a bar is 4 beats in a measure... thats what I was taught in Av Production....
lines would be 2 bars I guess so thats 16 lines not 16 bars....
do whatever you feel, dont gotta be strict na mean
no rush btw
a bar is 4 beats in a measure... thats what I was taught in Av Production....
lines would be 2 bars I guess so thats 16 lines not 16 bars....
do whatever you feel, dont gotta be strict na mean
no rush btw
Tek drop a vote for me and Eric Unseens battle homie1
I'm ahead of you gawd
i guess tek's torn up cuz i wasnt feelin some shit he typed a few days back.../
u must always feel like shit cuz everything you've ever submitted's been wack
enter my realm an ill add u too the stack.../
of cats who tried to step to Aidz an dun got their dumb asses clapped.../
peep the forecast,..best evacuate fast.../
dont be stupid like those new orleans victims cuz u wont last a second once u in my grasp../
your lyrics are trash while mine be more viscious than hurricane kat's aftermath.../
there aint enuf bodybags on this planet to haul out every wannabe rapper i've trashed.../
ive already sonned ya,.. stretched u out like a giraffe.../
im already done,..drenched you with ether an i've barely begun the second half.../
time to annihalate you punk, your like old news left in the past../
you see a girl pass but your 2 inch killa prolly cant even get up to half mast.../
haha,...thats cuz you luv dicks in your ass.../
viagra wont help ya cuz it's not designed to help pussys like that.../
yep,..you dickless bitch,..face the fuckin facts.../
steppin to Sicka's like throwin yourself in front of the subway cuz i leave all competition dead on the tracks...
"BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED"
iight start votes, I'm goin to sleep *yawn*
^whatever....VOTE UP PLZ
"BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED"
Tek your rhymes connected together real tight, definetly had a good rhythm but this is a battle and I think Sicka punchlines hit harder....vote:Sicka
He was saying how my verse was bad, I'm sayin I don't got time for him being confused by my rhyme.Flow beckons your accused of correctin
No seconds for confused rhyme detectin
People with one eye have no DEPTH PERCEPTION they can't see in 3 dimensional spaces HOW IS THAT NOT A HOT PUNCHLINE!!Observed my verse with one eye inspectin
Submerged you lacked depth perception
My facts is backed up like a bad case of constipation.I lack patience for your massed education
My facts acient far surpassed regulation
Backed up like a bad case of constipation
(this is a killa ass line.)Sick's flowlessness consists of slow shit
His broken fists persist with no hits
The flowlessness line puts a double edged sword on the constipation line it benefits me and makes him look bad
Once again talkin bout eating this kid up during lunchtime!I equip punchlines enduring crunch time
I Eat sick dumb blind men during lunch time
With the clock off!! Raps knocking socks off of kids feat fuck sneakersThats with the clock off Raps kick socks off
Whack kids who drop soft bootleg knock offs
Killa ending I said he got aids from involving in gay sex....Sicka spit hot that Day ... NOT *coughs*
Sicker than Aidz that sounds contageous
Figure hes gay thats how some aids hits
Problem with me instead of me being like YOUR A FAG, dadadada, YOU DO THIS, daddadada I go about on some other shit and people don't get it, than the person that does rhyme like that wins.... W/E vote how you feel though its all good, I was just responding to your explanation, cuz I had some hard hittin shit in there. Sickas shit did drop hard but it was way too straight to the point for me.
i say tek....i wasnt really feelin sickas verse except for his last couple and a few others....but i luv good vocab and tek had it...with complicated(not simple punchlines)...my favorite was.........
"Sick's flowlessness consists of slow shit
His broken fists persist with no hits"
vote=tek
Thanks green, bumpin for more votes.
Tek
"He who works like a slave, Eats like a king" - RZA
you gotta explain bigg.....
i vote 4 sicka cuz his was longer and more flexible 1
I dropped 16 bars because thats what it stated in the original rules, but I told sicka he could drop more.
good looks for voting
peace
who cares, its just a text, i got 1. peaceOriginally Posted by TeknicelStylez
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