check it

[soloist]

vocalist slash imortal terrorist provoke embarrasment
soloist blast with force and very quick dope prepare for this
photoist flash the torch on careless dopes unaware of it
in a posistion to pivot with my poetry to hit the population
no poppin pistols past that phase free is my proclamation
my partna producin' passionate beats positively slayin
i ustah roll up like tortillas with chicas wu out the speakas
no mo' cheeba clean as aquafina an NIV reada'
speak tha truth to tyrants with torch tactics
shinin light bright to underwater cats like catfish
was lavish then did a 180 never come shady or blackness
i ustah stack chips pass spliffs and chase mad chicks
forget wealth now i seek knowledgin of self
purpose drivin life right off my shelf
i ustah be stealth and discrete now i proclame my self

[BlaK FuRYaN]

vocalist slash imortal terrorist provoke embarrasment
soloist blast with force and very quick dope prepare for this(<whuts this?)
photoist flash the torch on careless dopes unaware of it
in a posistion to pivot with my poetry to hit the population(nice alliteration)
no poppin pistols past that phase free is my proclamation(<didn't understand this line)
my partna producin' passionate beats positively slayin
i ustah(hu!) roll up like tortillas with chicas wu out the speakas
no mo' cheeba clean as aquafina an NIV reada'
speak tha truth to tyrants with torch tactics
shinin light bright to underwater cats like catfish(i liked this)
was lavish then did a 180 never come shady or blackness
i ustah stack chips pass spliffs and chase mad chicks
forget wealth now i seek knowledgin of self
purpose drivin life right off my shelf
i ustah be stealth and discrete now i proclame my self

cuddnt really dig whut you was sayin....flow wasnt constant.....felt one metaphore....I liked tha aliteration definately.....


nice work


peace

[soloist]

i blast with force very quick..dope (reffering to cocaine) prepare for this (like rookie mcs compared to rookie cane snorters)

no poppin pistols past that phase free is my proclamation......im past the phase where i was messing with guns and now proclaming that im free


thanks for the feedback

[BlaK FuRYaN]

i blast with force very quick..dope (reffering to cocaine) prepare for this (like rookie mcs compared to rookie cane snorters)

no poppin pistols past that phase free is my proclamation......im past the phase where i was messing with guns and now proclaming that im free


thanks for the feedback

AIGHT

I HEAR YOU


PEACE

[soloist]

mc master of ceremonies makin cats move caps
deadly lines droppin bars like butterfingers fast
writin heat and steal posted up like shaq
crossover styles im drivin like lanes to the rack
no ice anti floss like austin powers
thats soft and candy like statrbust sours
harder than statues my styles engraved with power
torch mic wires kickin flame then pass like hours

[BlaK FuRYaN]

Dark swordsmen....spark lathargic smart boredom....
I walk wid tha awesome gorgons half talkin....socially unfit bloody kulprits who march forward
you shrivel benieth tha shade of my blades tha skarred foreman....

[soloist]

coo

[JOHNNY_TICAL]

Good Shit .... " I'd Hit.... A Boom Dip And Im Ready 2 Flip... " {scenario}



Keep Postin... Peace Out ....

Blaze It !! {fuck Cocaine}

[Rebel_INS]

Nice shit

[soloist]

yeah i don't mess with that yayo just some word play comparing my mc style and coke.

lyrical justice jackin jokers babblin jibberish
comin correct captivating like candy clittorus
profound manuscript provoke scholars illiterate
soldier mic shivalry swingin wisdom killin it
bulldozin gravel raps, down to earth rock solid linguist
opponets catch scorpian hits tryin to sting this
never cavin pop material garbage bring it
make dolla outah 50 cent by flippin yayo
young bucks wish they had my game bro
i Got units posted make 50 fall apart like lego

[GuardianOne]

Nice verse, quite decent- although your own lyrics had us thinking what it stands for.I suppose as with time we shall gain what you mean with such lyrics. But i noticed you kept using the same content in this verse. But it was well placed.As we read more of your posts i can start understanding your lyrics and flow. Nice

Peace
PS: Keep posting

[soloist]

thanks man...peace

[soloist]

my homie threw the mic so i could proclamate my manuscript
studio posted pen sparks page burnin brain packin clips
tongue blastin it snakes catch casualties from massive hits
keep thirsty by studying the culture im quenched when spittin
fullah knowledge, schemes, dreams, ideas, never myself...ambition
drownin in deep thought keepin my head above agua
how can we stop the madness cuz it keeps goin like saga
everybody gotta look towards the Fatha.