Ninjustice vs. You And Yours

**oDoUoSoKo** · 04-07-2007, 06:21 PM

we doing feeding or not..?

**The Ghost** · 04-07-2007, 08:09 PM

Feeding yes, do it

**oDoUoSoKo** · 04-07-2007, 08:39 PM

exlposion of lyrical trojans holdin like the boys in 'Nam
comin thru with bloody hooks like 1, and 2 in the poison clan
no shame fellas, blow like propane prepellers(sp?)
we dope cocaine sellers, u couldnt battle reign with an umbrella
keep tryin bitch we li'ble to switch and pry u with sticks
u wanna hang with BOM? leave yo ass tied to the wick
ill bang ya moms, and lie like a spick "she on jus for fun"
but i was caught by a judge, u were pronounced my dishonerable son
and fuck a ghost, if u tuck a toast u better bust and blast
cuz when dusk approach, u cood only fuckin hope ya luck will last
it wont i assure u ghost, im hype on DDD ritalin
ill chew ur soul, spit it in a body and kill it again
militant gentlemen, jab a blade in ur abs for play
and if u actin gay ill put the strap to ya face like a masqurade
makin sharp deposits of hardened darts spit, u quotin em
lathargic artist rippin Ghost ribs out to slash ya throat with em.

sorry for the wait...ghost u up.

**The Ghost** · 04-07-2007, 09:26 PM

No Dusk, you don't know me. Honestly you owe me
So I'll kidnap you and make you watch me fuck your girl friend slowly
I'll beat you till your nose bleed and make you seek the crossroad
Tie you to a crusifix and wiegh you down with Tony Starks gold
Bloodyhookz cut open your throats, Mortal Kombat says finish them
You lost from the post, so what are we finishing?
No ones quoting your darts, we leave them stuck to the board
Furious bars open your heart, intense metaphors fuck up your pores
Can't beat a ghost son, a soul is forever
Didn't feel like scolding you or reign 1 on 1 so I scold you together
Don look at these amateur lines, lets watch the amateurs shine
Todays Saturday, Its showtime at the apollo, Its amateur time
The shit you do for free we do for a fee
Cocaine trafficers? I wonder what these goons will do for a plea
Dusk sucking, Reigns fucking, they praticed their routine
End of Discussion, yous nothing, we reign supreme

**Bigot Hitman** · 04-07-2007, 10:02 PM

Is this one or two rounds?

**Lil' Ruger** · 04-08-2007, 04:57 AM

i say two i like this battle.

**oDoUoSoKo** · 04-08-2007, 11:52 AM

no, 1 round, it took years toget this one round poppin, imagine another...VOTES.

**The Ghost** · 04-08-2007, 01:04 PM

lol I agree with Dusk

**The Ghost** · 04-10-2007, 03:05 PM

Vote people

**Bigot Hitman** · 04-10-2007, 07:21 PM

I'm bout too^^

**Bigot Hitman** · 04-10-2007, 08:06 PM

Reign

Flow-2.5/5 stretched an uneven
Concepts/substance-1.5/5 basic an weak
Metaphors-1/5 basic an weak
Punches/personals-1/5 basic an weak
Originality-3/5- descent attempts still basic doe

Total-9/25

Dusk
Flow-4/5-even throughout, a couple stretched
Concepts/substance-4.5/5- line for line lyricism
Metaphors-3/5- better than basic-nothin speacial
Punches/Personals-3/5-verse lacked throro punchlines
Originality-4/5-no played out concepts cept the nam' line

Total-18.5/25

Team total-27.5/50

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DDD
Flow-5/5-all lines matched in rhythm
Concepts/substance-4.5/5-common topics used good
Metaphors-4/5-pretty good, but could be on a higher level
Punches/personals-4.5/5- direct an hard, flow helped'em land
Orginality-3.8/5-common topics like i said, u flipped'em good doe

Total-21.8/25

Ghost
Flow-3.5/5- a couple lines was uneven
Concepts/substance-4.3/5-fell off at the end, but pretty entertainin
Metaphors-absent-0/0- can't take off, or give, if u didn't attempt any
Punches/personal-3.5/5- sum were funny, sum were weak, sum were average
Originality-5/5-no played out concepts used, all orginal

Total- 16.3/20* ---not out of 25 cuz he used no metaphors IMO

Team total-38.1/45*--not 50 cuz^^^

DDD an gost take this IMO..uno