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    Default Uncertainty

    Can't even put words to my feelings and thoughts,
    standing in the midst of the storm feeling lost.
    Unforeseen conflict arises inspired by a single mistake,
    Choosing between 2 roads, always the wrong decision i make
    If deciding what's real or what's fake, there seems to be no guideline to take.
    Though not depressed or feeling sorrow,
    i know i'll still be facing the same problems tommorow.
    Isn't that powerful?

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    Default Re: Uncertainty

    Nice and simple. You seemed to have a distance to this verse. Far searching ideas contained to it. Watch out for your words ("their seems to be no guideline to take") maybe "There". But it was a decent verse. Keep posting

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