VOTES NEEDED-Shizzah vs Demented

**Ritter** · 06-15-2008, 06:49 PM

24 lines, you go first, like we settled.

It's on.

**thatKid** · 06-15-2008, 09:57 PM

checking in, I'll edit to stick my verse in

kid can't get a word out, clear ya throat
change this babies act, better fear me ho
the kids stuck, pondering his next move
in a casket there ain't no wiggle room
reading this you're ready for a new one
check your rep, the corp new you were done
king of a jungle? tropicana juice only punch you deliver
you for breakfast, your parents for lunch and dinner
don't talk how you ill smoking me for a comeback
showing your ass crack your version of a flashback
bust a bullet in your ass repeatedly
like looping a part in a porn movie
see homie, I know you ain't a g or a druggie
drawing up some x's and o's asking "Can you hug me?"
raid his house, in and out quick, shizz a fag
can't afford a gold fish, so he jizz's in a bag
shits already dead wrapped up underground
bombed so bad he got a ten on the richter now
don't run, if I don't do it I got an insane crew
now your feelings hurt like a blind man raped you
call me fag, substance is what your words lack
pussy on my mind like Dr. Seuss, got a cat in the hat
its over now, like the radio broke, put the tape on
kicking it with your bitch doggy style like I have no arms

I think thats 24 lines. Hopefully I did better then versus makaveli

**Ritter** · 06-16-2008, 07:06 AM

Rhymes talking about pussy and hugging
Beat me with that? You must be bugging
I'm hardcore, I chop ya fucking head off
You strangle me and I just cough
I'm invincible, regenerate like I'm like C.B.
Infectious paragraphs, leaving you with TB
Wreckage of your mental without an instrumental
Knock out your dental, and that's just being gentle
I'm just showing mercy,because I'm sentimental
You're like a louse, and I'm the devils advocate
Stick a dick in your mouth, and fuck what you spit
You get writer's block after two lines
That's the explanation of your bad rhymes
I stop the clock like Hiro, plunging out your eyes
Leaving you blind, to stare behind
Wondering what happened, I fuck with your mind
Leave you in paranoia, looking over your back
Screaming, but everything is black
You're demented talking about rape
I make wine out of you, squeeze you like grape
I do it like Sylar when I drop off the head
Knockin' a bit of whers' rhymes,leaving you dead
You live in illusion,thinking your style rocks
You smoke a cigar,pretending it's a black cock

**Ritter** · 06-16-2008, 07:14 AM

Votes people

**thatKid** · 06-18-2008, 01:04 PM

votes

I think I lost. Oh well, fuck it. I need a lot of practice

**Novakaine** · 06-20-2008, 12:07 PM

Flow - Shizzah
Multis - Demented
Punches - Demented
Personals - None
Vocab - Shizzah

Vote - Demented

**hazidus hitman** · 07-30-2008, 10:36 PM

Shizzah had more direct attacks, better consistant flow, better metaphores.
overall i felt his verse was the winning one.

VOTE-SHIZZAH

liked your closing

"You live in illusion,thinking your style rocks
You smoke a cigar,pretending it's a black cock"

**Maccabee Ridah** · 07-31-2008, 10:14 AM

Flow - Shizz
Punches - Shizz
Personals - Shizz
Vocab - Shizz
Creativity - Demented

Vote - Shizz

I liked both verses! But it was like 2 totally different styles! It seemz to me that Demented really played with his verse, and I liked it, so it seemz he formed few very dope punches, but Shizz' verse, for me, had plenty more direct and harder punches, really nice flow, and the last line was way too better than demented's! So overally, Shizz took this one!

Peace...........
-suuuuuuuu///

**Ritter** · 07-31-2008, 10:43 AM

Shiiet, I forgot about this battle. I don't do battles no more. Kinda rusty with the shit, I see.

If I was an outside observer, I'd vote tie.

But thanks for those 2 votes.

**THE MASON** · 07-31-2008, 11:39 AM

I'm gonna have to vote for a tie, the two styles are too different.

Shizzah had mad crazy metaphors and a better flow but demented was more direct with his attacks, just too different to go one way or the other