Open Battle

[bloodyhookz]

ey yo, round two's a doozy son, you might as well call it quits/
kid, you couldn't palm a chick,...'cause your balls are as small as zits/
and your rhymes are the epitome of whack/
what the fuck made you write that weak verse homie?.... an epiffany on crack?/
you couldn't phathm to imagine all the pain I can bring to your household/
I'll split your mug wit a rusty scalpel then staple your mouth closed/
and you don't wanna diss the team, know what?...../
we'll rape your chick in her cullo and turn her butthole to a crispy creme donut/
shonuff, I'm nicer than Noel on my worst night/
feel a cold chill?, I'm a show you what the opposite of birth's like/
I'm so real, I might egnite and pop a clip at first sight/
he couldn't jump on a track... if somebody copped this prick a dirt bike/
the perverse type, strangling rappers with sneaker strings/
fuck RESPECT son,.... I just like hearing Aretha sing/
so if you ain't realized that you fuckin' with number one/
I might giz in your eyes, so you could see clear where I'm coming from! [no homo]

aight let's git some votes now!

[noel411]

Nice verse homie. Let's get some votes happening.

[Bigot Hitman]

Flow-DDD
Creativity-DDD
Punches-DDD
Multies-DDD
Metaphors-DDD

Vote DDD

THis was closer than my votin format makes it look, its just Imo bloddy hooks came harder on all of those catagories.

[bloodyhookz]

respect for the vote, 1-0 in my fav. let's git some more!

[MX1]

flow-hookz
vocab-noel
creativity-hookz
wordplay-hookz
punches- hookz

it was a good battle but i'm feelin hook on this one, it was close though, and both came wit it but hookz to me took this one

[bloodyhookz]

thanks for voting, that makes it 2-0 for me, 1 more and it's an official k.o.!

[Lil' Ruger]

Flow-DDD
Creativity-DDD
Punches-DDD
Multies-noel
Metaphors-DDD

i think DDD took this because it didnt seem like noel went all the way on the battle tip it seemed more like when someone insults some person that doesnt really exist. like me saying half those bitches xcant rhyme difficult to explain but every rappers done it.

NOW VOTE IN MY BATTLE WIT MX1

[bloodyhookz]

aight, that's a wrap, 3-0 knockout, much respect to those who voted and NOEL411 for puttin' up a nice battle, let's do it again sometime!

[noel411]

Ah fuck, I guess battling's just not for me, haha. I would have been happy with at least one vote, but I guess not. Oh well.

And yeah reign, I'm not into this style of writing, so it's out of my nature to write a verse focused on punches and shit. I was hoping maybe I could get some votes based on rhyme schemes and shit, but fuck it. It's a battle. Hooks ripped on me more than I did him I think. I'll try to remember to peep your battle and drop a vote.

Anyway, cheers for the challenge hookz, and thanks for the votes everyone, even though they were all fucken against me, haha.

[bloodyhookz]

it was your first battle, hope you don't give up easily, I read your shit in other threads and you're written shit is tighter than most out here, next time you should focus on more personal things to say rather than rhyme schemes, when both collide, then you have an unstoppable force, either way, don't give up battling my dude, it's all in fun nature, peace!

[noel411]

I'm not giving up, dude. I never intended to become actively involved in battling. It was just gonna be a one of. It's not my thing. But yeah, it was a bit of fun. I might give it another go some time. Maybe even soon if I don't find any inspiration to write anything else. Cheers for the encouragement.