Conquest

[Robert]

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[Jabba Jaw]

"Rap clones, attempted to dethrone the god from his position,
but the original stands alone, so I defeated my opposition,
bodies lay, where my sword had swung and created a blood bath,
Vultures fed on the remains of those who crossed jamel's path"

this was my fav lil section of this rhyme

you got potential son
it started off a lil choppy but got better after a few lines

keep at it you got a nice vocab just gotta be a bit more creative with it

[Grim Reapa]

that was ill i see u took some vocab from are battle huh jamel????

[Robert]

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[adedwutang]

When I first dropped people thought I was spitting hieroglyphics,
to be specific, it was too complex for the neolithic,


hot dam,that was ill

[Robert]

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[adedwutang]

yea realized that 2 but didnt feel like copyin the whole verse
haha peace

[Robert]

cheers

[Life-Giving-Sword]

sickness pure sickness

[Robert]

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[Robert]

More feedback please

[Robert]

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