short rap

[u-turn]

know the ledge, flow bout the real
then chop cats down like banana peels
dead bodys found throught the feild like peaches
failing on ya hustle like trees droppin leaves
crazy troops, shootin at anything that moves, lazy fools
stuck calling me while hazy tryin move
the arsenal, ya left only half partial
leave you in worse condition then what you were born in
ugly fuck, someone slap him silly
before i cap him silly
left broken like a glassjaw
class in session you just another one of the masses pawned


added, from another sites battle, i didn't use this
blazing the beast, keeping it all together, fabricating the beat
i'm educating the youth at the same time paying St. Gregory
coined the word biblical, leavin holes in history
retrieving hoe's misery to plug it in, heaving flows at the industry
anyone who rips my gold interior faces the hammer
dummy buyin books bout rappin, kids slayed by the hammer
you said no pre-written shit, just 8 minutes
a killer bee you bitching like kids, thrust 8 stingers
into your heart, thwarted, efforts useless
you get thrown to the bottom carrying a beggers repect

[Grim Reapa]

nice work u turn i would have personally gone with peel instead of chop just my opinion....

ONE

[u-turn]

thanks

i'm a warlord wit war story boards
bout the hoes, draning, ect, gory world
the type like quentin tarintino pulp
digest it, the flows make you gulp
slugs in ya body, huggin the tree
find a shorty, slugging using three
bullets, you can catch one if your lucky enough
cuz god knows your ugly enough
leave heaven split, gods wrist slit
blood drippin through the cracking
form of acid rain, the rapid pain
like lucifer took captive of pain
its survival of the fittest
and i'm eyeing no one but my mofuckin self dick
you a fake ass kid like catchin hiv
shoulda been a priority
i smell a snitch like drug tests
now you want hugs from those who won respect
fuck looking cute
i'm looking for the ugliest
fuck ryhming, my souls rechid
and my flows reching
for the pretty things in life, from jewels to diamonds
bout to knock out the closest fool for his curcuits
a shotty wit a buckshot, you kno i ain't missin
what do i have to paint the picture?
sitten in my castle, rippen the cattle
i'm the shepard, you the baby holdin the rattle
theres rules guidelines n all the other shit
and i ain't lookin for the i love my mother shit
leave you kill't wit your picture vacant at the funeral
should of known, i painted the mural
burnin shit down cuz i'm an arsonist
runnin shit now cuz i'm a larsonist
you know nobody's stopping this
the flows hot hotty, no dropping next
with these ct cats, anything that moves
many men scratched my crew
but to pay em back. used the m16
penduluym raps got you thinkin bout me
swat crews raid, i move then spray
shattering eardrums, what you say?

[tekunique]

added, from another sites battle, i didn't use this
blazing the beast, keeping it all together, fabricating the beat
i'm educating the youth at the same time paying St. Gregory
coined the word biblical, leavin holes in history
retrieving hoe's misery to plug it in, heaving flows at the industry
anyone who rips my gold interior faces the hammer
dummy buyin books bout rappin, kids slayed by the hammer
you said no pre-written shit, just 8 minutes
a killer bee you bitching like kids, thrust 8 stingers
into your heart, thwarted, efforts useless
you get thrown to the bottom carrying a beggers repect

i was feelin this verse, good shit.

[Father N Dangerous]

i didn't read the second post u turn, but the first was dope, keep it up

[Killer Falcon]

yeah your improving your work, the thing i think you could improve would be to make the bars of more similar length so it has a better flow, sorta like in the second verse.

peace

[IslamicAssassin]

The periodic table of elements doesn't hold
the components to parallel the chemistry that I withold.
A nuclear reactor, disguised as a human
possessing the power to disintegrate structures.
I'm sealing off ya' doom and ya fate.
So playa hate me.
My music gone still be boomin'
enough to leave you chili-er
than black beans, peppers, and cumin.
It would be better for you
if you occupied a room
playin' with yo' Playstation III
while eatin' a bowl of Kaboom's and
masturbating, with a hand full of
mashed potatoes,
while ya' momma in the living room
watchin' Fried Green Tomatoes.
Any alternative that could keep you
from crossing paths
with the deadliest massacre
since Egypt felt Jehovah's Wrath.
Miraculous like Moses's Staff
or a 1 foot giraffe.
Or Jesus, when he took a 40 day fast.
The First shall be Last.
The Last shall be somewhere deaf and nameless,
living in the past.
From the Hamptons to Calabassas,
I'll embarass ya' ass!

[TUCO]

dude.....u suck

peace