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[BlaK FuRYaN]

just peeped this,,,,,ill drop some feed later its late

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[noel411]

There's a point at which I switch my personality,
as I converse I might begin to curse dramatically,
my palms might bleed, and proceed to jerk sporadically,
quote the crucifiction scene to turn it to a travesty,
lavishly equipped with scripts of high magnitude,
have a free clip if I don't like your attitude,
doesn't take a magic trick to have your grey matter fooled,
shift a dozen plastic chips with the instincts of an animal,
handle you like a ravenous panda would bamboo,
dismantle you like a cannibal preparing his food,
when I grip the mic piece, the chance of tearing it loose,
is as likely as Wile E and Roadrunner declaring a truce,
if I'm staring at you, my glare could tear you in two,
dare to dispute, and I'll take you to school,
bring tape and glue 'cos I'm breaking the rules,
see my face in a robbery case on the news,
smile for the camera as I'm taking the jewels.



Not my usual style, I just like to pen some shit like this now and then to practice my spitting.

[TeknicelStylez]

Shit was ill fandango

Had to invent shit just to describe how hot it was

KEEP THE DARTS COMIN

[BlaK FuRYaN]

I know your talented...I've seen afew drops from you and they're all different ryme styles...

[Dae Ja Nae]

Crazy killah concept right here ... lol ... ... and the use of multies in this one were off the chain. This shit flowed like water from start to finish. Eye agree with BlaK in that you always come with a variety of style. One can never get bored with you. All in all ... Nice Drop Noel.

Peace

[noel411]

Many thanks for the feedback all.

[noel411]

If I alter my view, to discern a faltered truth,
what do I learn, and what can I conclude?
if I'm holding the tools, but can't mould them to use,
should I fold my hand, and plan the best way to lose?
I demand that you stand and answer my questions,
I planned your existence, so give me your reverence,
I'm man unrestricted, pay heed to my lessons,
I stress I'm equipped with the best of intentions,
these texts and insciptions are a test of your friendship,
attend our conventions, lose sense of independance,
soon you'll be so confused, you'll naturally blend in,
we'll control your soul 'til you're practically defenseless,
sanity drastically bending from the pressure I've felt,
planned to be cold as ice, but I'm starting to melt,
because we can't think, pay a shrink for their help,
watch our dollars burn while we learn about ourselves,
new Mortal Kombat game coming out on the twelth,
forget about that book, and put it back on the shelf,
it gets lost under dust, while you're growing old,
people wonder why there's rust, growing on my soul,
as I stroll through life, I try to gain control,
but from the moment we're born, our life is already sold.

[Mantra]

Noel that was deep it felt as if you were an old man reflecting back on his life, or even a prophet writing scriptures. you have a unique, poetical type flow.

[BlaK FuRYaN]

If I alter my view, to discern a faltered truth,
what do I learn, and what can I conclude?
if I'm holding the tools, but can't mould them to use,
should I fold my hand, and plan the best way to lose?
I demand that you stand and answer my questions,
I planned your existence, so give me your reverence,
I'm man unrestricted, pay heed to my lessons,
I stress I'm equipped with the best of intentions,
these texts and insciptions are a test of your friendship,
attend our conventions, lose sense of independance,
soon you'll be so confused, you'll naturally blend in,
we'll control your soul 'til you're practically defenseless,
sanity drastically bending from the pressure I've felt,
planned to be cold as ice, but I'm starting to melt,
because we can't think, pay a shrink for their help,
watch our dollars burn while we learn about ourselves,
new Mortal Kombat game coming out on the twelth,
forget about that book, and put it back on the shelf,
it gets lost under dust, while you're growing old,
people wonder why there's rust, growing on my soul,
as I stroll through life, I try to gain control,
but from the moment we're born, our life is already sold.

the content was well crafted....i think every ones tryna gain control oftheir lives, they spend their whole life tryna gain control....only to find out on they death bed that they have control of anything...other wise they would have evaded death...

Allah is the controller

peace

[TeknicelStylez]

It's true, your like FUCK THAT TODAY IMA DO THIS AND THAT DIFFERENT, you do the same thing, you keep trying to get back on track shit never happens.

[noel411]

Thanks for the replies my peoples.

[Dae Ja Nae]

If I alter my view, to discern a faltered truth,
what do I learn, and what can I conclude?
if I'm holding the tools, but can't mould them to use,
should I fold my hand, and plan the best way to lose?
I demand that you stand and answer my questions,
I planned your existence, so give me your reverence,
I'm man unrestricted, pay heed to my lessons,
I stress I'm equipped with the best of intentions,
these texts and insciptions are a test of your friendship,
attend our conventions, lose sense of independance,
soon you'll be so confused, you'll naturally blend in,
we'll control your soul 'til you're practically defenseless,
sanity drastically bending from the pressure I've felt,
planned to be cold as ice, but I'm starting to melt,
because we can't think, pay a shrink for their help,
watch our dollars burn while we learn about ourselves,
new Mortal Kombat game coming out on the twelth,
forget about that book, and put it back on the shelf,
it gets lost under dust, while you're growing old,
people wonder why there's rust, growing on my soul,
as I stroll through life, I try to gain control,
but from the moment we're born, our life is already sold.

I loved the opening ... very solid piece ... the flow seemed effortless. I (ironically) vibe off anything that relates to social and conscious issues, and this touches on them both. I'm still amazed at how well you're able to run the gamut when it comes to your writing style. That's a sign of true talent.

Peace
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[noel411]

Thanks for the feed, Dae. Always appreciated.

[noel411]

Some might write as a release, some might write for inner peace,
some might write when inspired by a J Dilla beat,
compile a few lines, refine your lyrical technique,
preach the word from up above, show love to the streets,
many sound the same in a game where it's hard to be unique,
some bite lines because their own mind is too weak,
but it's the fake lames whose mistakes make me weep,
schooling can be useful, you can learn a lot in college,
pulling quotes from google, doesn't mean you're "dropping knowledge",
anyone can do it, most just can't be bothered,
truth is, a true writer has their own thoughts to ponder,
if your english is fluent, you don't need a dictionary,
big words are useless, like a ruthless world peace visionary,
unless they come naturally, but you know that's a rarity,
because it shows when you flow outside of your vocabulary,
those who pose are exposed when they're doing this,
characters bent out of shape tryna emulate infuences,
tend to break, when they wake, to the fact they ain't proving shit,
rap's no way to educate, just look how it's confusing kids,
who lack the brains to seperate, what's really truth and myth,
we're losing it, by moving with, trends we can't relate to,
we're bound to script, the same topics, and who removes the staples?
dropping others fake "jewels", I'd rather hear what makes you,
probably hear more captivating rhymes on play school,
what I see is clones trapped in making echoes of their peers,
gotta leave in droves when their raps expose their own fears.

[GuardianOne]

It was an explicite verse, goes out to every writer, and keeps them in check. There are depressing factors in every inductry not just in written verse. but this verse points out alot what most fear will happen to them. Or what they are. Yah a very appreciated verse, cause it bears its truth.

Thanx for this verse.
you expreswsed it well.

Peace