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    City Lights: www.myspace.com/escyounggun


    I posted the lyrics up in the Darts section, but this is the track I recorded tonight.

    Hope ya like it.

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    its preety cool... keep doin u kid!

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    real simple. nice beat. the lyrics are cool and personal, sorta stream of though which is nice. the voice track is a bit low in volume. don't be to monotone with raps unless you develop the accent and vocal strength bass wise to back it.
    decent track overall.
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    Fresh track man. Smooth drums, peaceful samples, cool mcing. Really decent track man. Great job.

    Maybe a nice bassline on it could finish it. Anyway cool listening.

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    Your writing with imagery is some of the best I've heard. Maybe work on your flowing to the beat more and the mix is a little rough. Vocals can come up. Beat selection is on point.

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