Whos game

[tha god concept]

yo sumtimes concept gets dirty like las vegas vagrants
russian roulette wit a mic and sum pacience 007 agent
yall sum hollywood gay kids waitin for a Revlon placement
i spit amazing ask my agent
super bowl wordrobe malfunction from the bullets grazin
loppin off bras like hack-saws down in the basement
do what i say kids
like my names simon
lyrically rape ya american idol until the life signs be vital
and still contredict the bible
every time concept spits raw all mc's vitals be sucicidal
bloods n crips bear huggin each-other like you and i do
killin with pens and pencils and dot ya eyes to
leavin ya sokets black from the blues
so hot when the alarms go off you cant touch the snooze

[jR_killa]

shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga

[adedwutang]

c im the type of person that wuld try to help someone out before talkin shit, but u realllyyy need to work on ur skills b. all around.

[Da Dishonourable Don]

shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga

damn, I ain't heard the word 'nigga' used so many times in a paragraph since the KKK was on Jerry Springer, step your game up kid, that shit's played out, git original with your words, that ain't even a verse right there, that's some kid shit!

[jR_killa]

what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.

shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid

[adedwutang]

the problem isnt the word u used but to put it after ever fuckin line is just pointless, i understand you tryin to b creative and do somethin different but that doesnt neccesarily mean that its gonna b better.
try somethin else and ill get back at u.

[VernakuLa]

what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.

shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid

The problem is the content, rhyming the same word at the end of EVERY bar isnt impressive, hate to break it to you

[jR_killa]

umm yeah if you look at the word before the last word of every bar... you know what nevermind... did you even read my verse?

[suav3]

vermin exterminator, juniour terminator, both mothers lover smoother the condoms flavour when they tongue savour the suav3 scraper
(damn tame her)
see the world through designer lenses, and look at the world as production sections, move way and blaze up sessions, carefree, then tension, plastic matics graspin, bang bang in you nd your thang thang, mlb scoring, with home runs with bagged funds, while running through bases, for base solely on buisness basis so now you know get to shaking

[Battle 1]

2O lines of raw for you to snort
All kinds of drugs and sort
I do this for sport
Take these shots on the basketball court
Hold down the fort
Take you up North and so forth
Get your money's worth
Taste the purest on the earth
That shit they got over there is dirt
Only your pockets get hurt
Come to me to get it corrected non-infected
Dis-infected
Clowns merchandise get rejected
Pheenes injected with what I got get respected
Personally selected for your preference check my reference
Supreme exellence no fakes allowed to show their presence
My spot stays mega intense
What they got over there makes no sense
Anyone who says otherwise is dense
And better stay on the otherside of the fence