VOTES NEEDED-demented vs Lil' Ruger

[thatKid]

I haven't attempted any form of lyric (rock, rap, etc.) since last year. so. yea. just post if you wanna win. I'll fight a veteran too. if you want to go first just post so.

juss wanna pass time till the Jets take BC's Matt Ryan

will use the voting system wu-corp uses

[Lil' Ruger]

ill battle you go head and spit like 16lines nuttin big

[thatKid]

ok hold up

I'm gonna start off with simple shit
you a fudge packer, I'm crying foul like a little kid
only difference is when shits done, you'll be dead
you couldn't get a piece of me if I were sliced bread
like baseballs you touch a mans wood to get off
trying not to choke you start to cough
you know I'm much sicker at this rapping
if the world stopped my record you'd be spinning
see I'm rusty as fuck, just means I roll hard
the only Babe you holding for life a trading card
you fake, if life were a movie you'd be the special effect
win or lose my blindfire hits cause I'm hell bent
faggot, heads the only tongue twister you got
trust, I'm putting down shots like the and1 crew in a lot
you out of style like wrinkles in a shirt
dig your grave to hell, can't stop like pringles in the drt

yea........ time for me to lose. too many brain farts and watching the mets game

is 1 round cool for you? I'm too rusty. even when I did post freestyles I was rusty then too

[Lil' Ruger]

ok listen homeboy me im a real rida
my guns turn ya fitted cap to a sunvisor i break kids like abusive homes
and i got a pair of bumpy knuckles nigga fuck the chrome
and i didnt even read your verse but i put work on ur chin
so hard nigga then make you go tell your friends
son my upbringin' is bad ill have this nigga gone in 60 seconds like he was a fad
and u suckin ya dad spittin real wack this nigga step to me like he big in the sack
and ill lyrically annihilate him physically cremate him then punch this niggas shit so hard his eyes ill dialate em so homeboy hell yea ill let my squirt off
my style burn niggas like cookin bacon wit ya shirt off
and i know most of these niggas hate me but ill school em like they ABC's
Anihilate Bitches and Cut they seeds and if u aint get that punchline
im cookin shit nasty like cafeteria ladies at lunchtime and hell yea im into Special effects
like the way ya girls eyes get big when she look at my neck
face me your out of your element i would build with you but they arrested my development
and1 i got the whole crew the escalade the helicopters plus i spit hotsauce dude

sorry i didnt get to u later quik round 2 maybe?

[thatKid]

yea, I'll do a 2nd round

nevermind

[Lil' Ruger]

o ok then i didnt think u would show spit now. same amount of bars

[thatKid]

ok

[Lil' Ruger]

wtf NIGGGA HURY THE FUCK UP DONT BITCH OUT ON ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[thatKid]

I forgot about this, cause I went to my brothers

my internets acting funny right now,

[thatKid]

my bad. I had to deal with dialup for a few days. I'll post after the nba playoff games. nevermind I think its half time

only thing you delivering the belt
only time you had me heated when I saw you melt
I'll pick you apart like fat kids opening candy wrappers
I bet your crew suck on the mic like faggy rappers
and don't worry I roll solo, no backup
not a nice guy, letting you drip like dew on cups
faggot, I'll steal that sparkle out ya eye
when the crowd know you dead they sigh
you can't fool me, I know your name apply to your dick
what you gonna say, dog ate yo lines, I know ya tricks
getting down to the last round
fag wanna eat the best meat with his burger king crown
slap a kid so hard its like I traced my hand on a face
three zero's on your scorecard ain't needed at this pace
don't need heater, each letters hot like the alphabet soup
runing circles round you like hoola hoop

even more rusty

shitttttttttttttt... I suuuuuuuuck

[oDoUoSoKo]

i told u guys not to make call out threads.

[Lil' Ruger]

aiyo i spit shit like i cant pronounce my P's infect ya seeds
and like dust on paperwork i did dirty deeds nerd i feed
and Spit punches after punches and if you beef it'll be punches after punches
the sickest out the bunch kid spit wit malaria
and like a tube on ya dick "Cum through" im daring ya
aint no comparing ta the illest MC slit ya throat create spillage till ur head is empty
dont tempt me my click is wild like borneo you corny hoes
get fucked over like it was a porn-eyo and a scoreboard only holds to numbers
i got the 45 nigga i only need two numbers Smack? nigga ill smack you like the DVD
then ill "put you back in your place" wit a back hand B like i was a tennis player*
and you an unkown nigga ya area couldnt be any grayer
and demented you not that lets switch names cuz you lil im the bigga nigga despite ya claims
and i aint got a sparkle in my eye thats just the reflection of my wrist
keep talkin all this shit ull see the reflection of the clip
and this is the last round i dont know my ABC's so this what i say dough
leave this nigga wit a K then then skip the LMN yo (KO like knockout)

*i smack him first to one side then put him back where his face was at first wit da back hand
Good battle btw come bettter next time tho. ELEVATE just know tho im only 14

[Lil' Ruger]

Uppin 4 Votes!

[daliff89]

FIRST ROUND

demented wasn't good at all......probably the worst of all the battles i've voted on here.....all his lines were either really corny or really bad.....best bar was probably the special effect line......

Ruger wasn't much better........alot of played out gun talk at the beginning.....no real witty punches......but he did better than demented......

SECOND ROUND

demented did even worse this time.....i don't want to be an asshole, but 'when they crowd know you dead they sigh' is probably the most lame line i've ever heard......

Ruger had a better verse this round that the first time........but any time you have to explain your lines, they're not going to be good.....

i don't think either dude did really well in any way at all.......but my vote has to go to Ruger

[Sgt Holly Wood]

first round
flow- ruger
creativity-ruger
punches- ruger
vocab- ruger

same shit pretty much for the second..
vote-ruger