Dusk VS. Daliff89 RD. 2

**Eradicate** · 05-01-2009, 10:34 PM

Every vote has to be WELL explained, and should abide by these categories:

Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Creativity
Nameplay

for close calls or nailbiters, additional categories should be considered:

Multis
Wordplay
Vocab

If you feel a vote is unjust or biased let me or Dusk know and we will throw it out accordingly.

For every battle it will be the first to five,
or 3-0 will be considered a KO
and 4-1 will be considered a TKO

To move things along quickly, I think there should only be one verse and NO feeding.
It's not fair if one person get's to feed and the other not.

Every verse should consist of 16 lines.

*Everyone should have 2 days from the time they check-in there battle to drop there verse or they are DQ'd.

Submit your verses to me, and I will post when I have received a verse.

**daliff89** · 05-03-2009, 08:26 PM

verse sent.

**BambinoTTT EgWest** · 05-04-2009, 03:56 PM

I can tell this is gonna be a pretty good battle.......

**oDoUoSoKo** · 05-04-2009, 08:49 PM

sorry for the wait, mine is sent

**oDoUoSoKo** · 05-04-2009, 08:50 PM

fuck, i made a spelling mistake..lmao..ill fix it when erad posts it.

**Eradicate** · 05-04-2009, 08:54 PM

Dusk's Verse:

daliffs about to lose again to me, due to my inscrutable tendencies
and inhuman trend of consuming MC's who contend with me
shit bring up my fuckin battle stats here, go battle that
ill make ya battle raps an axe and make some adam's apple jacks
motherfucker thought he had attacks he could employ to parry
my Second Impact, makes sure no neck is intact, the boy is scary
my team consists of Choi and Terry, Iori is third
King of Writers whos akin to Fightin with glorious words
think of viruses, causin damage to mouths, Gingivitis
pilot of the enterprise in rhymin and daillif's a pirate
bring the violence, lets switch ill be the lyrical anomaly
if he was Dusk, fuck a branch, id be giving him an OLIVE TREE
losing in your case would be a synonym for honesty
cuz honestly, im not winning, im polishing your aunts titties
degrading your honor, you oughtta be permabanned
im removing your autonomy, autopsy confirms the hands

**Eradicate** · 05-04-2009, 08:56 PM

daliff89's Verse:

he's not day, he's not night, this faggot's totally confused...
my throat will leave him bruised, kicked his ass then told him 'it's the shoes'...

he's soapin' up his wounds, i'm perfoming super combinations...
i'ma 'b-rock'ing all night, don't care if you stop complainin'...

i'm in round 2 now, so you know the flow is fatal...
can't be his own man, wasn't Stryfe just a clone of Cable???

i was raised in the apocalypse, on the warpath...
manipulate magnestism, fuck everything this faggot's spittin'...

he's on some Powder shit, need to put the crack down dude...
Method Man of Wu-Corp, i 'blackout too'...

it's Judgment Day, The Hand of God never treats his prey right...
Dusk has eleven thousand posts, he never sees daylight...

forget it Dusk, nobody listens to your dumb threats...
how the fuck are you gonna name yourself after a sunset???

victory always looks better at Dusk...
pleasure's a must, Ralph Macchio, eight is never enough...

**Visionz** · 05-04-2009, 09:22 PM

Dusk got the better flow w/ the lyrics and threw more direct punches
daliff got some nice ones but some I thought were filler too that just didn't hit hard enough

how the fuck are you gonna name yourself after a sunset???....left me feeling "eehhh"

v-Dusk

**Eradicate** · 05-04-2009, 09:36 PM

^I disagree I actually liked that line.

Punchlines - daliff
Personals - tie
Flow - tie
Creativity - tie
Nameplay - daliff
Multis - dusk
Wordplay -
Vocab - dusk

overall, i've seen you both do better verses..
i couldn't decide on the final category.. so i just voted on who took the important one's in this case punchlines & nameplay.

daliff.

good battle

**Drunken Monk** · 05-05-2009, 02:48 AM

Punchlines - daliff
Personals - daliff
Flow - dusk
Creativity - daliff
Nameplay - daliff
Multis -
Wordplay - daliff
Vocab - tie

vote daliff

**brock** · 05-05-2009, 03:03 AM

Punchlines - dusk
Personals - dusk
Flow - dusk
Creativity - dusk
Nameplay - dusk

vote dusk

I knew it wasn't just me, daliff is corny as my shit.
" i was raised in the apocalypse, on the warpath...
manipulate magnestism, fuck everything this faggot's spittin'..."

Not only does absolutely nothing in this line make sense, I would be embarrassed to let anyone know I wrote it.

**BambinoTTT EgWest** · 05-05-2009, 06:06 PM

vocab-dusk
wordplay-daliff
creativity-dusk
personals-daliff
flow-dusk

honestly dude, 'my throat will leave him bruised?', that prolly didn't come out right, right?, and then I noticed that you kinda [maybe not intentionally] bit my line against Visions Unseen about 'he has 11 000 posts, he never sees day light', when I said, 'he ain't never been about his biz/ see what amounts the most, is his eleven thousand posts/ yo he ain't ever been up out his crib/', sorry holmes but my vote goes for Dusk on behalf of those lines, but I feel the Stryfe being a clone of Cable line.....dope battle non-theless....

**THUGNIFICENT** · 05-05-2009, 09:26 PM

punches - draw
personals - dusk
flow - dusk
creativity - draw
vocab - dusk

you both did pretty well, not DOPE but not weak, and i think dusk just edged out daliff, who ran outta steam at the end. both did yall thing, just dusk came a little harded.