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    Default Tecknowledgist

    I'll post my verses in here. Your feedback would be greatly appreciated!
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:06 AM.

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    The Archdemon

    I'm the presence of malevolence in a human shell.
    I was exiled from heaven, then exhumed from hell
    For challenging the domes of subterranean forces.
    I travelled to Rome on Transylvanian horses.
    I stood quietly cloaked in a robe of shadows
    In the graveyard behind the oldest chapel
    Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
    From their tombs to display their remorselessness
    Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
    Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals.
    Strip life from a carcass; I writhe in the darkness.
    The eyes of the heartless are wide as the skies that are starless.
    And as they glance at the moon,
    Man is consumed with the dances and chants of the doomed
    I was spawned from dark semen.
    Hearts bleed in the presence of The Archdemon.
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:05 AM.

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    Are you hollocaust? Just kidding but ya spits somewhat remind me of his.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
    From their tombs to display their remorselessness
    Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
    Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals

    Nice lines crazy imagery's ridiculous!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Quote Originally Posted by J.T.S. View Post
    Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
    From their tombs to display their remorselessness
    Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
    Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals

    Nice lines crazy imagery's ridiculous!
    Thanks man
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:07 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by D-Rez View Post
    This is Tecknowledgist's alter-ego, The Archdemon, and this is his introduction

    The Archdemon

    I'm the presence of malevolence in a human shell.
    Wasn't exiled from heaven, but exhumed from hell
    For challenging the domes of subterranean forces.
    I travelled to Rome on Transylvanian horses.
    I stood quietly cloaked in a robe of shadows
    In the graveyard behind the oldest chapel
    Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
    From their tombs to display their remorselessness
    Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
    Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals.
    Strip life from a carcass; I writhe in the darkness.
    The eyes of the heartless are wide as the skies that are starless.
    And as they glance at the moon,
    Man is consumed with the dances and chants of the doomed
    I was spawned from dark semen.
    Hearts bleed in the presence of The Archdemon.
    nice verse son you have allot of depth

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    Quote Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS View Post
    nice verse son you have allot of depth
    Thanks bro
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:08 AM.

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    Forest of the Damned

    An emcee with a gift, I creep through the mist.
    If you speak with a lisp, you will cease to exist.
    My tongue spits spears from my lungs and you fear
    That they'll puncture your ears. You stumble in tears
    To your final destination, your final resting place in
    The Forest of the Damned as a mindless mental patient.
    Feathers fall from my back, and burn to ashes
    A blood red path is the only night passage
    Through the dark forest with a chilling cold breeze
    Where the wolves can't match the howls of old trees.
    Death lingers with the stench of stale corpses.
    Crows pick apart the bones of pale horses.
    Time stands still in the endless night
    The sky is pitch black with no moon in sight.
    As you scream to the heavens with your greatest yell
    Bony hands from below pull you straight to hell.
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:08 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by D-Rez View Post
    I'm not feelin' this one too much...I might edit it later


    Forest of the Damned

    An emcee with a gift, I creep through the mist.
    If you speak with a lisp, you will cease to exist.
    My tongue spits spears from my lungs and you fear
    That they'll puncture your ears. You stumble in tears
    To your final destination, your final resting place in
    The Forest of the Damned as a mindless mental patient.
    Feathers fall from my back, and burn to ashes
    A blood red path is the only night passage
    Through the dark forest with a chilling cold breeze
    Where the wolves can't match the howls of old trees.
    Death lingers with the stench of stale corpses.
    Crows pick apart the bones of pale horses.
    Time stands still in the endless night
    The sky is pitch black with no moon in sight.
    As you scream to the heavens with your greatest yell
    Bony hands from below pull you straight to hell.
    with the right beat this could b an ill ass song, ur way of writing reminds me of jus allah if u used more multi's u do audio as well??

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sleep Sinatra View Post
    with the right beat this could b an ill ass song, ur way of writing reminds me of jus allah if u used more multi's u do audio as well??
    Good eye, early Jus Allah is a huge inspiration.

    I don't do audio, but I'd like to
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:10 AM.

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    word, same here wish he'd revert back sometimes, yo check out my myspace page(in the link) and lemme kno what u think, if u could find a way i'd love 2 collab we use the same imagery,concepts etc. ....get at me dunny

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    Darken Your Life

    Golden leaves in the winds, the moon at its zenith.
    My everlasting youth is renewed like the Phoenix.
    Mock the cathedral. My evil cerebral
    Is dark as the raven on top of the steeple.
    I sit on my throne amidst the unknown
    Perfiduous poems are prone to split bones.
    I walk with a writhe; I talk with a scythe.
    Harken its cries as it darkens the skies.
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:11 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tecknowledgist View Post
    The Archdemon

    I'm the presence of malevolence in a human shell.
    Wasn't exiled from heaven, but exhumed from hell
    For challenging the domes of subterranean forces.
    I travelled to Rome on Transylvanian horses.
    I stood quietly cloaked in a robe of shadows
    In the graveyard behind the oldest chapel
    Metaphors I spit, made the corpses lift
    From their tombs to display their remorselessness
    Winds devoured men when I held my pencil
    Listen for their screams layered under instrumentals.
    Strip life from a carcass; I writhe in the darkness.
    The eyes of the heartless are wide as the skies that are starless.
    And as they glance at the moon,
    Man is consumed with the dances and chants of the doomed
    I was spawned from dark semen.
    Hearts bleed in the presence of The Archdemon.
    Wow son you got some nice wordplay and heart stopping metaphores

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    liked the first one a lot dude
    "What is the meanin' of crime? is it Criminals Robbin Innocent Muthafuckaz Everytime?"

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    Quote Originally Posted by andy_gza View Post
    liked the first one a lot dude
    Thanks man
    Last edited by Tecknowledgist; 11-22-2008 at 01:12 AM.

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