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    Murders committed in the hood on the streets with the grime
    Then at the top of the food chain they repeating the crime
    Even the good-hearted politicians turn evil with time
    Til they reach the point where they kill you just for speaking your mind
    If you do it put away till life fade from your eyes and you rot
    If they do it they get celebrated as they rise to top
    This is the way life in the world works whether you like it or not
    And with all the violence in the world the system's inviting a lot
    Everyday the lower class' streets soaked with blood
    And those above hold a grudge ask why we ain't holding up
    Want me to eat the pavement, I tell em "See ya later"
    I refused to be controlled by a 200-year old piece of paper
    At the chance to see us suffer they're all salivating
    That's the reason that I've chosen retaliation
    Now I stand in the shadows unseen, observant and patient
    Wait to strike back at all of these government agents
    It's obvious that they got to be killed, no stopping me
    But I'm forced to watch their atrocity-filled hypocrisy
    Soon enough I'll aggressively move, nothing left to do
    Since the definition of capitalism is "Shoot whose next to you"
    Because they stay clever, ain't never debate whether
    To create terror, escape better, create cheddar
    Use any source they can just to keep you distracted
    Turn the TV off so you can see through the madness
    By now the majority of the greatest minds have all been polluted
    It won't be long now until martial law's instituted
    They already got prison camps on American soil
    Where people like you and I will be sent in to boil
    For now I'm cloaked and disguised, till hope has arrived
    I'm evoking surprise since everything I've spoken is wise
    These emotionless guys want you to choke on they lies
    Until you croak and you die--unless you open your eyes

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    Dope as hell man.

    Hope to hear some more.

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    Default "Reality"

    He goes to sleep and wakes up in a distant land
    Involuntarily embarks on a trip, that he wished he planned
    He sees white sand, umbrellas, fine girls, and tequilla shots
    He wonders where he is, and if its real or not
    Hears spanish guitars playing The Eagles and Marley
    Takes a Bacardi, and decides he's gonna be in the party
    A blond, with sunglasses asks if he's having fun. Matches
    Light the blunt, pass it, girl's behavior is un-passive
    He eels high off medicine but thinks he's gonna get it in
    She seductively grabs his hand, and walks ahead of him
    The sparks she sends flying up his body are faster than instant messaging
    She sings a tune about love and he thinks of sex again
    She says she wrote the song, and that it's her anthem
    She starts talking sexy, calling him handsome
    He can barely stand up, without her assistance
    His eyes close shut, but his ears can still listen
    All he hears is footsteps, no additional sounds
    Becomes nearly impossible to lift his feet off the ground
    He falls asleep, and he's found, on the street the next morning
    3 miles away from the beach he was exploring
    His pockets empty, his face swollen and red
    Wanders what happened to that girl, and did they roll into bed?
    He realizes he had no clue where he was headin
    So he goes up to a truck to ask for directions
    The driver is a man, next to him a blond
    She said "We're done doing business, its time to move on

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    Default Short Drop

    Lyrical swords slay your faction, I make it happen
    Write everyday cuz I'm being stalked by Mark David Chapman
    Flow's like Peter North because it bangs a lot
    My verses symbolize the commencement of Ragnarok
    The government is after me, I watch em employ their foes
    Enjoy their woes when I easily destroy their probes
    Beware I'm, not gonna share shine, instead I scare minds
    Carve my name above their eyes but below their hairline
    The alignment of my stars bizarre, plus the bars are hard
    Run through the battlefield, destroying armored cars
    So who are all of these cowards? I defeat em with ease
    Threyev in their brain, shit repeats while they sleep

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    good reads.. sick imagery.. nice flow.

    keep it up man

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    Listening to my rhymes is akin to viewing boxing highlights
    Rap cats is wack, they writing verses watching Twilight
    Try to make up for lost time, since I joined late in the battle
    Observe closely as I arrive as the game is unraveled
    Pound for pound I'm down to sound better than your favorite
    Was down and out but clowns around so F it then I'm made for it
    I'm now in town allowed the crown no effort when I say this shit
    Leave mounds of drowned bout it out left for dead erase this bitch
    The proud in clouds who frown on nouns it's your head for hating this
    Unbound the gown the gal come out get it and just savor it
    Profound renowned surround the town men forget the latest hit
    Renown my sound confound the proud recommend the greatest kid
    I stay on, drop earthquake bombs, come alone at the liaison
    Pray on my downfall, then regret what you did like Carrie Prejean
    Looking at me weird, but every gaze is far too reckless
    I'll leave you neckless, flow impossible to beat like Tetris

