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    Geo the God Of Diction rzarazorrzarazorsharp's Avatar
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    Looking at this blank page makes me wanna' fill it with words/ preserving these nervous/ thoughts that have me feeling disturbed/.

    Happy feelings emerge/ rarely unless I'm dreaming/. The worlds burning I'm barely breathing/ deamons have me bleeding ...my words are unheard/

    I'll die old and alone/ most likely unknown and untold/ in society's poem/ of money, glamour, and gold.

    wishing sunny's hours were frozen/ I'd feel empowered that moment/ holdin' emotions of an ocean stretching out in the open/

    drenched in showers of hopelessness/ hoping that/ i won't forget/ my most affectionate moments/ of those who love and know me best/

    convincing myself tomorrow is different/ yet everyday is the same/ my sorrows' depicted/ in earthly pictures/ and then these pictures are framed/

    I often wish/ just one would switch/ and these awful pictures would change/ but upon submission of this wish/ the horrific picture remains/

    I often think,/ though i'm in a position where even thinking is pain/ that my soul will be set free, and only my battered corpse will remain/

    Becuase theres' nothing more soothing/ then escaping this world of illusions/ it don't matter if it means losing/ your life when your hearts already covered in bruises/

    i spent my life touching souls and yet nobody felt me/ I'm just a man with no vocal cords screaming "please, somebody help me".

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    i spent my life touching souls and yet nobody felt me/ I'm just a man with no vocal cords screaming "please, somebody help me".
    That's real, nice peice, keep on dropping

    peace.




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    Quote Originally Posted by SurreaL
    That's real, nice peice, keep on dropping

    peace.

    agree
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    Default Re: <<<<Help Me>>>>

    thanks man.

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    Default Re: <<<<Help Me>>>>

    definitely not the best i've seen you drop, but solid to say the least... it was very candid, which is always respectable...

    PEACE

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    Default Re: <<<<Help Me>>>>

    Quote Originally Posted by PsYkOsUs
    definitely not the best i've seen you drop, but solid to say the least... it was very candid, which is always respectable...

    PEACE

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    Oh no of course not...i don't expect every verse i drop to be considered the greatest verse ever....But i Do have different personalities on different beats. This is a different flow from my usual stuff.

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    Default Re: <<<<Help Me>>>>

    It has its own emotional side this verse. But it was decent. Flowed well also. And not too much complexity to it, nice

    Peace

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