1 round, 20 lines
1 round, 20 lines
I aint your average rhyme spitter, the pussy splitter
always stacking figures its j.r. the mind ripper
the marijuana got me choking, my third eye open
see them dudes through the walls and the nines that they be holding
and i aint even gonna try on the rest
cuz no matter what you write its already second best
so i'm not trying to be relevent, on a site thats so irelevent
carbomb your moms house just to show you my relevance
you take it up the ass like the fat dude from deliverence
I'm eating chicken wraps, trying to figure out my raps
thats right chicken not pork, i watch my trans-fats
dont eat chinese food cuz i heard they cook cats
and dont visit wu tang corp cuz the site is full of rats
i'd rather go to the store and drop twenty on a hat
than sit on this site just to see your garbage rap
shit only sixteen lines, i'm out holla back
We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation
^damn you got a few solid lines
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
Murder in the First
damn Nak, you better than that
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My vote goes to jr killa
Better overall verse, flow was good too.
Nak's closer was terrible but the rest was ok.
Nak did you leave off a line at the end supposed to rhyme wit challenge?
You should have came harder than that, is the verse not finished or somethin?
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
oh dsht id idint fuibnish itnim high as fujcik right now fuck 7thqt verse ikk be back
1-0 still 8ima jus5t wit \\ till i cqan see shit
ur ok, nak idk what to say anymore
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I nth3in'k sun1 iz fakimg !t
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nah I guessin im aight now tried to take a nap but w/e i can see better
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This kid has problems..spit facts and I solve em
His rhymin's outa place like a day pitch black in august!
Grits facts and then knowledge, My shots'll enlarge your pelvis
Murder you, and put the "spark thru your brain" like "Charger helmets!"
Hard to tell kid, your far from sellin...Release the facts on ya?
He thinks *Suckin E-40*...with ease, "beatin" vernakula!
Speak and I laugh at ya! Feinds even "crack" on ya (make a joke)
Hes so bitchmade, this kid bleeds from when I'm tappin ya (weak bar)
Dude has a slow makin, Gets hyped cuz wack nerds thinks hes nice
This battles won more me, no debatin, like the existance of jesus christ
This kids weak as mice, believe I might give a lesson or two
I'll presently proove, after this verse this kids essence is through!
Obsessin' my mooves...this kid is still testin the truth
Even dirts got more skill, and thats lesser than you!
peace this is mad lazy tho
* E 40 is the self proclaimed "king of slang" slang is aka vernaculars, so jerking off E 40 he still aint beatin vernakula get it?
Last edited by VernakuLa; 08-10-2006 at 11:11 PM.
yo lemme redo my shit, put this to an end
okay homie let me put you on the game
let hecklar and koch rearrange your mindframe
vernakular, that was unspectacular, your lacking experience
when i push the 21, i have you praying for deliverence
but aint no love in the sky
speak my name on your lips is the quickest way to die
but trust me i could show you war visuals
Graduated from the ten only left two jewels
but what's really the risidual, War stories scars and screams
you think that your safe behind a computer screen
Switch my mind to fibre optic travel a light beam
from this perspective whose really going at light speed
escape to a light dream, when i re-up fix my eyes bleed
the chronic persuasion have me feeling what i fiend
get high snatch your moms and stick her with the icepick
tie her up in the trunk and drive the bitch off a bridge
but first i have the bitch yoked up swallowing my kids
she loved the freaky shit, but it wasnt all butter
sneaky bitch used her pussy muscles to pull off the rubber
blew out her back, from the fierce counter attack
said she love to ride dick and give birth to vernak
meh.. not that great, but still better than yours.
We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation
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