2nd sampled beat (quick draw gun slinga)

[100pr00f]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5753666

just messing around

peace

[100pr00f]

what..............is this trash...is it time to go back to the drawing board.....

[GameOfDeath]

Feelin this the choppiness is annoying I think it could be a bit smoother like when you let it run a little around 1:45. But the sound's got a nice atmosphere for some vocals.

[100pr00f]

thanks for the feed...i like it seems easy to flow to...i understand what u mean from the choppieness

at around 1:30 or so is a break..i feel if u sed it threw out the beat it would sound to slow to flow too
the choppyness gives a good path to flow over ..
good sound better with lyrics over it
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but hey im just a noob at this....ima try a few more sample type joints to try and elivate

[GameOfDeath]

You going to rhyme on this?

[100pr00f]

i might....will be the first beat i did that i spit over