Dusk Vs Definitive X

[oDoUoSoKo]

rules...
4 rounds, 4 lines each, at a time...lets see how this goes.

[Definitive X]

Ayyo, everytime I rhyme/I crush the song
And throw a couple so-called dons/with a cuffed palm
Change ya name, dog/cuz if you dusk, I'm dawn
Basically, when I arrive/you gone

[oDoUoSoKo]

dawn? im his adviser, ill play you like synthesizer songs
show you right from wrong, tiger palm your shit and fertilize your lawn
disconnect the connection of mouth jaw via southpaw
a lefty, shovin eyes in ears and makin Defcee's

[oDoUoSoKo]

welcome back by the way man...that was round 1 and i wanna keep goin so...lets do this...juan.

[Definitive X]

Synthesizer songs?/You must be more uptight than Mariah's thongs
I'll own your music like Viacom/tear up sheets of paper you write up on
Stay inside ya moms/like ovaries/and your father?/Bitch, you know it's me
Come on, stay focused, B/you inherited your whole flow from me!

[oDoUoSoKo]

hopefully your jokinly refering to old poetry
for quoting me, ill vocally stick boa teeth in both your knees
normally id go with eaze, but ill potently blast flames
you'll try to run home, til your locations unkown like ya last name (x)

[Definitive X]

I got a last name/punk, do you know yours?
You probably call your herpes mark a cold sore/when it's a souvenir from two coke whores
I'm dope, raw/get off my genitalia
I hate to tell ya/but your mama's pillow talk consisted/of how you've subsited/and been a failure!

[oDoUoSoKo]

as a matter of fact, from the neck up ill shatter your back/
in a clinic, while im gettin a check up, be back in a minute/
lyrics laced wit dracula's spirit, you finna get/
let off with a warning, before im pouring clorene, in your open wounds lasting long like ya boring lines that be draggin and forcing, you finished yet?/

[oDoUoSoKo]

one more round def...lets finish it huh?

[Definitive X]

This cat gon' move me?/I refuse to budge
So I'ma drop more heavy sentences/than a hanging judge
Bitch, I've been a threat/so don't complain that I ain't of age yet
Cuz I'm comin' into my own/quicker than incest...

Sorry, dog...I hope you weren't looking for a challenge...I've been out the text battle game for a MINUTE...

[oDoUoSoKo]

ill beat your life till you cant read or write
if i was lookin for a challenge ida tryd ta bag condaleeza rice
your a fag with decent hype, time for, cord cable-
chokin cuz you took too long, like blind whores in horse stables

[Definitive X]

^^^^I honestly don't think we even have to vote here...you took it, B...

[oDoUoSoKo]

man, i think its only fair....you did your thing....i needed this battle btw...hit the spot.

[num2son]

need any votes?

[Sleep Sinatra]

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i think that this was a good battle ,like a perfect example of how a text battle should b,i dont care 2 much for the whole 4 line thing but regardless yall did ya fuckin thing

close call for me but ima have 2 say dusk