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    Default My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    This is my VERY FIRST beat ya'll. Listen to it, and give me some feedbeack.

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=391754

    And please, I need you to be honest.

    Peace

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Quote Originally Posted by The Eighth Sonn
    This is my VERY FIRST beat ya'll. Listen to it, and give me some feedbeack.

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=391754

    And please, I need you to be honest.

    Peace

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    its actually not bad at alll...would sound dope with a girl singing over it to give it an extra dimension.....if there were one thing i would change it would be the snares.... sounds to weak....plus i would switche up the patterns more....Put it's good for your first beat.

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Quote Originally Posted by rzarazorrzarazorsharp
    its actually not bad at alll...would sound dope with a girl singing over it to give it an extra dimension.....if there were one thing i would change it would be the snares.... sounds to weak....plus i would switche up the patterns more....Put it's good for your first beat.
    Thanx for the feedback man!

    I appreciate!

    Peace

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    I like the Piano on this. It's fairly basic, but it sounds pretty decent.

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    Its Good, U Got Skill, I Dont Personaly Like It, But Dont Let That Stop You. Keep It Up, Homie...
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    yeah the snare needs to sound stronger, and it's decent for a self composed sort of joint, but you should try workin on chopping samples too, if you put in enough time it can give you what you want.......not bad for a first beat...........what did you use?

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Really good.

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Quote Originally Posted by Sun_Tzu
    yeah the snare needs to sound stronger, and it's decent for a self composed sort of joint, but you should try workin on chopping samples too, if you put in enough time it can give you what you want.......not bad for a first beat...........what did you use?
    I used Fruity Loops. ´

    I didn't wanna sample/chop on my first beat, but I got other stuff where I sampled. I will upload it soon.

    Peace

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpOk3N
    Thats fucking Brilliant, man. I really enjoyed listening to this beat. I have something that goes perfect with it. Its fucking good to be your first beat too. Props man, hopefully you start selling some beats, I'll be buying some, without a doubt. 1
    Thanx Man,

    If you wanna use the beat, hit me up.

    If you wanna listen to some more beats, hit me up.

    Peace

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Nice work son. Keep it up.

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Quote Originally Posted by Shitao
    Nice work son. Keep it up.

    PEACE
    Thanx Man

    Peace

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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    No Doubt Man, This Beat Aint Bad For Ya First Time, But Yeah The Snares Could Have A Stronger Kick To Em Nah Mean, But Other Than That, Its A Dope Beat, Keep Me Posted On New Ish Fam


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    Default Re: My First Beat Ya'll. Check it out!

    Dope beat. No samples (i think), definently good for a first beat. The snare could use a little punch but it sounds good either way. peece.

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