BeautiflyB VS. Dusk RD. 1

[Eradicate]

Im going to try this tournament with a poll, even though it doesn't really make any difference. Every vote has to be WELL explained, and should abide by these categories:

Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Creativity
Nameplay

for close calls or nailbiters, additional categories should be considered:

Multis
Wordplay
Vocab


If you feel a vote is unjust or biased let me or Dusk know and we will throw it out accordingly.

For every battle it will be the first to five,
or 3-0 will be considered a KO
and 4-1 will be considered a TKO

To move things along quickly, I think there should only be one verse and NO feeding.
It's not fair if one person get's to feed and the other not.

Every verse should consist of 16 lines.

*Everyone should have 2 days from the time they check-in there battle to drop there verse or they are DQ'd.

[Eradicate]

*I have received Dusk's verse already,

BeautiflyB you can either send me your verse or just drop it in here since he's already done

[oDoUoSoKo]

cool

[Killa BB]

*I have received Dusk's verse already,

BeautiflyB you can either send me your verse or just drop it in here since he's already done

I pm'd you

[oDoUoSoKo]

im gonna lose fairly soon, if not this one..the next..im way to fuckin rusty..and i aint being modest.

[Eradicate]

it's cool man, there's only one winner.. this is just for fun.

BeautiflyB's Verse:

I don't even know this dude, man... This is bull
To me, Up until this tourney, this kid was invizzable

Dusk... How befitting since the sun's about to set on you
Get ready for the beat down from the losers who just bet on you

Try to hit me wit big words, I eat thesauruses for breakfast
Then I eat through flows like yours like Tyranasaurus Rexes

Battle of the sexes - come and get it, you know where I am
Napoleon Dynamite lookin..."Tina come and get some ham!"

I'm not Beyonce but i'll make you say my name "Double B"
You shoulda quit when you saw me in the game, now you in trouble D.

I'll blow you a kiss wit the double barreled shotgun in between my ears
The shot heard 'round the Corp, you gon hear about this one for years

I don't think this match up between you and eye was really fair
If I lose to you that means that I was robbed and you were spared

I'ma be suprised to catch you round here past the second round
If you ask me, frankly I think I look better in a crown

[Eradicate]

Dusk's Verse:

Verse Kong? word to Dawn you'll have to strap bombs on to me
raps is Surgical, dont tell the Dr. No like Sean Connery
my word is Bond, have her asking if the world's enough
while im hurling rough slang like im asking bout Girls and Stuff
this isnt general chat, bitch face the radical rhyme scheme
when dying you wont have to worry bout vaginal hygiene
im breaking heini bottles in half to slash ya facial
attach a razor to a ladel and straight decapitate you
straight creating a sacrificial lamb outta corp broads
you drew the short straw, now pay the price like child support laws
bitch im so raw, i support bras, like pink ribbons
and when i think women, i think of pink rippin
nah im just kidding, i respect all equally
but for you, ill fuck you threw ya jaws raw; "Eazy-E"
Dusk is a Buzzsaw, and BeatiflyB?
...if i lose this shit, you can Euthanize me.

[Killa BB]

LOL... I promise my lines wasn't spaced out like that when I typed it up... At least I don't think they were... GooF!

[oDoUoSoKo]

eloels

[Eradicate]

lol, actually every line was spaced i just made it like that because it was easier to read..

Punchlines - Dusk
Personals - Tie
Flow - Tie
Creativity -
Nameplay - BeautiflyB

Multis - Dusk
Wordplay - Dusk
Vocab -

vote - Dusk

[Killa BB]

Dusk's Verse:

...my word is Bond, have her asking if the world's enough
while im hurling rough slang like im asking bout Girls and Stuff...

LOL!!!! I just went back and peeped... You stupid!

[brock]

Punchlines - BB
Personals - Dusk
Flow - BB
Creativity - BB
Nameplay - BB

I think BB's is just funnier and more interesting, I actually caught an LOL from the Napolean Dynamite line. To be honest I expected more from Dusk. Not a single line about her being a transsexual? To me that's a fail.

[BambinoTTT EgWest]

don't mean to sound sexist and all, but these 2 ladies BeautiflyB and TruWizDumb are actually pretty dope with the writtens, good to see the opposite sex pertain to skills....

vocab-dusk
flow-BB
creativity-dusk
punches-dusk
personals-BB

honestly, I think BB had a stronger verse, it's just Dusk is a little more lyrical that gave him the edge in this, but on the reals....Dusk you almost lost this one imo......

[oDoUoSoKo]

i kno read my earlier post...im not getting far at all. I dont rap that much anymore. im doin one more tape and im done.

[brock]

i kno read my earlier post...im not getting far at all. I dont rap that much anymore. im doin one more tape and im done.

Just curious, in your honest opinion, who had the better verse?