good stuff. u got skillz
good stuff. u got skillz
good replies krazi....anybody else?????
i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should
analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked out peaceful crooked police/character searchin frantically still stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/now it's 200 pounds of cadavers the coroners facin/murder cases/and the physical basis is shell cases/labratory's tryna put crooks inside of there places/plastic bagged faces with they whole torsos laced up/
ayo beef in red attracts pork in blue/
arite i finished a ruff draft of my 1st verse.......and i am starting my next with the beef and pork line.........what ya'll think about the verse and it's additions......
feed appreciated........
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
nice start make it longer good punches LL good stuff work on it
go check out mine called,
"tha visionarie part1"
thanx g.....any else can give me input?????
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
yo that was sum fresh shit luther
i was feelin that shit
big ups son , u did ya thing on that verse
peep my shit in temple of darts gimme sum feed back
peace god ~1~
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
aight i'll check it out later god.......any1 else?
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
any1 else..........should i finish???????
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
feed?????
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
I'm lovin' it so far ... the multies are off the hook ... stop teasing us though ... hurry up and drop the rest. Luv your style.Originally Posted by Luther Large
Peace
I sew...
beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted
your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted
my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...
-- Dae Ja Nae
http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503
much luv dae....i'm tryna get it done i just added to finish a ruff draft of my 1st verse...and i only have 1 line starting my second........
hope ya'll still like it though?
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
Uppin on feed ya'll
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
...you need me to read this -- and there fore i need you to pause, delete the thread, and stop writing altogether...
calm down chief if you wanna say you dont like it do so...............but dont try and start a homo ass e-beef
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
???????
I got styles sick as hell, sicker than sickle cell anemia, slaughter your circulatory like lukemia
- AZ
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