The Official Poetry Thread

[Strange Fruit]

One Step at a Time. (freewrite)

same illusions
drift...
drift....

stop.

is this the concrete evidence i was told to wait for?

strange to look into a mirror
and not recognise The Fallen in front
of me.

slide....

my hands, down this unusual scene:

scars fro a razor i stole in Paris,
burns from a cigarrette i killed for.

they called me criminal, spat,
and ended their days with a visit
through my cut womanhood...

it still stings...

i thought the cutting would work,
the wound stays,
the pain is greater,

and i'm bigger than i should be.

they called it my cleansing process..

it was all i could do.

and now,

concrete evidence of a freedom i never wanted.

Not Guilty.

but guilty in the eyes of the white women whose
husbands i have killed.

when they rap....ed me.

[RockD]

the moon aura shines
speakin of dimes as dames and i just write lines
destined for shine as i write n keep it real
like a land of yields and land merchants i hold my skill
thirllin mc one afta another i kill
speakin of pressure as u feel that spine chill
like bill a mastermind facing a tragic fate
while i errect mentaly ya niggas just masturbate
rubin of ya'll i feel the hate but i just put the bait
ya'll took it and now are exposed as fake
is to late to lament the commonents of past times
i'm not flo'etry but my poetry trancends rhymes
schemes i'm reedemed by each word even in a battle field of many
my overflows rises and yields plenty
i know is an envy of how can he be so simple and yet original
because on the flow i'm not generic brand i'm high class chemical
if mathematics is the answer then my logic is supream n pure
cause my arithmic flow is the answer for an aching hearts cure
i'm the lure the adored the mc wit a purpose n a goal
i'm the suit all played and the dimond within the coal

look at battlefield 444trumpets thread for ORIGINAL

Wat ya think?

[Father N Dangerous]

Trials and tribulations got me hopen for new inovations/
Revolations become a #1 because of soul elimination/
Hopen for a better life, rappen about the same subject every night/
Gotta fight to survive, liven in the darkness with no light/

[Father N Dangerous]

The past effects the mind, through deja vu, it's passed a second time/
I have to press rewind, far away enough the track makes a U turn/
but few learn from the relationship the past drapes the future/
Flooded with cynical thoughts i release the first notion/
and freeze the time by suspending the earths motion/

[the funky drunk]

you carry a gun 4 a rep
others carry to protect
but whatever the reason
death will be coming - looking for souls to collect

and when he knocks on your door
dont act all surprised
like you dont sell drugs
and you dont tell lies

he's coming so start running
you better watch your back
cos theres nowhere to hide
from the devils sadistic attack

bullets cant hold him back
his figure exists in the darkness
and one things for sure
the muthaf**kers heartless

once he knows your location
your as good as gone
facing unholly incarcaration
dont you wish youd lived your life differently?

Now your burning in hell
and your never gettin out
and its all your fault
arent you proud???

remember when you killed that man?
for talkin shit?
his family said they'd have revenge
yeh this is it

for all the sins commited
all the murder
all the rape
this is payback fool - enjoy

[Strange Fruit]

Night after night, you whistle tunes of a foreign descent

And call it tradition.

Little Child, Melancholy stood there.

Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,

The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

It shouldn’t happen, not in this home…

Silence breathes here… it laughs here…

It exists.

Don’t forget yourself.

[MASTER PAI MEI]

damn as I'm sitting here,
I can literally hear the tears,
falling from my fallen peers,
eyes swollen eyeliner smears,
we all follow what we fear,
death surrounds us as we adhere,
caught in a tragic sphere,
evaporated souls seared...

[Father N Dangerous]

everyone gettin real deep in this piece. i like what i read , stay up everyone


A surge potent enough to tear the surfaces texture in a sense/
Like weight is measured in pounds, time is mesured in events/
Text words can't impress, so i'll help you invison this incertinty/
A old timer has a short life, while a teen lives an eternity/
it opens the next chapter and captures the bland design/
that we can live long and leave our footprints on the sands of time/
Draw it, it'll boost progression, and it will erase the proceedings/
It's time to throw away my clocks and put faith back into my feelings/

[MASTER PAI MEI]

why do we fight? ignite the superficial hype,
throats hoarse screaming all fucken night,
bodies tired dead burn in funeral pyres,
look at the iris and see the liar,
for what they are cosmic rays meteoric scars,
litter the earth archeologist I'm feeling the hurt,
spilling my science all over my shirt,
forcast overcast cloudy days no one laughs,
my feet are swollen walking with the torment...

[Father N Dangerous]

i call this one


~~Wanted to know~~

can true love out last time/
can i do time and still except you to be mine/
will you think of me even t hough i can't be there/
will you be true to me cuz you trully care/
can u be strong enough to make it through another season/
can u have heart enough to defend my honor if given reason/

girl i just wanted to know...

can i count on you to be on my team/
can i tell you i love you and you know exactly what i mean/
can u be my support when i need a crutch/
can i confess my love even though it can't be measured how much/

girl i just wanted to know...

will you confide in me and tell me how you feel in this letter/
will you try your best to make this bit easier and make me feel better/
can i count on you to accept my calls and be there to answer the phone/
when this bit is done can i count on you to take me home/

peace to my brother for writing this piece about his girl that they recently broke up. show sum love for emotions ya'll..

[Revolution]

Night after night, you whistle tunes of a foreign descent

And call it tradition.

Little Child, Melancholy stood there.

Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,

The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

It shouldn’t happen, not in this home…

Silence breathes here… it laughs here…

It exists.

Don’t forget yourself.

Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.

[Strange Fruit]

Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.

hmmmm.... i think i've seen this somewhere... oh wait, yes! your PM... did you save this just so you can copy and paste it?? just for me???? that's so cute Revvy!!!!

awwwwwww!!!

well... now that you've been noticed you fucking louse,
go crawl back into your little hole and wait until the world decides to notice you again.
i've had just about enough of your bullshitting on this site and you make me sick.

so BACK THE FUCK OFF YOU CREATURE!

thank you, and have a nice day.


people, continue with your poetry writing.

[Cheech Da WildKard]

Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.

What's up with you fam? ...The lady is just posting her poetry, like this thread is for. If you don't like it, kill yaself.

[Father N Dangerous]

lol straight up

[nut_end]

its said that the woman is wisdom

between the state of mind and regeneration

the center of heart that bears soul

the temple betwixt holy of holy

where lessons of the civil towards lies

are brought like eyes to the skies

and reproduced like earth and fruit

granting substance that metaphysically replenish

thoughts to thinking that lead amongst brink in

ledge where know edge thats hot and cutting

for the temperance of bearing all or nothing

about the paths pointed where compass annointed

from words to encourage prudence over courage

full hearted but never to be fool hearty

giving teeth to chew to discern smart be

patience waiting brewing and instilling

virtues veritable clues to ways not to lose

through the birth from out their womb

though preconceived in brain as full bloom

to guide along days through nights twilight

until the outter limits are transcended

and reflections are reflected before tomb is heeded