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    Lyrical non-fiction, demolish competition
    Make em non existent, like honest politicians
    I've come back for what's mine, you best run inside
    Shitty sound quality, but I'm still number one alive
    I got lyrical skills that I try to apply well
    Cause you seeing me again now like episodes of Seinfeld
    Your mind dwells, under a divine spell of vanity
    My brain oscillates between genius and insanity
    Ya'll dumb if you think me and rap had some type of falling out
    I'm the motherfucker who showed Anakin what life is all about
    You standing tough while claim what you kick is hard
    But I seen tighter rappers than you on a Snickers bar
    My fascinating sentences are agitating menaces
    A captivating nemesis imagination limitless
    I'mma sell this commodity, which I call my art
    And build up haters just to see you fall apart

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    Default "Benjamin Button"

    just saw this last night, haha.

    A life in reverse, his death before his birth
    Turned out to be both a blessing and a curse
    Received a blessing in the church to lessen all the hurt
    But he had to wait for fate's regression that would lurk
    Experiencing all his firsts, with zest and mirth
    But he still somehow felt depressed and hurt
    Knowing he was different from the rest of Earth
    Before he eats breakfast, he digests dessert
    Constantly getting younger, while others are aging
    Follows the ideals under which his mother had raised him
    Every time she sees him, she sees a younger Caucasian
    And he sees a mother who loves him, not phased
    By the look of his face when he was a baby
    Unsavory, but still was given love by this lady
    But then there was Daisy, a happy little child
    She held the key that drove his imagination wild
    They snuck out at night, became friends and connected
    Even though they were on opposite ends of the spectrum
    But their curiosity was equal, equally cerebral
    Although they appeared to be entirely different people
    Daisy grew up to be an adored dancer
    His life was like having kimo before cancer
    He meets an older woman that he has an affair with
    If she could fix her past, shed be glad to repair it
    She could kill time but couldnt kill her sorrow
    Of not acting in the present, instead waitin til' tomorrow
    He experiences love for the very first time
    But the memory of Daisy lingered in his mind
    Affairs over, becomes a soldier, wisdom gained through exposure
    People question how he abstains from gettin older
    His cherished mother perished and they attended her funeral
    Daisy appears out the blue, looking splendid and beautiful
    He married the girl that he sworn that he loved
    He feared that his baby would be born as he was
    But his worries were subsided, and his anxieties were lowered
    When he learned that their baby's life would move forward
    He wished he could stay the same age as Daisy
    But he was getting younger while she was aging
    He spent time with his daughter while he could
    Realizing he'd soon regress back to childhood
    He knew it would give Daisy stress if
    She had to raise their baby and a adolescent
    So one night he got dressed n', left at his discretion
    He made sure to leave them all of his possessions
    He loses his intelligence, everyone's irrelevant
    Backwards development, his life, he cant remember it
    Dementia of the brain, all the friendships that he made
    And the rich life he lived just descended down the drain
    He was the hands of a clock that ticked backwards
    Or the eyes of a dyslexic reading through a book's chapters
    The river kept flowing, but the clock stopped ticking
    As the end of his life was only the beginning

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    Default Lyrical Exercise

    Alot of these wack dudes frauds, all they say is fables
    Only way they have good music is buying Kanye's Label
    Pray ya condition is stable because when the knife stroke ya face
    You'll have a cut wider then the smile on the Joker's face
    You jokes a disgrace people mad that the south rose
    If sumthing go down was told to keep my mouth closed
    All these dudes records is for the club or about hoes
    Cats looking for the road to success but the routes closed
    Don't oppose, the best outta the cage guys
    I'm already unstoppable, so imagine when my rage rise
    Beef with me is cursed, whoever engage dies
    Try to beat me an fail like Coolio when attempting the stage dive
    You don't shoot you just flash the tool, I'm past these noobs
    Internet gangstas will get exposed like Cassie's boobs
    My lyrical verses serve a similar purpose to clinical nurses
    A cynical person, injecting you with hope, that'll diminish your hurtin
    Let the government sell it and tax it, consider it a requisite
    I guarantee in three years, that will fix the deficit
    Time is of the essence kid, I cant afford to be friendly
    So I aim the flame at ya brain, like George did to Lennie
    My flow is so gutter, it got base-balls floatin in it
    Lyrical intercourse, turn the bass up, then im goin in it
    You aint a lyricist, if you fill the booth with empty-sayings
    Your in a class of your own, only cause the truth is NCA'ing
    Their music, replacin, the secret identities, inside of em
    They couldn't move drugs, even if Genevieve's was hirin
    I have just begun, but got legends ahead of me, admirin'
    This was just for fun, but I'm eventually, aspirin'
    To be a professional, reach my potential with this rhyming shit
    But Ill be fine even if I dont get a cent or a dime from it.
    My time is spent, describing my surroundings that have changed
    This aint a lyrical exercise, Im just stretchin' the boundaries of my brain

