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Thread: VOTES NEEDED: Fermi Paradox Vs Sleep Sinatra

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    Default Fermi Paradox Vs Sleep Sinatra, Sleep Sinatra wins...

    ROUND 1



    Ayo, I come at ya swinging swords, with no remorse
    Formin task forces to knock ya off ya high horse
    The Mic phone killer, My words hold weight, a stone piller
    I'm raw like thriller, while your morally ben stiller

    Freezin you in the spot where ya cold knuckles hang
    I fuck my girl while ya home beating meat with ya hand
    Only demand the high command, my spits ya never understand
    Performing at great heights with tight ropes on which i stand

    Up straight, My armour plate deflects ya strikes cos they sedate
    I create noxious clouds of poisonous verses that contaminate
    All your lines, Then you find that ya cant communicate
    So ya hand the mic right back to the great

    D.a.v.e, intelligently concealing my killing spree
    Coming from a more acute angle, I mangle and wrangle any MC
    When I lyrically wax the board, then cruise out to sea
    while you wail on the mic like a barren banshee





    Sleep Sinatra:


    this faggot think he hard but aint got lines better 2 quote/
    push his nose bone into his skull and fuckin severe his throat/
    veterans kno-sinatra never boast but homie lets b honest/
    on a bed of spikes u get ya body "slammed" like onyx/
    u made from men or mice? cuz i stay "chasing rats" like thomastom and
    jerry)
    release from gats the comets- bloodloss have u barfin quick.../
    u mark and snitch the main target which i carve an split/
    the consequence of every fuckin tard that spit/
    "bite" so much got me on sum holdin garlic shitvampires, they bite...)
    ya face i gnarl an twist there aint no helpin what the medics do/
    arsenic residue laced in ya last meal i fed 2 u/
    deadin duke, ya body found layed in the slum/
    so go ahead an off ya self cuz homie its done/
    im atillah the hun and a kalashnikov gun in 1..../
    Last edited by 444trumpets; 03-05-2008 at 12:01 AM.
    WE ARE DISCUSSING THE END OF THE WORLD-OR HOW TO DELAY IT.

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    Round 1
    WE ARE DISCUSSING THE END OF THE WORLD-OR HOW TO DELAY IT.

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    Fermi Paradox

    your verse sounded more like a verse off a song than a battle verse.........i mean, there weren't really any personals, that's the main thing i look for in battles.......

    and the punches weren't really there either.....i felt like every line i read was setting up the next one for a punchline, but they really weren't.......

    like i said, it would be a cool verse on a song, but not for a battle......

    Sleep Sinatra

    again, not really any personals here, but i don't know what personals you could have against dude........

    this verse sounds more like a battle verse though.........good flow, good structure, kind of fell off in the end, but it was a better verse than the first one in the battle......

    my vote goes to Sleep Sinatra

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    I liked Sleeps verse more, it had a lot of good punches in. I agree with daliff89 Femi's verse did sound like just a regular verse.

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    i disagree with the above comments. neither got personal. not a single name meta. fermi missed a big one on "sleep"
    i woulda spit something about a paradox or aliens since thats what fermis paradox is about.

    but the tom and jerry and the garlic lines stood out.

    so i vote sleep.

    lets get a lil grimier next round.

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    Yeah i agree with the comments, I dont usually battle so i gotta try an adjust my style for this type of rhyming....ill get to work on the 2nd attack soon


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    so far my vote's with Sleep but I think this battle should go 2 rounds as well as all the tourney battles!

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    i submitted my second verse to 444 last night.......

    he said to get my shit in ASAP....

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    there are two rounds? what if one guy wins the first round and the other guy wins the second meaning its a draw?


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    Quote Originally Posted by JackOfHearts View Post
    there are two rounds? what if one guy wins the first round and the other guy wins the second meaning its a draw?
    that was my question too.

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    those votes dont count...once both rounds are done, vote on the whole thing...

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    scoobydoobydododo....aha
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