New Beat... Give me all your criticisms to improve it...

[WuGambino]

http://www.icompositions.com/auditor...hp?photo=21134

This is one of the first beats I've made in a while, I made a few a couple of months ago but they were all kinda... well, wack.
I wanna hear what you have to say on this so I can work on improving it. Thanks

[Hz Deep]

Sounds alright, you need some kind of change up in there somewhere tho' (it gets kinda repetative), not sure I like the kick sample your using (but I'm only listening on my powerbook speakers, and they ain't the best).
Maybe add some more percussion to fill it out a bit too, like some hi-hats or shakers or sumthin', also garageband has some sick 'Apple Loops' try using some of them and chopping them up to get a more organic wu sound.
Oh yeah, if you can't find any better kicks etc, has garageband got the bitcrusher plugin?, that would fatten those beats up.
Pz.

[WuGambino]

Yeah, was gonna try and get a friend to drop a verse on it and then when putting it together would have varied it a bit.
I think Garageband has a bitchrusher thing... I'll give it a go now...
Thanks.

[shaolins_finest]

Im sorry that shit is sad. I dont mean to be harsh but its the only way you can get better. Shit is fucking garbage.

[Sun Tzu, Tha Soul Controllah]

it's just too much synth and other things, it's not a good quality beat....