steels' verse got held down by the fact he felt that he needed to explain every line, and more because some of those explinations seemed longer than the line they explained......no real personals in there that i could see, unless the gun talk was supposed to be play on dude's name, which i doubt......punches weren't really there either..........
Ruger wouldn't of had a verse if it wasn't for steels' verse........i mean, damn near every line was fed off steels' verse.......i can't really knock that though, since it wasn't mentioned in the rules, it's just kind of common courtesy to not feed of the first guy's verse..........i think that alot of Ruger's bars were dumb despite the feeding though.......'leave his pants full with poop'?? no.
again, as with most of the battles i've voted on lately, i don't think this was a very good one......steels had bars that he felt he needed to explain, which means they're not hitting like they should, and Ruger had an extremely simple scheme most of the time.......
my vote goes to Ruger
but i also would like to say that all the bitching that steels seems to be doing about the votes is just stupid.......dude, it's one line, who cares if he changed his avatar??? that line makes more sense than half of the other lines in oyour verse anyway.........
take the votes, and in my opinion the loss, like a man and keep it moving.......it's the internet.
anf if there's a problem with anything i said, keep your comments in verse form.
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