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Thread: VOTES NEEDED-Makaveli662 Vs. Shizzah

  1. 06-01-2008, 07:30 PM #16
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    Well I meant plain as in simple. Like simple but deadly. Thanks for the advice, I'll avoid stuff like that in the future.

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  2. 06-02-2008, 03:56 AM #17
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    Me too....
    Every suggestion is good.....
    And congrants again on win...!
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    no win...2-0

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    flow-Mak
    punches-shiz
    wordplay-shiz
    vocab-shiz

    interesting battle, need some practice guys...but that's what ur doing in any case...Mak, ur english is a bit strange...practice that, but good battle, dont stop.
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    Flow ~ Makaveli
    Punchelines ~ Shizzah
    Wordplay ~ Shizzah
    Vocabulary ~ Shizzah

    Obviously going first is much harder...
    My advice Mak would be to be a bit more visual...
    And try and build up for one srtong Punchline at the end say ???
    Like Shizzah's last line.

    PEACE
    Quote Originally Posted by Visions Unseen View Post
    In that case Sizzah gots this one with the more direct punches and an overall wittier verse, both could use some practice with imagery and being concise, peace to both yall

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  5. 06-04-2008, 07:45 AM #20
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    *bump* Dusk I think this battle is over
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  6. 09-06-2008, 11:37 AM #21
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