nite.....it was the first nite i was ever on here about a year ago
i did it because you fuckers werent reading the shit i wrote and saying it sucked with out reading it'
so i threw a few of sum1ns verses down to see if u bastards would notice..
u no this...its old as fuck
Last edited by tha god concept; 08-01-2006 at 08:06 AM.
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
This was a tough battle to decide....concept came wit some severe personals that really hit hard, the verse was ferocious but in some ways you played on the same theme too much and neglected other punches....apart from that the wordplay was good, i liked the structure....
And Vern chose to respond wit some good quality punches and elevated wordplay, the two opening lines were dope and the mexican border one was sick also......and that bite claim hit pretty hard....
Overall this was very hard to decide because the battles styles were far different but imma give this to concept, his verse has the edge coz the personals are ferocious....I feel that Vern, you would have got this if he focussed more on a personal counter attack to go wit your good punches....but as you didnt do this....
Vote=Tha god concept
Peace and vote in the comp ppl!
I guess its 1-1, concept u rocked my pic in personals man, TWAS DOPE!
peace
"Biting is unnacceptable...and it seems you HAVe done it a couple of times already..."
couple times already??? when
that was the only time..and it was about a year ago...
anyway votes
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
ahaha, i was lookin so gay back then yo.....pic is 2 years old, i aint start listenin to hip hop about a year ago...anyways
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