VOTES NEEDED-Makaveli662 Vs. demented

[Maccabee Ridah]

Yo man, u wanna do thiz shyt..?!????????

16 lines, till 6 votes, i'll drop first..?!????



PS - it's my first battle ever....

[thatKid]

umm. yea. drop first whenever you ready

[Maccabee Ridah]

Here it iz:

Aiyo, I'm pulling triggaz, crushing nigga'z last point of defence,
Get ready for my verbal attacks, they will blow ur fucking sence.
Fuck it, I'm blasting u in my third line,
Don't even wright ur verse, it'll counterfeit mine.
Check it, my methods on the microphone's bangin'
Wu-Tang slang, I'll leave your headpiece hangin'
Wait, u r now scared to the death...?!
Yeah? Yeah?! Better go, curse the day we have met....
Fuck with me - look out, cuz here I come,
ready to beat u down like the RZA on a drum.
Yeah, fat beats made by mine Roland MV,
Don't be shamed, better scream "mak iz realest G"
And I'm really proud that I made u feel dread,
when u get fucked up by newbie, it's just fucking bad.
That's the standard case when u front my liricism,
My style is like P.L.O's - agressive expertisim...

OK, now ur turn...
drop them wheneever u ready....

[thatKid]

ok. I'll prolly lose but, oh well. hold on

I'll edit my post

edit - verse

every move I make deadly, smacking in this bout
every cut I make clean, like watching my mouth
I know inside you softer then your belly fat dude
this shits not necessary, but I got to deal with you
can't smell, see, taste, hear, or feel, your lyrics weak
plus this shits non-sense, I done killt you already
only time you out doing me on a spending spree fag
not even mentioning the fact makeveli carry the bags
only time you stand out here when you bold the print
can't handle pressure, even soda pop you can't hold it
get me dripping? I just rain down on you like the clouds
beefs too much, like his clothes he's gotta iron it out
as this shits about to conclude I start the procedure
put him and another bitch in the ring like a under card feature
only way you get another shots in the parallel world
and player, only x' and o's you getting in a get well card

sorry I took so long. but I went like brain dead after the first word

[thatKid]

nevermind

[Maccabee Ridah]

kk....
now wait till 6 votes....

[Maccabee Ridah]

*bump*

I just wanna know what is the routine here..?!
How long does it take to get 6 votes....?!
Um ny here so I dunno know what is the drill here..?!

[oDoUoSoKo]

im sorry, it usually take a lil while...ill change the title.

[BornPower]

ok. I'll prolly lose but, oh well. hold on

every move I make deadly, smacking in this bout
every cut I make clean, like watching my mouth
I know inside you softer then your belly fat dude
this shits not necessary, but I got to deal with you
can't smell, see, taste, hear, or feel, your lyrics weak
plus this shits non-sense, I done killt you already
only time you out doing me on a spending spree fag
not even mentioning the fact makeveli carry the bags
only time you stand out here when you bold the print
can't handle pressure, even soda pop you can't hold it
get me dripping? I just rain down on you like the clouds
beefs too much, like his clothes he's gotta iron it out
as this shits about to conclude I start the procedure
put him and another bitch in the ring like a under card feature
only way you get another shots in the parallel world
and player, only x' and o's you getting in a get well card

sorry I took so long. but I went like brain dead after the first word

VERSUS

Aiyo, I'm pulling triggaz, crushing nigga'z last point of defence,
Get ready for my verbal attacks, they will blow ur fucking sence.
Fuck it, I'm blasting u in my third line,
Don't even wright ur verse, it'll counterfeit mine.
Check it, my methods on the microphone's bangin'
Wu-Tang slang, I'll leave your headpiece hangin'
Wait, u r now scared to the death...?!
Yeah? Yeah?! Better go, curse the day we have met....
Fuck with me - look out, cuz here I come,
ready to beat u down like the RZA on a drum.
Yeah, fat beats made by mine Roland MV,
Don't be shamed, better scream "mak iz realest G"
And I'm really proud that I made u feel dread,
when u get fucked up by newbie, it's just fucking bad.
That's the standard case when u front my liricism,
My style is like P.L.O's - agressive expertisim...


I liked the ideas behind D's verse but Mak had his put together better.

My vote goes to Mak.

[oDoUoSoKo]

1-0

[Ritter]

Im going for Mak.

[Maccabee Ridah]

*bump*

Is there any1 to vote..?!
It takes ages to get 6 votes out here.....

[Brick Thunderbird]

Neither one of yall really hit hard but Mak got this.

[Maccabee Ridah]

Yo mr. Dusk it is 3-0 for me, and I guess it is KO..
So can u please close thread and add it to my body count (stats)

Thanks a lot...........
peace..............
-suuuuuu///

[Maccabee Ridah]

Yo mr. Dusk it is 3-0 for me, and I guess it is KO..
So can u please close thread and add it to my body count (stats)

Thanks a lot...........
peace..............
-suuuuuu///

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