Iight bet come in and post than we'll get started.
Iight bet come in and post than we'll get started.
Alright 8 bars/16 lines of madness. 2 Rounds. I'll spit first.
Here I go........
My mind is like a gat, splattering on this board,
Each word a demon in a growing unholy horde,
Without touching your head, I cracked your skull like a gourd,
Turning your brain to mush, on the floor it is poured,
Use your so-called "stylez" to torture you without warning,
Your name shows your cant spell, like a dyslexic "dooG gninroM",
Rhymes forming like stars from within a dust cloud,
You're teknickelly saying nothing, youre just typing loud,
I gather a crowd, wherever my prophecies go,
You couldn't find a crowd if you got a mute to say "Hello",
I wish you were mute, so you could no longer flow,
Your rhymes cheapen the art, like a bootleg Van Gogh,
Im just heating up, fear my prophetic qualities,
My ability to spread words, like a rat spreads disease,
Youre a pest, in the rap game Im the holy manifest,
A verse by Genius Christ consider yourself blessed.
"We change your mind like brain surgery, effective,
You heard it here first it's The Lyrical Collective."
Alright 8 bars/16 lines of madness. 2 Rounds. I'll spit first.
Here I go........
My mind is like a gat, splattering on this board,
Each word a demon in a growing unholy horde,
Without touching your head, I cracked your skull like a gourd,
Turning your brain to mush, on the floor it is poured,
Use your so-called "stylez" to torture you without warning,
Your name shows you cant spell, like a dyslexic "dooG gninroM",
Rhymes forming like stars from within a dust cloud,
You're teknickelly saying nothing, youre just typing loud,
I gather a crowd, wherever my prophecies go,
You couldn't find a crowd if you got a mute to say "Hello",
I wish you were mute, so you could no longer flow,
Your rhymes cheapen the art, like a bootleg Van Gogh,
Im just heating up, fear my prophetic qualities,
My ability to spread words, like a rat spreads disease,
Youre a pest, in the rap game Im the holy manifest,
A verse by Genius Christ consider yourself blessed.
"We change your mind like brain surgery, effective,
You heard it here first it's The Lyrical Collective."
Don'T talk about my moms, I'll see you where you rest/
Lryics like hollowtips expand and blow out your chest/
And clear it, than I'll make YOUR MOM clean up the mess/
The problems alot harder this aint your average test/
Can't solve em, can't come up with a probable solution/
I'm Evolvin, stamp dumb fuck emcees like you as polution/
Your Bad for the hip hop eco system spreadin waste/
Across the internet space, you gon come out your face/
Loss is the imminent case, when I 'submit reply' the place/
Belong to the feminine race, You like men and their taste/
10 bars givin you a headache, 16 will expose you as a snake/
10 more cause ground to shake, 116 and you'll have to evacuate/
You say your Christ but my lyrics got more people believing/
So for "Christs Sake" stop reading before you stop breathing/
2 days later find Genious dead, his head on the keyboard/
Didn't listen to what I said I warned him not to read more/
Start voting everyone...
Good luck mang
1 Vote Tek On My Behalf..BUT I THINK HE WAS BAD MATH....
I COUNT THE BARS DIFFERENTLY...
Keep the votes coming......
"We change your mind like brain surgery, effective,
You heard it here first it's The Lyrical Collective."
thats 16 bars, and the 10 bar line was on the 11th bar summing up the past 10 na mean.
Tek got this, Good rhymes and punches and the verse flowed well. Christ was a bit shaky for the first 6 bars or so for mine and that prolly cost him (still aight though). I like this little bit from christ:
You couldn't find a crowd if you got a mute to say "Hello",
I wish you were mute, so you could no longer flow,
but I thought Tek was more consistent.
Vote=Tek
thats 2-0
O yea if possible can yall vote on the battle in Bring your swords
yo hot shit all around ima stay out of this to vote...too close for my ass to decide
i think yall should battle again
PEACE
felt the same way--too close for me to call , thought both verses were nice
2-0-2
Ballistik didnt even say why he voted you. I dont get that, plus I dont understand how he could be THAT sure. Props to Jamel for stating a reason. And finally props to Stylez for droping a hot verse. But keep the votes coming.....
"We change your mind like brain surgery, effective,
You heard it here first it's The Lyrical Collective."
If you want we can take the vote away till he explains.
Props for your verse as well.
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