Fermex Lyrical Notebook Thread

[KERZO]

What's up paradox just a little battle rap check it

on entrance I perform poetic pestilence, poison your brain each sentence
my flows show excellence diabolically designed to drain your intelligence
i was heaven sent and never hesitant to use you in my insane experiments
im the shit, you just excrement that I be breaking down to basic elements
spit raps that smack you back into relapse and collapse ya home residence
your styles about as popular as a gas price rise of twenty seven cents
i stand delivering syllable ridicules that switch your vital signs to critical
making riddles steadily killing this fool with my subliminal lyrical miracles
your in the ring with a word wizard spittin’ wisdom with surgeon precision
making an incision ripping your shit out the system cos when I listen
to the shit you spittin’ all I see is a lack of grey matter, not a rapper
cos the fact of the matter is my brain swagger stab a emcee like a dagger

good verse J.T.S...heres the reverse attack -

A'yo I Inflate then instigate ya rhymes and await the comeback
But ya never came cos ya lame but ma brain's lyrically waxed
Switchback'in cats who be messing with my flow
My persona's aglow in this dim lit show
I endevour to jump up and smash up ya set
I'll agent orange ya mind like a viet war vets
So lets inject some unpleasantness into this battle
I dismantle ya armour like a scholar's burrning candle

And from a different angle, is where i hail from
Where the norm is knife killing, the blade method son
So dont pretend, yer tougher than me
Lyrical ice torpedoes make ya vocal chords freeze
And then i bust a move thinking that i'm jet li
Blowing vault's open with my verbal mic assault
Now step apart from the art cos yer wide of the mark
This is the example, that ya follow when you embark...

[KERZO]

I got the mic-phone on deck, so watch my steez
Rapping like wu more every day, I aim to please
But i don't mean to do it, It's just the way that i am
Spitting true to the fam.....But on plan
Then I flip the script, maestro flows simply disturbed
I gotta adapt to any verse that my eyes incur
Paint splur, artistic hand blur
You ever see a scottish dude rap so superb

So i go local, bust like I'm a ned
I go och aye the noo, while i'm eating shortbread
Never wear tartan, i dont live in a castle
Everyone carries blades but i get no hassle
No hot spells, In these city streets i dwell
It aint bad as the states, but it got the same smell
So no matter where i'm from, were all one and the same
And i still got a story to tell

[Mantra]

[quote=Fermi Paradox;1019503]good verse J.T.S...heres the reverse attack -

A'yo I Inflate then instigate ya rhymes and await the comeback
But ya never came cos ya lame but ma brain's lyrically waxed
Switchback'in cats who be messing with my flow
My persona's aglow in this dim lit show
I endevour to jump up and smash up ya set
I'll agent orange ya mind like a viet war vets
So lets inject some unpleasantness into this battle
I dismantle ya armour like a scholar's burrning candle

And from a different angle, is where i hail from
Where the norm is knife killing, the blade method son
So dont pretend, yer tougher than me
Lyrical ice torpedoes make ya vocal chords freeze
And then i bust a move thinking that i'm jet li
Blowing vault's open with my verbal mic assault
Now step apart from the art cos yer wide of the mark
This is the example, that ya follow when you embark...


Niceness!! keep crafting, and blasting!
You got some ill darts

[KERZO]

cheers mang

[KERZO]

Night sky, eyes bright, open wide,
Never hide, mental thoughts collide, sparks create
Death, Fear, Love all relate
Instate your true feelings or be forced out the state

Greater good of man is kicked out the gate
We all have dreams that we have to chase
But some are out of pace, and fade into space
While some get obsessed by their slow haste

Symbol of fortune, graphic torture, flowers in bloom
Took shrooms 'n' felt doom, omens backward in tunes
Radio beam fires me up when I shoot the moon
Sparks ignite from the mic when I electrify the room

Magnets attract abstract passages in my brain
Manifesting electroscope optics, intelligently insane
I'm the mad radical weed smoking beat criminal
Was meant for rap since i was cut from the umbillical

[KERZO]

Contemplate the blood hawk, Sharp thought
Brought up to believe that my lifes' not drawn in chalk
Glimpse of death I step back and take my last breath
Never bred for this, but still I impress the rest

Sparage in the ring'll leave ya bloodage'd up
Corrupt fuck, devil's luck'll get a blade in ya gut
So watch out for the kick down style to chase
I create mad space for my rhymes to lay to waste

Any MC can phone me any day, they just say
And i'll come and overturn their turf any day
You made the mistake but never made the distinction
Everyone can see that yer words are not so convincing

Appropriate action, diabolical transactions
Installing fear in irrational notorious factions
Max traction, Darts fly like martians, over clouds
Your never allowed on the mic so get back in the crowd

[singodsuperior]

ILL AS USUAL MY MAN THIS IS AN OLD VERSE I CAM ACROSS:

