I'll post my verses in here. Your feedback would be greatly appreciated!
I'll post my verses in here. Your feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:06 AM.
The Archdemon
I'm the presence of malevolence in a human shell.
I was exiled from heaven, then exhumed from hell
For challenging the domes of subterranean forces.
I travelled to Rome on Transylvanian horses.
I stood quietly cloaked in a robe of shadows
In the graveyard behind the oldest chapel
Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
From their tombs to display their remorselessness
Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals.
Strip life from a carcass; I writhe in the darkness.
The eyes of the heartless are wide as the skies that are starless.
And as they glance at the moon,
Man is consumed with the dances and chants of the doomed
I was spawned from dark semen.
Hearts bleed in the presence of The Archdemon.
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:05 AM.
Are you hollocaust? Just kidding but ya spits somewhat remind me of his.
My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
Hell razah
Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
From their tombs to display their remorselessness
Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals
Nice lines crazy imagery's ridiculous!
My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
Hell razah
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:07 AM.
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:08 AM.
Forest of the Damned
An emcee with a gift, I creep through the mist.
If you speak with a lisp, you will cease to exist.
My tongue spits spears from my lungs and you fear
That they'll puncture your ears. You stumble in tears
To your final destination, your final resting place in
The Forest of the Damned as a mindless mental patient.
Feathers fall from my back, and burn to ashes
A blood red path is the only night passage
Through the dark forest with a chilling cold breeze
Where the wolves can't match the howls of old trees.
Death lingers with the stench of stale corpses.
Crows pick apart the bones of pale horses.
Time stands still in the endless night
The sky is pitch black with no moon in sight.
As you scream to the heavens with your greatest yell
Bony hands from below pull you straight to hell.
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:08 AM.
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:10 AM.
word, same here wish he'd revert back sometimes, yo check out my myspace page(in the link) and lemme kno what u think, if u could find a way i'd love 2 collab we use the same imagery,concepts etc. ....get at me dunny
Last edited by Sleep Sinatra; 01-24-2008 at 10:47 PM.
Darken Your Life
Golden leaves in the winds, the moon at its zenith.
My everlasting youth is renewed like the Phoenix.
Mock the cathedral. My evil cerebral
Is dark as the raven on top of the steeple.
I sit on my throne amidst the unknown
Perfiduous poems are prone to split bones.
I walk with a writhe; I talk with a scythe.
Harken its cries as it darkens the skies.
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:11 AM.
liked the first one a lot dude
"What is the meanin' of crime? is it Criminals Robbin Innocent Muthafuckaz Everytime?"
Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:12 AM.
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