VOTES NEEDED (BM): JackOfHearts Vs Visions unseen

[444trumpets]

ROUND 1



JackOfHearts:


Your steamin excretions not even hot shit
Bounce your head off the ceiling like a mosh pit

You couldn't touch me even with a frogs lick
Go get stoned and you still couldn't rock shit *1

Picking your membrane like a psycho locksmith
The time is up for unseen, obnoxious apocalpyse

Hang your fuckin neck and still you cant top this
Outwrite and outwrap(rap) you, watch me box this *2

Fag tried to shoot me down, but his cock missed
Here the beanstalks reversed cos jack is monstrous





Visions Unseen:


Jack Hearts n’ leave you with the Prosthetic,
my glory is prophetic while your style is just Pathetic
A unintentional diuretic, those ain’t punchlines you spit, you just must be
too stupid to get it
Fuck goin indirect like burrowing a tunnel,
I chop necks till they guzzle then drown you with blood n’a funnel
Pummel on this rookie just to get warmed up,
I keep it sick like two girls with one cup
Come get fucked up, your style is too weak like a package sent at
Christmas
It was a red dot between your eyes soon as Trumpets put you on the hit
list
Tragic but you gonna need a closed casket, tossed the ratchet just to
bludgeon you with a hatchet
You can’t match it just like bong hits, you leave ‘em with the sulphur
whenever you spit
Stinkin up the place, bad math the way you get erased and replaced with
correct numbers
You couldn’t fuck with this grizzly even in my slumber, Jim or Jeff? Not
sure if you Dumb or Dumber
The cookie crumbler, I hand out fates and checkmates while you live off
of hand outs and check mates
Don’t step up to the plate if you ain’t swingin for homeruns, I’m beamin
this geek with heat to murder the bum
Leavin him frozen numb like Antartic winters, this rat is stayin underground
permantley like he was Master Splinter

[MaXiMus Da MaNtis]

Jack Of Hearts Tried But There Was No Complexity As I Red His Verse I Could Tell He Had Already Lost Without Reading Visions Verse


Vote Vision

[KERZO]

Jacks verse lacked any verbal dexterity or originality, Visions unseen used good imagery and the wordplay was better.

So my vote for this round is VISIONS UNSEEN

[STYLE]

yeah jack 8 bars of that shit ain't cuttin it.

vision gets the vote.

[daliff89]

i don't know if there's like a 3-0 rule or anything, so i'll vote anyway........

Jack of Hearts

your verse was REALLY simple.......like, it's a better battle verse than the weird stories i've seen from you in battles before, but it's just not a good verse IMO........rhyming 2 syllbes at the very end of each line for 16 lines is kind of boring dude......there weren't many punches in there either.......

Visions Unseen

to be honest, i laughed my ass off at this shit, and when i got done i said to myself 'he killed it'.........it's not really that anything really 'wowed' me in there, but it was just a good battle verse.....

my vote also goes to Visions Unseen

[The Ghost]

I'm giving it to Visions, but in all honesty I know they didn't see each other verses until now but it seems as if Visions had a "vision" of what lied ahead lol

[JackOfHearts]

not many punches? every line was a punch! i either use to much imagery or far to little imagery with you guys make up your minds!! thanks for voting anyways.

[JackOfHearts]

also lines to long or lines to short, to much wordplay or too little....it happens with every verse! though in al honesty unseen deserved this win well played mucker!

[daliff89]

i don't know about everyone else, but when i said there weren't many punches, i meant there weren't many nice punches......

like 'get stoned you still couldn't rock shit' just sounds kinda.....lame.....

no offense or anything, that's just how i feel.....

[JackOfHearts]

no worries man, thanks for taking the time to vote.

[oDoUoSoKo]

if theres two rounds, lets go

[JackOfHearts]

how does this work, hes won the first round what happens if i win the 2nd? that ll be 1-1 will there be a third?

[oDoUoSoKo]

he didnt win the first round, u guys made mistakes, the voting happens after both rounds.

[Visionz]

I'm just gonna go head and throw this out there, Jack build off it if you want to, I don't give a shit , drop when you're ready and then lets get some votes



Rock symposiums like breakers to linoleum,
Set fire to the scene, douse Jack in petroleum
Your flesh turns to ashes and then I smash 'em to dust
This pussy's full of hot air, they call it a queef when u bust
Save me the disgust from your windgust Mr Bitches R' US
I shower in W. D. 40, I'm unaffected by rust
So trust while your dragging your feet on carpet trying to bring static
I'm at the front door waiting with lightning bolts n'a fully automatic
G36 when I gotta go plastic, travel to London undetected n' shit really get drastic
Mom's is at the front door seeing if the Milkman is back for more
When one shot make two drop and then that milk just pours
You runnin up stairs screamin "Jack's gone to the store"
what kind of jackass you playin me for?
In these battlefields I surrive by sendin them 4's and 5's
Your soul would've been wise to choose nine lives
Puttin eight holes in you that feel like hot knives
Mind endorphise while your body strives for death,
Red bubbles burstin from ya last breath
No last request, just a mess of a mess
And Unseen off on another murder conquest

[444trumpets]

JackOfHearts:


e i e i o
up the league we go
wen we're in europe
this is what'l we sing
we are the geordies
super geordies
keegan is our keegan

we are the geordies
and we dont like the mackems
wen we see 1 we'l whack em
we are the geordies
always united
the toon
the toon the toon the toon.