I'm just trying to improve my lyrics though, cause I never tried writing before I signed up here, so if you want an easy win, go ahead
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I'm just trying to improve my lyrics though, cause I never tried writing before I signed up here, so if you want an easy win, go ahead
16 lines each
1 round
house rules for voting
just put your name down, I'll spit 1st
forgot about this, hold on
shit dude. I'll post tomorrow. I meant to copy but hit paste and lost my verse, and I'm mad tired. I'll just edit it in this post, so the first page isn't just us talking.
peace
edit - my verse
skills you need to attain and keep and you got amnesia
got a plan A and B that'll portray Treazon as a true squealer
gave you a call and want my quarterback like Terrell Owens
naturally dead, hear the echo's from the beach shells glowing
since Treazon was born he wanted it all, his face on bills and dirt
trying with the punches, says he got an ace with sleeveless shirt
see you a little too feeble to come away contesting the decision
a wannabe winner, better yet sore loser messing with precision
guessing in a game when you need a couple of hard facts
you can't win with the mental, I come from the heart in my drops
murder is the case, find you in the obituary clippings in my notepad
with your crew, you claimed to be bad like your hoe's mad
when I came with the heat you played dumb, stopped dropped and rolled
down a killers road, now you in the scrolls, you had to fold
got full grown skeletons in the closet like you and a fag kissed
you ain't get no rapping paper like you on this Santa's bad list
I sorta lost motivation after I lost my first verse, oh well. your up
Last edited by thatKid; 09-20-2007 at 12:16 PM.
pages of fine rhymes aged like fine wine with wickedness fermented
its not demons but mental disabilities that makes this kid demented
you givin out an easy victory? i aint here for that
cuz yo, a half-decent rapper, i mistook you for that
honestly when i replied, i wanted some decent competition
now im not sure if im battling a baby, or a child with autism
your lines are wack, written wit absolutely no riddim
this battle wasn't even from the start, like Capitalism
you say you lost your motivation cuz you cant copy and paste?
or is it cuz Treazon leaves phony emcees to rot in disgrace
lyrical master of martial arts swingin' rope darts to ya face
ya blood splattering the wall is my art-form like spray-paint
i sacrifice you to the heavens, modern Mayan ritual version
God's soul and mine merging, happy cuz he asked for a virgin
Treazon is the best alive example of how evil the world is turning
this verse is like real medieval times, cuz the demented is burning
This was basic battle you know.....REALY NOTHING PULL ME IN....
IM GONIG WITH demented AND SHIT.....Treazon VERSE WAS OK.....
VOTE DEMENTED
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