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    MORRIS BLACK FAMILY Crookshank's Avatar
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    Default A State of Dismay

    Part of a song I'm working on... lemme know whats up

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    Let me see if I can quickly rip it properly/
    As I watch these wanna bees try to sip it sloppily//
    You can take my feet out from under me, you aint droppin me/
    You could take the seed out of the weed, but these hypotheses//
    Bud more knowledge into the minds of our generation/
    Than the right-wing propaganda being fed to the nation//
    A space station bein payed for by replubican racists/
    Instead of feedin the poor poverty ridden children's faces//
    Cuz let's face it, the mind of racist is too basic/
    If it gets em the money n power roll up the hood and lace it//
    Cocaine litters the streets of all the American ghettos/
    Along with heroin, laced bud, g-strings and stillettos//
    A future decided by the government leavin the odds tipped/
    An emotional mosh pit that you could fuck up a squad with//
    I was lucky enough to escape the tar pits of the mental prison/
    But some feel there's no reason to even really be livin'//
    See that's what that place does when you grow up in it/
    It makes you feel real good when you can blow up in it//
    Leave the streets infested with my words that lace the youth's mind/
    With sick rhymes that'll infect the authority in no time//
    The majority will show my skills to the deaf dumb and blind/
    So I can bring a revolution apon this country and revise//
    Cuz revision is all we need for this ethnic bullshit division/
    Races unite, faces blend fight for what's right cuz its sickenin'//
    the people gettin' fucked like a prostitute about to be murdered/
    she blew the dude, got came on, as she was choked no one heard her//
    "If you're frightened of dying, and you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels, freeing you from the Earth."

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    shit is tight it flowed mad well

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    enjoyed it..
    grimey, poverty, drugs
    you writing two verses then and a chorus as well?

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    Yea its bout to be a full song. Hopefully itll be done soon n Ill record it... thanks for the feed. Ill return it if possible
    "If you're frightened of dying, and you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels, freeing you from the Earth."

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    I see you took time with your poetry


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    i don't do poetry. thanks though.
    "If you're frightened of dying, and you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels, freeing you from the Earth."

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