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    Rappers brag about how much they've sold to date
    But their words are like weaklings, they hold no weight
    I told it straight, no need for tellin lies, sayin you a felon why?
    When you work at McDonalds, flippin burgers, and sellin fries
    Success see, be the the goal of my quest B
    But they dont wanna see me next to 'dinero' like Pesci
    Rappers sayin they bust guns and cook crack in kitchens
    They lack consistence, you gotta ask if its facts or image
    Tryna see how many people they can attract with gimmicks
    Little kids hear their raps, and mimic
    Start to think that sellin crack's a business
    Thinkin they can get to the other side of the track
    If they follow the false words of who they admire in rap
    Not saying hustling won't lead you to advancin
    But its more likely to lead you to jail than to a mansion
    Fuck low expectations, don't keep ambitions on the first floor
    Shoot for the stars, like TMZ is who you work for
    You won't always make it, but still you gotta take aim
    But even those on the right track, can get run over by a freight train
    I create these flows, that you shouldnt mistake as prose
    Made to open your mind or get the fake exposed
    Exaltation of violence, gave my patience a virus
    We must take chances on the expectations inside us
    I am mean n' vicious, constantly deemed ambitious
    Only those that dare to fail, can achieve their wishes
    At the same time, you could end up sitting in jail
    Fuck it son, let me take a moment to be spitting my tale
    I started lying to myself, cause the facts were hurting me
    But my rhymes are all real, all facts, no perjury
    Around the globe, people having cash emergencies
    Their credit cards get cut up, call it plastic surgery
    I am back to murder thee, beat I've been presented with
    Keep lacing it with words, until I am content with it
    Give you the finished product, and allow you to render it
    Lyrically adventurous, or silly and impetuous
    Gifted with my penmanship, strictly when I'm venting kid
    About the world as a whole, and how we're all a percent of it
    Everyone that knows me, knows that I was meant to spit
    But since I live in my own world, it's hard to let you enter it
    My temperament at times can be appealing and sensitive
    But I usually walk around, filled with meaningless contempt for shit
    Get irritated the most by the ones that I live with
    And insult the woman that I want to have kids with
    If I went to a therapist, to get my stress appraised
    He'd tell me I'm still stuck in my adolescent stage
    I had many problems, but on my chest they stayed
    Until I no longer had the power to repress my rage
    Sometimes I address my pain through aggressive ways
    Other times I take out my pen and bless a page
    I am confident that I will be the next big rave
    So in myself, is where I invest my wage
    I dreamt of success, and praise, and ways to assure my doubters
    But it's hard to solve the puzzle, when you cant afford the vowels
    Although I may share the same court with cowards
    I'm dunking on a different hoop, so you can call me Howard
    My word's artistic powers, equal to that of Egyptian Pharaohs
    I'm the glimmer of hope that exists in the midst of shadows
    I don't swim where its shallow, but wont get pulled into obscurity
    Or get too complacent, lulled into a false sense of security
    Personally, I dont quite know where Im heading B,
    The possibilities lie within the open road ahead of me

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    Nobody is as hot as me ,when the subject is philosophy
    Acknowledge me, on top of my words like an apostrophe
    Stay strapped with knowledge B, raps defy logic see
    They say life is a bitch, so I don't use misogyny
    I told em to stop jockin me, but they do it constantly
    If life is a movie, then Bennie Blanco from the Bronx is me
    Express myself pompously, but also do it consciously
    Every rap superlative, always corresponds with me
    Write to the government, but they don't respond to me
    Maybe cause I wrote FUCK U, but at least I'm speakin honestly
    Made you leave your home, foreclosures on your property
    Its like we stuck in a democracy, which favors aristocracy
    The Fed bails out companies, which fade off the market
    But don't give a shit if you get laid off from Target
    All the pain, all the suffer, wish his father had worn a rubber
    Or never had fucked his mother, or put him in the dumpster
    Middle-East accomplishes nothing, why the fuck are we still there
    'Terrorists' is not an enemy, so we dont know who to kill there
    It's like we're rats in a maze, with no cheese in sight
    But although we went in wrong, we must leave it right
    But what is right? It's a civil war, so they'll continue to fight
    Sunni verse Shiite, no peaceful route in sight
    Soldiers, I salute your life and appreciate your service
    But we must leave this war that deviates from purpose
    Think about what we could do with all that money we saved
    Feed children, build schools, instead of funding grenades
    I support medicine, but for money, it has simple aspirations
    So instead of curing whats wrong, they relieve symptoms of patients
    More than a hint of frustration, I'm sick of this nation
    And I don't think there's anyone out there to bring it to salvation

