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    Inspektah:
    i came through stories untold
    spread like the plague across the globe
    lighting the world up like a stove
    trynna hold on to reality loosing my grip
    hard to maintain when your minds playing tricks
    i slip slowly, into a never ending abysss
    where the cherished past
    is about to perish fast
    memories that makes me laugh
    becomes a thing of the past
    my biggest obsession
    to get a million in my possesion
    leaving rappers burned like Michael Wesson
    my vocals is blessing, learn a lesson
    fucking with me, will only get u in depression
    for years i've been concealed
    time for me to be revealed
    taking giant leaps like Armstrong, holmes
    been through hell fire and brimstone
    to set my name in stone
    i beat you to a pulp non-fiction
    reservior lions with glorious gentleman
    advancing with the intention of death sentence


    So take out the scroll
    and see how life unfolds

    Chorus:
    Sup See this is how life unfolds
    this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads
    hate the plight on a daily
    hate the shit taken on a daily
    hate the spotless mind of the dumb on the daily
    hate those that diss all and love none...
    sup see this is how life unfolds
    this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads...



    Lord of Chaos:
    Deniable audio salable rhyme caliber mathematical rapture
    given my birth guess my death is inevitable/
    so when I came to work the boss looked
    and said you jerk “YOUR FIRED”/
    felt as if Doc Brown came back from the future
    now obscure trips dipped low cash flow roasted toes/
    boost my confines now rewind the tape didn't steal a thing
    I think he was drunken by power for whatever means/
    gifted scheme dream up revenge similar to the sith
    by the gifts I can send your way wouldn't be anything McVay/
    skim the gall from the game their gauge is effective as the cup next to me
    you can't intimidate me, your fickle as a pickle that hasn't been picked yet/
    debt paid full dues skew any views now we got problems
    relations went all wrong getting played live full effect
    is like a gun pointed at cha and pissing wet drenched in sweat/
    didn't know what to think next is how I felt
    when my rent got canceled, my job dissed me and the bitch didn't even bother to kiss me/
    so I drifted into space, like a wasted trash case facing the wall nearest to the door
    thinking why brawl, when I can work my ass off if I could actually find something/
    hated pumping heat when the gas wasn't even on the cheap
    guess my pockets dropped like the roof dropped on Dorthy/
    port me like a PS2 Game file, guess now I am wild
    as a Tasmanian devil reveal effortlessly dreading any outcome
    guess we shall see on the next episode of how life unloads/
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    the crazy part of this verse i wrote this in 20 mins while bumping some EL-P sometimes inspiration and a good beat can make the paint drip out of your fingers and thumbs and onto the keypad

    gotta admit this collabo felt something as oragnic as i've even written with

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    dun, you just killed me with your verse hahahaha, props to you. Like damn man, you spitting straight fire and it only took you 20 mins, damn dun, thats some talent shit there.
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    good collab

    Inspektah was dope, a couple parts shined through most, like the last 3 lines at the end, those were tight. i felt that the flow, patterns, and structure we too standard and in the box, ya dig? hittin the rhyme right at the end of each line, nothing wrong with that it just comes out a bit forced sometimes

    but you see how Sheep freaked his patterns and flows, shit sometime his shit rhymes mid sentence, plus he throws in a few multis......... basically what i mean is variation.

    deviate from the norm fam, just write form the soull and dont force it

    good writtens though

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bronze Feet View Post
    good collab

    Inspektah was dope, a couple parts shined through most, like the last 3 lines at the end, those were tight. i felt that the flow, patterns, and structure we too standard and in the box, ya dig? hittin the rhyme right at the end of each line, nothing wrong with that it just comes out a bit forced sometimes

    but you see how Sheep freaked his patterns and flows, shit sometime his shit rhymes mid sentence, plus he throws in a few multis......... basically what i mean is variation.

    deviate from the norm fam, just write form the soull and dont force it

    good writtens though
    lulz yeah bronze ur complete right when writing it has to be you and your soul oozing from your work and sometimes forcing it doesn't work like for me i know when i force something i can tell when i am reading it. i think variation is something when you write rhymes that comes with the more you write and learn your flows and stylez and patterns

    overall this collabo was dope

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    taking giant leaps like Armstrong, holmes
    been through hell fire and brimstone
    to set my name in stone

    Deniable audio salable rhyme caliber mathematical rapture
    given my birth guess my death is inevitable/


    i liked how those lines connected and the visuals niceness keep elevating..
    Last edited by Mantra; 10-14-2010 at 10:22 AM.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Bronze Feet View Post
    good collab

    Inspektah was dope, a couple parts shined through most, like the last 3 lines at the end, those were tight. i felt that the flow, patterns, and structure we too standard and in the box, ya dig? hittin the rhyme right at the end of each line, nothing wrong with that it just comes out a bit forced sometimes

    but you see how Sheep freaked his patterns and flows, shit sometime his shit rhymes mid sentence, plus he throws in a few multis......... basically what i mean is variation.

    deviate from the norm fam, just write form the soull and dont force it

    good writtens though

    Yeah, Sheep def had a mad scheme on this song, he damn straight killed me, next time i got some work to do. LOL.

    Me, i tried to put a lot of emotion into the song and tried to make it dark. I cudn't really add much multi's to this verse, IDK why, but i like the verse this way.

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