Equipped with intelligence in my mine you're irrelevant
quietly spread like pestilence givin heat to bullshit lessons
chemically unbalanced wasn't a challenge put that to silence
it's hard to see my people being suspects and victims to violence
if it ain't one thing its a fuckin nutha
my brain is like a labrinth equipped wit chambers
understand that its dangerous
my game is blameless in its age everything I say is on the page
I'm in triple-staged darkness with unformed atoms
my consciousness never escapes from me the relativity of my delivery is the shit
its always complex when i spit i hit like a thousand comets
sonic compatiblities but niggas never feel me
celestial to my galaxy divine presence involuntary
Independance is bitter sweet but is still a treat
In my shoes you'll find dead demons hibernatin' within your kingdom
slay'em to purify the complextion of your spirit

[KERZO]

cheers for the post singod...heres a lil verse i just wrote after reading yours -

Ill equipped with darts that emit
Ferocious verses that reinforces mic's, when i submit the shit
I was skin and bones, but now mic-phones get owned
Phonies throwing rocks at me cos they act like flintstones

So i make cats grin with my shaolin UK spin
Haters get chopped up by blades and worn like animal skins
In a min, i'll begin, then you'll see the full force
Of my verbal assault, straight back to the point source

[singodsuperior]

ill shit, its better than mind to tell the truth.

[KERZO]

You write some ill words aswell, i really liked this part in your last flow ...

"its always complex when i spit i hit like a thousand comets
sonic compatiblities but niggas never feel me
celestial to my galaxy divine presence involuntary
Independance is bitter sweet but is still a treat"

you like when cats switch between abstract and statemental verses..keep up the good work

[KERZO]

My sharp darts spit faster than a MK rifle
I stifle all talent and send it off the eiffel
Tower top drop, I chop up haters around the clock
Dead ahead, stop, saved from a potential drop
I make phonies quake when they make the mistake
Brainsick styles cured from the eternal lake
At the bottom is where the low end of the gene pool hang around
Surround sound underground but ya'll nowhere to be found

It's the renowned Fermex, so light up ya cigarettes
The ones with the weed in em, best not forget
I smoke a bong before i walk out on stage and shock
With rhymes that kill swifter than a red-tailed hawk
Paradox abstract thoughts, tie knots, bred a scotsman
I stand up and get counted as a man with no suntan
But i'm closer to the american dream, a fan of the supreme
Mind god spirit duality than most cats aint never seen

[KERZO]

Sceptics inspect my injected methods
Most prophetic style, Fermex snaps the hectics
The next hit will wreck ships and make 'em go under
When thunder strikes the heart of the butter boy wonder

I disregard your words and tear apart your verse
Reimburse yer mom a mil, cos ya must've been a curse
Crazy paving, lazing in grazing lands while wood engraving
Enslaving minds with my witty mouth, silver spraying

Abstractly led sheep with blades that their coats dread
The next wave of words that shred the thread and made the readers bled
Good stead i keep, I smoke green all week
While my girl gives me head with her unique technique

Superspeaking diatones microphones get blown up
I interrupt the speaker and make an abrupt cut
So i heal wounds with bandages and fortune manages
To erupt and cause mass damages all across the planet

[KERZO]

Ayo, enter the paradox, vivid visions unseen
corrupting clean minds with blind obscene routines
I'm like a mic fighting machine, ripping out phonies spleens
If you believe the hype then your mind must be keen

I reinstated the scene,That ya cats thought was dead
The absract prospect that make ya snap back ya heads
In respect of the beat, ya'll move your feet
Then i nail em to the floor with unchartered technique

The weak will sneak up and speak critique every week
So i slap them bitches back to the capital of mozambique
With the full force of a lion, with dull rappers admiring
My style shining bright like the star city of orion

Himalayan foot stomp, the swamp world will take notice
When my rap style blooms like the flowers of a lotus
Fermex chants that grant the avid listener a ticket
To a world thick with intellect that leave dumb mc's upset

[Mantra]

My sharp darts spit faster than a MK rifle
I stifle all talent and send it off the eiffel
Tower top drop, I chop up haters around the clock(niceness)
Dead ahead, stop, saved from a potential drop(like how the line above flows into this one!)
I make phonies quake when they make the mistake
Brainsick styles cured from the eternal lake
phew fiyah fam!

With rhymes that kill swifter than a red-tailed hawk
Paradox abstract thoughts, tie knots, bred a scotsman
I stand up and get counted as a man with no suntan
But i'm closer to the american dream, a fan of the supreme($ lines of rawness there!)

Crazy paving, lazing in grazing lands while wood engraving
Enslaving minds with my witty mouth, silver spraying
Nice!

So i heal wounds with bandages and fortune manages
To erupt and cause mass damages all across the planet
Whew good imagery there!

The weak will sneak up and speak critique every week
So i slap them bitches back to the capital of mozambique
With the full force of a lion, with dull rappers admiring
My style shining bright like the star city of orion
More ill ass imagery, and lines are tight, keep writing fam.

[KERZO]

cheers for the feedback j.t.s, i've started freestyling over different types of beats so that should help change my rap style in future flows....but like all of ya'll, i'm always learning....