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    Quote Originally Posted by Threyev View Post
    Lyrical non-fiction, demolish competition
    Make em non existent, like honest politicians
    Feeling your style.
    Keep up the excellent work

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    Sit back and rip tracks, damage em to peices
    More Ws than there are Spanish kids named Jesus
    Or Hay-Sus, this gun has the power to replace dudes
    So I flip a coin for your life and let fate choose
    Flow like napalm, so my mic cant stay calm
    Put work in at the office, then I'm getting my cake on
    Life is a highway, fuck having my breaks on
    187, hide under the bridge, till the jake gone
    There are many challenges, that I must take on
    But I've moved the most keys, since Ray gone
    Like Rea-gon, the way I rape the budget
    The fake, they love it, my mistakes they covet
    Who would've thought, that my fate's with either shooter
    Enough food for thought, I produce steak like Peter Luger
    Within my mind, my thoughts are in bars, that they settle behind
    Flow like Jekyll and Hyde, but you can't keep a rebel confined
    They say you hot but they never rewind
    Calmly listen to your bullshit, I'm forever reclined
    These are just bars I wrote quickly on Wednesday
    One day will fill more seats than Wrigley n' Fenway
    With me, my friends stay, loyalty is a must
    I'm the king of this rap shit, royalty you can trust
    Ascent to the top, while attempting to stop
    Anybody in my way, not exempting the cops
    Not pretending I'm hot, I know its a fact, son
    If you slow to attack son, I'll blow at your faction
    Say no to distractions, say yes to achieving
    This girl says she ain't a slut, but the way she dress is decieivng
    I best n' be leaving, I'm blessed when I'm speakin
    Dont even try and say your not impressed when your readin
    I'm Gone

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    I outshine all competition, Imma beastly, crazy spitter
    So having me as ya feature is like having a priest be ya babysitter
    What I've seen has made me bitter, and altered my demeanor
    My food for thought is lethal like feeding chocolate to retrievers
    You call yourself a leader, when it's clear, you can't rap
    Tryna maintain a facade, that people used to fear like anthrax
    I cant stand cats who lead lives, with no actual autonomy
    Ruled by insecurities, which breed lies, and factual anomalies
    It worries me, that greed drives our capital economy
    So the only way that we strive, is through rational dishonesty
    We must fix the flaws in ourselves, before the flaws of the system
    That's a fact, like saying most wars are caused by religion
    Top-dog's my position, to drop jaws is my mission
    The butterfly effect, one action can cause the world to be different
    In the case of apocalypse, my lyrical exhibitions will survive
    This flow will make you put everything you ever listened to, aside
    Recognition will arrive, but it doesn't happen overnight
    Patience is a virtue, and virtue is a habit of the mind
    The ladder I have climbed, but challengers detest
    Yet the matter of whose the best, can now be put to rest

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    Quote Originally Posted by threyev View Post
    he goes to sleep and wakes up in a distant land
    involuntarily embarks on a trip, that he wished he planned
    he sees white sand, umbrellas, fine girls, and tequilla shots
    he wonders where he is, and if its real or not
    hears spanish guitars playing the eagles and marley
    takes a bacardi, and decides he's gonna be in the party
    a blond, with sunglasses asks if he's having fun. Matches
    light the blunt, pass it, girl's behavior is un-passive
    he eels high off medicine but thinks he's gonna get it in
    she seductively grabs his hand, and walks ahead of him
    the sparks she sends flying up his body are faster than instant messaging
    she sings a tune about love and he thinks of sex again
    she says she wrote the song, and that it's her anthem
    she starts talking sexy, calling him handsome
    he can barely stand up, without her assistance
    his eyes close shut, but his ears can still listen
    all he hears is footsteps, no additional sounds
    becomes nearly impossible to lift his feet off the ground
    he falls asleep, and he's found, on the street the next morning
    3 miles away from the beach he was exploring
    his pockets empty, his face swollen and red
    wanders what happened to that girl, and did they roll into bed?
    He realizes he had no clue where he was headin
    so he goes up to a truck to ask for directions
    the driver is a man, next to him a blond
    she said "we're done doing business, its time to move on
    nice verse like ur style

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