Some Tech Tracks

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=270802

I GOT SERVERAL NEW TRACKS:

NIGHTS LEAN PRODUCED BY TECHWON(NEW TRACK)
RAVEN SIGHT PRODUCED BY TECHWON(FULL VERISON)
UNDER ONE...FREESTYLE

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

uppin

[Khristo]

to be honist i dont like your voiuce one little bit, i know your stlyle is diffrent but its fucking annoying to listen to, what ever you do to your voiuce to make it sound gay dont do it.

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

dude get off my nuts this is my really voice yeah the only thing i did was add in a echo if you don't like my voice keep ya opinions 2 ya delf duke ya so fake its unbelievable

[Heke]

few advices.
dont hold the mic so near to your mouth.
try to raise you voice.
sounds like you are whispering the mic is in your mouth.

another advice you are so offbeat. try to listen the beat when you rap.

I'm not trying to be insulting. peace

[Khristo]

yo put the beats on the site to be reveiwed mann, i speak only the truth to what im thinking. Now i cant be that fake can i ? no..

[Khristo]

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[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

yo put the beats on the site to be reveiwed mann, i speak only the truth to what im thinking. Now i cant be that fake can i ? no..

No but if some ask u what u think and u tell me u didn't like my voice after the fact u shoulda said so before i laced the track for u and after the bs i'm just saying be real man thats it end of discussion
peace

[TeknicelStylez]

Your voice was bad on that beat, and your flow was off, just honest pointers. Just go back and switch your shit up na mean. Flip it to a Positive, they call the criticism constructive for a reason so you can build off it.

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

Your voice was bad on that beat, and your flow was off, just honest pointers. Just go back and switch your shit up na mean. Flip it to a Positive, they call the criticism constructive for a reason so you can build off it.

good look appriciate man just gotta keep buildin'

[GuardianOne]

ya delf duke ya

What does that mean?

Anyway true you vocal outputs where blared, try to balance you microphone levels, or might have been the equipment you used. Cause your voice didn't come through clear on the mic.

The beat was that you who made it or that was the one with Masta Killa. Try to use you own beats, or equest someone to make one for you (especially some from your area- so you can get the proper tempo for you style on the tracks) And your flow on the mic should be how you breathe (heard it from someone-don't know what it means personally).

Peace
PS: Keep working on the tracks

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

What does that mean?

Anyway true you vocal outputs where blared, try to balance you microphone levels, or might have been the equipment you used. Cause your voice didn't come through clear on the mic.

The beat was that you who made it or that was the one with Masta Killa. Try to use you own beats, or equest someone to make one for you (especially some from your area- so you can get the proper tempo for you style on the tracks) And your flow on the mic should be how you breathe (heard it from someone-don't know what it means personally).

Peace
PS: Keep working on the tracks

thanks son i'll take that knowledge good look

[TeknicelStylez]

And your flow on the mic should be how you breathe (heard it from someone-don't know what it means personally).

You need to take quick breaths before you start your next line, its called breath control. You cant spit 100 words without breathing you don't got the breath for it na mean, and you cant spit alot than stop and take deep breaths, so you take little breaths between your lines.

[Khristo]

i also think you should think about rhyming lines instead of paragraphs if you no what im sayin, it ends up sounding a bit messy, try get the rhyme or the switch on the snare as much as you can.

[TeknicelStylez]

Lol straight emcee coachin cats on wu corps