Dusk Vs. whoever....

[Classic]

like, a whole third of that second verse didn't rhyme.
and again, all the punclines in that SUCKED.(again, you only had like 2 punchlines in that whole thing)
you need to up your creativity, wordplay, structure, EVERYTHING.
don't hate dude, it was just criticism.
before you drop crap like that in here, you gotta realize this is a BATTLEFIELD.
PUNCHLINES ONLY.
if you can't drop punchlines & swing swords,
then why're you here?

[oDoUoSoKo]

we not doing two rounds you fuckin prick holster...and stop talking shit you cant back up because those verses was throw away holmes.

[ckretwon]

scary ass niggas. go ahead spit.

[oDoUoSoKo]

?

[ckretwon]

anyway nice battle. i give you ya props.