damn, i guess it was shity since i aint get no replies.
damn, i guess it was shity since i aint get no replies.
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
yo stay up ninja,not bad at all bro keep reppin
peace
eversick666
those are dope verses.....the flow was amazing, i can hear the beat with it.... alot of vocab...liked the rhyme schemes....like ya style....u had alot of good lines
keep it up
peace
Battle-scarred shogun, explosion when my pen hits
tremendous, ultra-violet shine blind forensics
-Inspectah Deck
...for real? i thought it was sub par for me, i got better ryhmes stored away.
thanx for the feed back!
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
ehh, not reallly feelin your shit homie, its bland, basic schemes and simple punches, seems like you try to use a strong vocabulary when you don't need
too......which makes alot of the rhyme seem forced ya dig?
my two cents peis
Tight shit homie, keep it coming.
~C'Dub!~
I'm a straight up gamer
But with a mic I am also a tamer/
Cuz' enemies be like wild beasts never tamed
But when i finish they're the ones that get maimed/
lets see here, you, me,C'dub, and WnD should make a little free style group here.
Give a man a fish and you can feed him for a day, but teach him how to catch one and you have fed him for a lifetime.
where? in this thread?
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
werd
word you got sum quotables in there keep working at it so i can high light the whole thing next time!!! anyway good readOriginally Posted by Wu banga
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
yeah thats a good read! , decent drop homie
keep blessin'
Wu Alliance-feat: Wu-Ronin and Wu banga
This is a dou thread of wu banga and wu-ronin, we'll both post rehersed verses or freestlyes every few days. Be on the lookout for new material.
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
Bless my listeners with tapes, made for every individual
I don't yell "fuck them jakes", cause i'm strictly original/
Street battlers quickly doctored, we cripple thier anatomy
Leave them bleeding and hurt, with marble sized cavitites/
For tryin to bite lines that's much to sweet for average teeth
Better wash with listereen, in attempt to end the rotting beeth/
Heed the lyric guns i blast at random targets for much fun
Lessons well learned, gettin off free's a bargain, tons of puns/
We decarbonate your oxygen supply leavin boxes of toxins
The beat be the oxen breaking keys for me and the locksmith/
Got this hip hop shit on lock, from Cincinnati to Cleveland
Igniting the heat, that offers no relief, for the mc's thats believin
In false motivation, given to them by lesser rappers they've beaten
Niggas left pleadin, verse finished up with 4 lines that rhyme with eaten/
Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 08-03-2006 at 01:46 PM.
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
I slay lame goats, melt rain coats, sink gold boats, with lyrics I wrote
Put yo dames in cotes, words I rap round throats, I gain all votes while I tote
Meddle wit the rebel get pierced by treble, drown you in melted metal
Your head I level by decapitation, I’m heavenly settled, when facing devils
I’ve used e-l-v, and o-a-t in combinations already, so what the fuck is next
Verses cleverly wrote, hang with elvs that eat oats, but I can’t jump a test
Given by the ones, who don’t empathize the songs,
Can’t recognize a pun, but can recognize some thongs,
Anyways, back to the scheme, I bleed the readings of ancient teachings
Lead deadly beatings, left briefings leaking from my proceedings,
Rappers attempt to wrap us, with rapture tactics from old chapters
But no magic bastard, can overcome the tragedies they have mastered
Witch leaves him with no freedom, beliefs to my sons, I teach them
Mics up sleeves, hem and cleave piles of keys, to lock release vents bitch
For the simple minded, when i say "i've used e-l-v and o-a-t in combos" already, those are parts of the words i used to ryhme wit in the first 4 lines.
Like boat, coat, throat, and level metal rebel. Then i tie that shit up with " I hang with the elvs (elfs) that eat the oats".
Wu-ronin were you at?
Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 08-03-2006 at 06:39 PM.
The dealer of hope is selling me lies
Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61
i jam harder then sedementary
developed rymes i made in elementary
surge fists sent you to the cemetary
energy flows
explode
chemical reaction like chemestry
yall mutha fuckas cant get the best of me
my rage
i release frome the cage
stings like a bee
mastered my fists at a young age
now suckas are lookin for a receipe
hadouken blinds the eyes
it kills like pestecide
you body turns to ash
then i spread it in the wind like cianide gass
Give a man a fish and you can feed him for a day, but teach him how to catch one and you have fed him for a lifetime.
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